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Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 06:28 AM · On: Test Of Family And Friendship

Whew!  They stopped him in time!  I notice that another deal had to be made- Dean giving up the possibility of staying to stop his Dad.  Maybe he never planned on really staying, but it's still sad that he bargained it away.  I'm back to being nice and good....today.

Author's Response:

HI There

Yup they stopped him but as you said Dean again has to give up something that he might want deep down for his family. I'm not being nice and good today, feeling very grumpy....!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 06:26 AM · On: Test Of Family And Friendship

Excellent chapter, i liked your idea about the YED.

Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay

Thanks, it was just one of the things that swirls round in your head!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 17/08/09 02:51 PM · On: Test Of Family And Friendship

I really like your  view  of why John never summoned the YED before, well done! I'm glad that they were able to stop him and make him understand why he couldn't go through with it. Dean burning the copies was great! Looking forward to the next part.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. It was always one of those things that bothered me, that if John knew how to summon the YED why he hadn't?

Glad you liked, Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 08:46 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

So that's why Agnes was feeling dizzy, great chapter, the cliffie not so great lol.

Author's Response:

Hi Lindsay

Yeah that's why Agnes was feeling bad, glad you liked, sorry about the cliffie.....it's a disease, can't help it! lol

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 09:28 PM · On: What My Heart Desires

John is going to summon the demon even if Agnes said he wasn't ready, coming from John it's not a surprise, he gives orders to his sons but orders  it's not for him. Can't wait for the confrontation between Agnes and John.

Author's Response:

HI there

Yes John is being bad at the moment. John's not the best at following orders.

One confrontation coming up. Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 10:28 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

Oh no!  John is doing a VERY bad thing!  That's just....oh NO!  I liked the scene with Agnes and Sam.  I want someone to take care of Dean too.  Yeah, it must be the weather.  I am not particularly nice and good.  I'm working on repenting and getting back on track!

Author's Response:

HI

Yeah John isn't being nice or good at the moment. lol!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 10:23 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

I wanted to smack Sam upside his head (as I'm sure Dean did, too~LOL). Hopefully, Sam will come to see Dean is doing this just for Sam and not some ulterior motive. I hope John isn't going to try and bring YED to him. He definitely is not ready for that. Dean had better drive even faster!!! Great chapter by the way.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah a little smack sometimes does the world of good! John is a little reckless in this but it'll be ok.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 09:51 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

Great stuff, glad everyone is healthy just now, maybe by the time Anges gets through with John things will be a bit different.  Please update again soon..

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Yep, everyone is healthy if not happy at the mo, Agnes though is a tad mad at John!

Hope you liked the update! Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 09:01 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

GAHHHH --- I soooo didnt see that coming... was getting for the whole warm-fuzzy of Sam healing and Dean going up against his dad again,....  you pulled the rug out from under me.!!!! 

Author's Response:

Hi Tree

Glad that I could still surprise you! Warm fuzzy and arguements are on their way though!

CHeers Mary xx

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 08:22 AM · On: What My Heart Desires

Great update Mary.  This is an great story and it is awesome that you can still keep it so tense after 35 chapters!!  Looking forward to the next one.  K.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. Glad that it still has your attention after all this time. I was never meant to be this long!

Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 06:38 AM · On: Anything for my brother

it is so sad that Dean won't stay at the clinic...but I can understand why he won't

Author's Response:

Hi

I know, it is but his reasons are good ones - his family will always come first.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 12:28 PM · On: Anything for my brother

So helping Sam to go at Stanford was what Dean asked to Agnes. Agnes had a dizzy spell, hope it's nothing serious. I'm looking forward to your next update Mary.

Author's Response:

Hi

Yep. Dean wants his brother safe, but he doesn't know that that will never happen, it's sad. Agnes dizzy turns will be explained.

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 09:47 PM · On: Anything for my brother

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the idea of Dean helping Sam get into college even though he really wants him to stay but then again he realizes that Sam would probably be safer in college. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks. I wanted Dean to help Sam even though it kills him a little to do it. He would after all do anything for his little brother.

Cheers mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 02:02 PM · On: Anything for my brother

Hmm...yeah.  I'm worried about Agnes.  And Paul.  And Sam.  I'm just worried.  I am not nice and good, I am mean and grouchy.  But I will be nice and good for you.

Author's Response:

Hi

Lots of worrying there! Frankly it maybe someone that you didn't put on that list that you should be worrying about! *evil grin*

Have a little *hug* to cure your grouchy and mean spell. I feel like that too at the moment, must be the weather! Glad that I can make you want to be nice and good, little cliffie just for you!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 08:46 AM · On: Anything for my brother

Another fantastic update from you, is Agnes starting to get ill? looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks. Not really, I will explain it in the next chapter, something is up but it's not what you think.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/07/09 04:15 PM · On: Truths and Lies

All caught up at last,three excellent chapters. I must be a bit dense as i have no clue what the favour is lol.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Glad you're back and still enjoying! The favour will be obvious once you hear it, don't worry.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/07/09 05:47 PM · On: Truths and Lies

Dean is so aware that John and Agnes lied to him, he tried his best to learn the truth but he failed. What DEan asked to Agnes as a last request, can't wait to know. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah Dean knows there is something that his isn't being told but his request of Agnes is a straight forward on this time.

Cheers mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/09 11:26 AM · On: Truths and Lies

I loved this chapter- especially the description of Dean waking up.... *sighs*

 However- call me a dunce- but I'm not 100% sure what favor Dean is gonna ask Agnes... I have a couple of guesses.. and I'm worried that Agnes knows that Dean knows....

okay- my head hurts now.... heehee



Author's Response:

Hi Tree

Thanks, I loved Dean waking up too, sexist bedhead ever!

It's a straightforward request of Agnes.

*hans aspirin for headache* sorry! :)

Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 24/07/09 07:18 AM · On: Truths and Lies

I am getting suspicious about Agnes and what might be in store for her future.  No, don't tell me!  I was extra super nice and good yesterday!



Author's Response:

HI

Suspicious of Agnes? MMmm. Tee hee.

Glad you were nice and good, I will update soon, promise!

Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 10:51 AM · On: Truths and Lies

So John tried to come up with a lie to Dean so Dean would be protected from the truth but Dean aint buying it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see if my hunch is right about the favor. Hurry back!


Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah, John is trying to protect Dean for now. I'll let you know the favour soon.

Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 09:02 AM · On: Truths and Lies

I really like Julie-Anne and Dean together it is so sad that he wouldn't stay with her and her mom and give "real life" a shot...great update

Author's Response:

Hi there

I do too, she is good for him. He won't stay but it would be nice if he could.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 07:26 PM · On: Careful what you wish for

So a gripping chapter. Thank goodness, the ritual worked. Mary, you did an amazing work with this update, I'm looking forward to your next one.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I thought I'd let something go right for them for a change. Wasn't that nice of me? *laughs*

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 04:42 PM · On: Careful what you wish for

Great day, I can breath now that I've come to the end of the chapter. I was afraid the YED would do some serious mind fracking with Dean. Glad that Sam is ok, for now. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I did toy with the idea of letting the YED loose but I decided against it, Dean needs a little rest for now. Sam is fine for now but Dean has questions now that need answers.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 04:31 PM · On: Walked This Way Before

I'm biting my nails here! I hope Agnes can control what is about to happen. Looking forward to the next chapter with baited breath.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Biting nails is a good sign, hope you like what Agnes does.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 04:28 PM · On: Reach out and I'll be there

Yikes, sounds like the plan to save Sam could be worse than the cure. Wonder  how Dean is going to react when he finds out. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there

It could well be but I might suprise you. Cheers Mary x

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