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Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/10/09 09:47 AM · On: Opening Gambit

OMG!Sam is in the witch's clutches and Dean is under her spell.

Author's Response:

Hey

Yup, the witch has Sam and Dean is in trouble...again! lol

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 11:12 PM · On: Past Pains and Future Fears

So good!

Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you! Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 07:24 PM · On: Past Pains and Future Fears

that was an absolutely fantastic chapter,  I love this story feel free to keep it going as long as you like.

 Agnes is one of my favourite female characters in any fanfic. She is such a perfect character match for Dean.



Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks. I kind of love this story too and I love writing Agnes, so I'm glad that you like her.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 11:40 AM · On: Past Pains and Future Fears

Fantastic chapter, It was very emotional for Dean and I loved the way Agnes looked out for him when he was suffering, Hope they manage to reach Sam before the witch hurts hi too much. Post again soon. 

Author's Response:

Hey Maureen

Thank you. I like that Dean has Agnes too. Sam getting hurt....it's on its way and it isn't going to be just him!

Updating shortly, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 07:10 AM · On: Opening Gambit

More trouble for the Winchester's. i can't wait lol.

Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay

You'd better believe it!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 07:08 AM · On: Opening Gambit

God Mary I love this story.  I thought you were getting to the end and now you've taken off running again - awesome!!  Can't wait for the next update.  K.

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thank you so much! It was getting to the end but my friend had other ideas so....

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 01:16 AM · On: Opening Gambit

Wow! Dean having to relive every nightmare he's ever had to live through, starting with his mothers murder. What a cruel spell. Love to know why Agnes had used it, she is such a cool character. Brilliant chapter can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Not a nice spell at all, poor Dean. Glad that you like Agnes, I do too.

 Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 08:44 PM · On: Opening Gambit

Mary,

poor Dean; my heart skipped a beat when he said Mommy.

and poor Sam, she has him.

hope the next chapter will be up soon.

Renee



Author's Response:

HI Renee

Thanks for the review.

Poor Dean indeed. It's not gonna be good. Sam is in a little trouble as well.

Will update shortly, Mary xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 02:15 PM · On: Opening Gambit

Is it wrong that my heart was actually pounding when the door flew open and Dean's bloody body fell into John's arms??? I'm such a sucker for Dean!whump... the sheer promise of Sam and John going at each other again and him intervening made me want to smack both those Winchester boys around... and now- Dean having to relieve his worst nightmares--- and he's painted in Sam's blood- and knowing that Agnes' mom is at the root of this... yikes... dude- I hope the heck you're handcuffed to the computer- cause I swear if you update ANYTHING other than this story- I might seriously have to ban you from UnGen... ok- thats a bit of an exageration... cause that would only spite me - lol.... but hurry up and write.... (love this story Mary!)

Author's Response:

Hi there

That's the second time you've threatened me with dis-memberment on this story! lol. Hope that's a good sign!

My poor hubby is a UnGen widow as it is, but I really want to get this finished, even if I do have to leave my other stories for just a little while. I know how it ends, have done since I started writing the dang thing, but can I get it to got there!

More whump on it's way for both boys!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 12:03 PM · On: Opening Gambit

Loving it!

Author's Response: Thank you, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 09:47 AM · On: Opening Gambit

Fantastic chapter, Poor Sam, being taken by the witch and poor Dean, with the amount of things Dean's been through lets hope he doesn't have too many nightmares to relive.  How are they going to find the witch and Sam?  Will John be able to curb his temper and stay with Dean?   Please post again soon, Can't wait. Thanks....

Author's Response:

HI there

Yup, Mommy Kennedy has got our Sam and Dean isn't escaping her touch either. I have a plan for them to find her! Watch this space!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/10/09 12:27 PM · On: Ties That Bind

Yikes! I figured the story was going to be ending and then wham! What does Agnes's mother have planned for the Winchesters? I can't wait to fin out!!!


Author's Response:

Hi there

It was supposed to be ending but then this idea got in there! All will be revealed soon!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 02:55 PM · On: Ties That Bind

OMG! The witch who's after the Winchester is Agnes mother, what a twist, I didn't see this coming. Terrific chapter Mary, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yup, Agnes' mommy is not very happy with our boys or her girl for that matter!

Thanks, Mary

Reviewer: PenguinLova0720 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 07:07 PM · On: Ties That Bind

Wonderful story so far! Surprising twist with the witch being Agnes's mother, wasn't expecting that. Very interested on the old witch's agenda and what happens when eveyone meets up. Can't wait for more :)

 

~Vicky



Author's Response:

Hey Vicky

Glad you liked the twist! Revenge is the main agenda, WInchester's beware!

Mary x

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 03:09 PM · On: Ties That Bind

exciting, looking forward to the next update!

Corina



Author's Response: Thank you, Mary xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 01:26 PM · On: Ties That Bind

First- I almost NEVER read WIPS this long- but I'm horribly addicted to this one and another here on UnGen. Second, I thought for a second- this chapter was gonna be the last- so imagine my excitement when it now seems like it isn't.

And then.... I was nearly squeeing- and I DO NOT easily squee... when not only did you give us the return threat of another witch- but a super powerful head witch- but then- you twisted the evil cliffie knife up a notch- and made it Agnes' MOM!!!!!!

My toes are tingling with excitement over that one!... I simply cant wait till the next chapter comes out now... Totally envisioning a huge show-down between them... especially after all the hints of their relationship Agnes shared with Dean. Oooh and what will the evil withc try to do to Dean? not to mention the rest of the Winchester boys.... *is sooo excited*  Write faster Mary!!!



Author's Response:

Hey

I never usual write things this long - it was supposed to end after ch10! lol I think you and I are reading the same other WIP - mal's per chance?

A near squee from the Tree! High praise indeed. If I was bring in another witch it really had to be Agnes' mom - needs to be someone that can match her.

No pressure on me now then is there! I feel like Dean in S5 - everyone looking to me for answers...wait....I'm writing it so that much mean that I have them!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 10:41 AM · On: Ties That Bind

Yes, more excitement, that was a great chapter,  Can't wait for more, to see what the witch has in mind for the Winchesters. Update again soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks, yes a little bit more whump to finish with!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 08:32 AM · On: Ties That Bind

nice to see that Dean is keeping in contact with Julie and Agnes....good update

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, he's not reached the cut everybody that you care for out of your life stage yet!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 08:17 AM · On: Ties That Bind

Wow , Agnes's mother, nice twist to the story, can't wait to find out more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. Glad you liked. Mary xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 02:44 PM · On: Dean And Julie-Anne

ok- that was hot- tender too and kinda sweet and a little sad... and I'm glad that it wasnt a typical love em and leave em ending for Dean... after everything he's been through- I'm glad that he could know something kinda and loving in JulieAnne... Not a big Savage Garden fan- but I knew that song and it did fit the moment... even if I could sense the awkwardness of Dean swaying to it... heehee... gret chapter hun!!!

Author's Response:

Hey Tree

Thanks! I wanted a little steam but a little tender too, glad you think I managed it. Didn't want it to be a 'I love you' soppy thing, not their style at all. Julie-Anne really loves Dean and she wanted him to know it before he left without tying him into wanting to stay.

Not really into Savage Garden either but the song just caught my attention and I liked how the words fitted them. Yeah and Dean + dancing? Definitely = awkward swaying. You got that to a T!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 01:56 PM · On: Dean And Julie-Anne

WOO!  Very sexy!  Still being nice and good!

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thank you, I was aiming for that! I noticed that you'd been good!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 08:48 AM · On: Dean And Julie-Anne

What a beautifuly written chapter, awww it was lovely.



Author's Response:

HI Lindsay

Thank you so much! I had fun with this chapter, I wanted a little hot but some sweet and tender too!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 09:32 PM · On: Dean And Julie-Anne

Nope, Dean will never forget his last night with Julie-Anne. Lovely chapter Mary.

Author's Response:

HI

No, that he will not, she made sure of that!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 01:03 PM · On: Before You Go

Agnes tricked Dean and he had no choice but pass the test, can't wait to know his score. John hasn't changed, he still barking his orders to Sam and Dean was a little irritated with him but not for long, I enjoyed the banter between them about hot and cold shower, lol.

Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah she knew that he would go with Sam and used that. Score will be up soon.

Glad you liked the little banter at the end! Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 09:20 AM · On: Dean And Julie-Anne

That was so not like dean at all, Getting naked and everything. Dancing, I think I prefer the old Dean,  not used to this new side of him.,  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey Maureen

I was kind of trying to show that Dean really does care for Julie-Anne and would do anything she asked.

I thinkk Dean getting naked for the ladies is probably something that he's done before though! He was moving to the song but I was thinking more of an awkward shuffle rather than any actual dancing! lol.

Thanks, Mary x

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