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Reviews For Fight To The Death
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 22/02/10 11:14 AM · On: On This Road Forever More

This was great.  Loved it and thank you

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks! Glad you liked, mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/02/10 06:09 AM · On: On This Road Forever More

Great ending, loved the closure for Julie-Anne and the tie into the pilot, so well done. I enjoyed the ride, the Winchester journey thanks to you Mary, you did an amazing work.

 



Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you. Needed to tie JA storyline off but you never know, she may be back.

Thanks for sticking with me on this one, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 06:24 PM · On: On This Road Forever More

Wow that was an interesting final chapter, Julie-Anne got married.  Why would the YED say Dean should have let Sam burn, thought he wanted Sam alive?  It was a really exciting story and I enjoyed reading it. 

Author's Response:

Hey

Yeah, I wanted her out of the picture but still there if I decide to write another. YED was a little tongue in cheek there, knowing what he had in store for the younger Winchester and the heartache that he was going to cuse them both.

Thanks for stickimg with this, until next time, Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 03:00 PM · On: On This Road Forever More

Wow, all done, thanks for a brilliant story, it's being one hell of a ride and i've loved every minute of it.

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks my dear. It has been a hell of a ride and a long one!

Take care, Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 02:05 PM · On: On This Road Forever More

GREAT tie in to the pilot!  Good job on a story well told!  Hooray!!!  Frankly, I thought you'd have to kill of both Agnes and Julie-Ann (which would really upset me because my name is Julie Ann).  I'm glad that you found away to delicately remove them from the picture for now, but still leave them alive and out there to run into in future stories!  

I now officially retire my nice and good hat.  It's back to mean and grouchy for me....no, seriously, thank you for putting up with my silliness.  I look forward to your other stories and catching up with ones I've fallen behind on!  Well done, lady!



Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you my dear. I toyed with killing Agnes but I just couldn't and then the idea hit me for the sequel and so I pulled them aside for now.

I will miss you being nice and good, but since I am grouchy and mean too I can understand the strain! lol Bet you wished you had picked another story, this turned into a little epic!

I need to catch up with writing my others first! See ya, Mary xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 11:45 AM · On: On This Road Forever More

Mary,

Another excellent story. 

Agnes what a great character.  i love how she protected Dean and took care of him.

she sure could put John in his place.

Julie-Ann another great character. Dean loving her but not enough to leave his family.

John and Sam fighting all of the time and Dean the constant peace keeper.

My favorite is Dean and always will be.

again great job.

Renee



Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you. I loved Agnes and Julie-Anne they were good fun to write and they both loved Dean in their own way. I love him too!

Cheers, Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 10:13 AM · On: On This Road Forever More

Really enjoyed the story, loved how you wrapped it all up.  good job

Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you, glad you enjoy the ride!

Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 09:29 AM · On: On This Road Forever More

Fantastic story!! Loved how you added a bit of Agnes and Julie-Anne into the pilot. Julie-Anne seems to be Dean's one true love. It was kinda sad and poignant that Dean still thinks of Julie-Anne. I hope she is safe now that she is married. I thought it spoke volumes of Dean's true feelings when he was afraid the "demon" might read his feelings about her. Kinda creepy there at the end with YED watching all the Winchesters. Looking forward to your next story, especially if it is a sequel!! 



Author's Response:

Hey

I couldn't kill them off but I couldn't have them getting involved either. I have an idea for taking this on from S5 but I have other things to finish first before I even think about it.

Thanks for your support, Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 09:14 AM · On: Getting To It.

I hate to think of Dean as being hungry, cold, lonely, and loosing weight. Makes me sad. I'm glad that Dean got to far before he realized Sam had slipped him money. Dean would have been in dire straights if he hadn't. I really am mad at John here. I just want to bitch slap him! I'm glad that he had a fairly nice visit with Sam, and then with Julie-Anne. Looking forward to the last part. I will be sad to see this story come to an end.

Author's Response:

Hey

I don't want my Dean like that either. I liked the visit with Sam and John was just John, hey you're back.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 19/02/10 05:39 PM · On: On This Road Forever More

thankyou for a truly awesome story and I love the way you tied the ending in with cannon. Brilliant job

Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you for sticking with it! Glad you liked this huge epic that I somehow wrote, Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 12/02/10 11:24 PM · On: Getting To It.

I liked Dean and Sam's reunion very much.  Part of me wishes Dean had stayed.  Sigh.  I'm very tired but still nice and good!

Author's Response:

Hey Julie

Thanks, I had fun with that, it was sweet to write.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 12/02/10 05:19 PM · On: Getting To It.

Loved this chapter. Dean staying at Sam's place and then meeting up with Julie-Anne, awesome. One chapter to go, I'm looking forward to it.

Author's Response:

Hey

thank you. Glad you liked. Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/02/10 11:00 AM · On: Getting To It.

Great update, the visit to Sam was nice,  and the meet with Julie-Anne.   So are John and Dean back to hunting together?  More soon, Please.

Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you, I liked the boys together too. Yeah, John and Dean are back to hunting.

Thanks, Maureen

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/02/10 08:42 AM · On: Getting To It.

I liked this chapter, i loved the part where Dean stayed at Sam's, looking forward to the epilogue.

Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks, that was my fav. part too!

Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/02/10 02:31 PM · On: Lonely Is The Man

This was a brilliant chapter, so painful and emotional, looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks Lindsay

I wasn't too sure if I'd overcooked it slightly but I remember how I felt when my best friend left for the army. I was so upset as we did everything together and I really missed her.

Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 05/02/10 04:23 AM · On: Lonely Is The Man

Yikes, poor Dean almost ready to kill himself...I hope that Sam treats him right at the school, but i have a horrible feeling he won't...great update

Author's Response:

Hey there

Yup he's a little low but he'll get there. Sam will be as nice to Dean as he can be.

Thanks, mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 10:56 PM · On: Lonely Is The Man

Hey!  Dean ended up in my neck of the woods!  For a whole week!  WOOT!  I would daydream about that, but I'm being nice and good.  

Author's Response:

Hey

Lucky you! I meant that honest! :)

It's ok to daydream, just PG it and you'll still be nice and good!

Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 09:36 PM · On: Lonely Is The Man

What a treat, two chapters back to back. Dean didn't take well Sam leaving for Stanford and a new life. Mary, loved your explanation why SAm didn't call Dean. I'm looking forward for the final chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey

Yup, on a roll. Glad you liked Sam's reasons for not calling I didn't want to paint him completely black and he would have worried about rubbing Dean's nose in it I think.

Thanks, mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 05:43 PM · On: Lonely Is The Man

That was so sad, poor Dean,   both John and Sam are heartless, but especially Sam , after saying he'd call, he never did, because it would spoil his little normal life.  He's not on my Christmas list.  More soon Please.

Author's Response:

Hey Maureen

Thanks. They are self centred, if only they could show how they do care, it frustates!

Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 04:58 PM · On: Lonely Is The Man

How terribly sad. It just kills me that Dean has such a low self worth. He is headed for something bad here if he doesn't slow down and figure out that he is strong, brave, and worthy person. I hope John hooks up with him soon, Dean shouldn't be spending so much time alone. I guess Sam has settled so much into  his new life he is kinda afraid to contact his old life. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response:

Hey there

Dean needed at that point to see his worth, he just never managed it. Sam and his brother up next and then it's finished.

Mary xx

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 03/02/10 06:23 AM · On: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free

Oh Sam want to wring your neck...why couldn't you have called your brother when you were at Stanford...great update

Author's Response:

Hey there

Yeah, a phone call would have meant a lot. Thanks

Mary xx

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 02/02/10 11:29 AM · On: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free

That was soooo good!  thank you


Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks! Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/10 09:05 AM · On: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free

Awww, so very sad,sniff. Chapter 54 wow just noticed how long this story has become and i'm still loving it. 

Author's Response:

Hey there

 It was a little sad. Poor Dean, he's down but he's not out.

Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 11:45 PM · On: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free

Awwww....*sniff*  I'm all sniffly and can't talk right now.....*sniff*

Author's Response:

Hey

Sorry honey, it'll be better in the next one. *hands hanky*

Mary xx

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 11:24 PM · On: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free

I knew I shouldn't have read this ten minutes before heading out to work! I don't know how I'm going to explain my red eyes. I don't think they'll believe I was crying over a supernatural story. excellent job

Author's Response:

Hey there

Sorry about that! I do that too but the people in my work just nod their heads knowingly! lol

Mary xx

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