Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/07/09 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thank you for the great read, i loved this story.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ok, seriously awesome. Dean giving Sam the Wheaties at the end was just priceless. And I've got to say, I'm so relieved that Jim made it out of there alive. Your track record of killing everyone off didn't inspire me with much confidence that he'd make it -- which would have been a shame, since he was such an awesome character. Great story. :)
Author's Response: Wow- you really chewed through this one... Glad you liked it... And you're right- my track record for killing off characters is pretty high... sorry... but I liked Jim too- might have to bring him back at some point... But this was like the first longer chapter fic I'd ever written and had the nerve to post- in retrospect- there's lots of things I might have written differently. Thanks for taking the time to check it out. T
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Holy crap! I actually did expect her to live. At least, if she'd been Dean's love interest she probably would have lived. Sam's tend to have worse odds of making it out alive. You've got a dark streak...
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
Poor puppies!!! I am really enjoying this story (slaughtered dogs notwitstanding).
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you. Just sorry it has taken me so long to find it. I suppose I can thank it on season 4. I'm desperately trying to avoid season 4 spoilers but still want to enjoy the site, so I decided old stories were the way to go. Thanks again Tree for this story and all your work on the site.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
You are just so wicked. Poor poor Terri. You may not have been able to keep her as 'love interest' but did she have to die? Couldn't she have just been revolted by Sam's job enough to take her out of the equation? But no I guess not.
Author's Response: Awww Midge- come on- the girl just has to die in these things- doesnt she? LOL... And poor Sam- so focused on finding his brother- he didnt need the distraction... heehee Actually- let's face it- I'm just evil and was just looking for a reason ( or person) for DemonSherrifSimansky to slaughter... and I just love GuiltySam0 LOL Thanks so much for dusting off this one and reading it...
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
Favourite line: "‘I’m definitely thinking with my downstairs brain – Need to focus here!’" So very Dean even if it was Sam that thought it. And I love that Dean has his knife even if Jim is uncomfortable with it. It goes without saying, I'm enjoying this story immensely.
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow! Awesome. I really liked the flashbacks. They really added to the characters and the story. And my favorite line was Dean's, "...not like some old woman with a walker." LOL ;)
Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Reviewer: supernatch (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 7
Another masterpiece! Totally thrilling. You write the boys so accurately. Bravo to you! Kate
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very well captivated, and I liked it. Bett than a rated 10, more like a 20.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
First time I read this I was'nt a member so didn't review but need to put that right. This is a thrill, so well described, I love Jim, and the whole memory loss plot. Although I'v read a few ML it's rarely done this well. Great story, pleased to add to my favourites.
Author's Response: Bullet- thanks very much- that's very kind of you. Yes- there are a bunch of ML's done now- not so many when Blank first came out. But I'm glad you liked it enough to be a favorite. Thanks much for taking the time to come back- that was extra special!
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
aww that was so sweet! Killer story...literally. I'm so happy you decided not to kill Jim too coz you know...that's a heck of a body count. But I really liked it and the wheaties thing...just priceless.
Author's Response: Thanks Magos - glad you liked it and yeah- I do have a tendency to high body counts- lol. Actually, one of my favorite bits I've ever wrote was that Wheaties bit - thanks again!
Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good first chapter!!! Did you write as if everythign from season1/season 2 has happened but Dad is still alive???? keep reading i want to know what´s going on!!
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
After all that "hey I remember this" chatter, I had a near panic attack when you shot Jim. I literally said "no friggin' WAY she just killed him"... thank GOD. I enjoyed this one, Tree. I liked that Sam had his own struggle (even though he pretty much lost everyone he was with), I really liked Dean's having to remember who he was. I can't imagine how freaky that might have been to not remember anything and then to have WINCHESTER memories... gah. Talk about the things nightmares are made of. I liked that Jim was a 'Nam Vet. It gave him layers and character more involved than just being a retiree who wanted to live the life of a fisherman. I liked that Dean was made to memorize all the stuff about the demons -- and that he was the one to direct Sam to where to find the passage that would help them defeat the demon. I wish we would have been able to see that big show down -- that would have been cool. But you ended it with humor, and that was a nice touch. I'm glad I re-stumbled on this one. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
I was gonna wait until I got to the end to review because I am having the weirdest sense of deja vu while reading this... did you post it over on ff.net? I don't remember the beginning, the cabin, the search for the cross, or the storm and Dean falling into the river -- but I remember everything from where (ironically enough) Dean stopped remembering. :) I'm eating it up, though, because as I remember more I'm like -- oh YEAH! this is the one where... and I read voraciously until I get to the part I'm remembering. I had to pause here because of the Indiana Jones line... about Dean being named after Jim's dog "Nick"... so great! I laughed out loud at that line. Okay, I'm gonna keep going, but I just had to say that this is a gem and I'm so glad I found it again -- even though I can't remember where I saw it before. :)
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 7
Just "discovered" this great story. You do a great job capturing the boys. Thanks for skipping Terri's obligatory death scene, and thanks for not killing Jim. I really liked how you had Dean's memory come back in little snatches. Pastor Jim calling Dean DJ was also a really nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks lam - I very glad you liked it. I don't have the opportunity to write much for here because the Virtual Season keeps me pretty busy. So when someone likes a story - it means a lot to me.
Reviewer: montez (Signed) · Date: 23/03/07 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 7
awesome story, Was surprised and glad that Jim survived. Like the emotion of it.
Author's Response: Thanks Montez - Glad you enjoyed it. It was the very first SN fic I ever had the guts to post. Thanks for finding it.
Reviewer: auroradannon (Signed) · Date: 22/01/07 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
I enjoyed this one. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks Aurora - btw- I love Willow!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Dean with amnesia????!!! What fun! I hope the writers from Supernatural get on to this. I would love to see it on the screen. Onwards and upwards!
Author's Response: Well- I hope you enjoy the rest Ciel!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Demon-hunting 101! LOL! Really enjoyed this chapter, I'm reading on.
Author's Response: Thanks again Ciel - I really had fun writing this story -especially one of the characters I created - he was a blast. Hope u enjoy it.
Reviewer: tycora (Signed) · Date: 14/01/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
What can I say, I really like it! Thanks for sharing it. Please keep going. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks Tycora - Glad you liked it. I dont have much out there just yet- but I'm working on it.
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