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Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

Very cool ending. I liked that Martha waited until they found Elizabeth to die. great job with the story, Dee. bambers;)

Author's Response: I glad you liked it. Working on another. Hope to have it up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It helps the ego. Dee

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Damn, poor Dean keeps getting the crap smacked out of him by this beast. You're and evil girl. Nice evil cliffie!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really like how connected Dean feels to Lizie. It's very cool how you've worked the black horse they saw into Owen's death. moving on to the next chappy. bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

great backstory into the family of the possible girl in the well. Hopefully Dean doesn't get hurt any worse when he goes after the black spirit. moving on to the next chappy. bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Very insteresting with the girl in the well who's afriad of the black horse. You have me worried about poor Dean now. Another good evil cliffie. bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start, Dee....great little evil cliffie at the end. I am wondering what this black horse really is, although I do have my suspicions. Bambers;)

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/09 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

good job; i was hoping for more interaction with Elizabeth and Dean.
but over all nice job.
Renee

Author's Response: I didn't think of that. I may have to do a rewrite. Thanks for the idea. D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

I will end Dean? Surely not!! Please say it aint so! I hope Sam can strike the match fast and burn the sucker before Dean gets his head smashed it!

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh no! Not poor Dean again. Haha. Update soon! :)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/04/09 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this chapter. It bridges what has happened before to what will happen next. I liked Mrs. Sweeney and hope they can help with Lizzie. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I didn't realize an old woman would stir up such reactions. Several people liked her. Thanks for reading. :) D

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter, Hope to see Dean up and about soon. Kicking butt. Please update soon.

Author's Response: don't worry. Dean will be own old Dean soon enough. Thanks for reading. :) D

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

Dee,
can't wait to know more about Elizabeth.
lets get Dean up and moving and the hunt underway.
hope the next chapter will be soon.
also hope everything is all right with you and your family.
Renee

Author's Response: I only hope you like what I have plan with Elizabeth. And don't worry, Dean will be back at hunting soon, sort of :) Thank for asking about my family. Things are much better now, but it was a rough week. Dee :)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sam may have to get Dean to a hospital despite the danger of being discovered who they are. Really worried here about Dean. Wonder who the girl spirit is in the well. I'm sure she has something to do with the black beasty. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Hope you like what I did in Chapter 3. thanks for reading. :) D

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

Fantastic story so far, poor Dean always getting hurt to protect Sam, please update again soon looking forward to it.

Author's Response: DOn't know what it is about hurting Dean, but I like to. :) thanks for reading. D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 08/03/09 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yowza! You really left us with a cliff hanger, didn't you? I'm on pins and needles here, waiting to see how Dean is and what will Sammy do to get his brother out of there. And what is the horse? A spirit? Something else? I can't wait to find out, so please hurry back with part 2!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy Chapter 2. I will say I have several twist and turns ahead. :)

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 08/03/09 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

No, how could you leave it there. Loved this first chapter, just please don't leave me waiting too long to find out whats happened to Dean and whether Sam is going to be able to help him. x

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're liking it. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. :)

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