Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 20/07/09 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

What can I say I love your stories.... your series... This one in particular I loved because of the way it told their simultaneous.... The last two chapters were both emotional and revealing.  Look forward to reading more.... although I wished that the boys had met Jake and Ben I do think that showing how their roads crossed all those years before.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, forgot.....Excellent banner Sojourner!!!

Author's Response: I'll be sure she gets the message, thanks.

Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 27/06/09 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

I loved this chapter!! I thought you allowing the YED to see Dean and Sam through Jake and Ben was a cool move. There are three lines that I loved and also broke my heart.

They were:
"A mother who offered Sam to a demon and a father whose parting words were to put down that same son."
This make my heart break for Sam and glad he has Dean who believes in him.

"All these things were done with consequences put on two small boys, with no forethought as to what would become of the lives of the men they grew into."
WOW! That just blew me away, and certainly broke my heart for what they are going through now on the show and coming in season 5.

"His shoulders felt heavy, actions taken before he and Sam were ever born and now left him to deal with and put right."
Dean once again being big brother and taking on all the responsibility. I think this is how we will see him in Season 5. Taking care of Sam and stopping the apocalypse. We love him that way!!

Thanks for a great chapter! I look forward to the next one.

 

Author's Response: Thank you so very much.

Reviewer: maryf (Signed) · Date: 13/03/09 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi guys,

Good story. I like it .

C'ant wait for the next chaps.

Bye.

maryf 

 

 

 

Author's Response: Thank you!