Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 24/05/09 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 20
Sorry for being late with my reviews, I was away and happy to get three chapters to read in a row now. Mal, this is writing at top level! Especially chapter 18 had me choking up. I so love this story. Totally unexpected twist with Sam going missing now. And somehow I don't think Dean will just get out of bed and start walking again without problems. However he is determined to do that. Please update soon. I am addicted :)
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so! I must admit, I actually held out in updating til I knew you'd read ...
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 22/05/09 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 20
Yeah!! Cas came through for him, so happy:) Can't wait to find out whats happened with Sam. I'm really loving this fic, see you on the flip side B xx
Author's Response: Mmm. Castiel is very aware of his duties. He s too easily torn...
Reviewer: crashing_nightingales (Signed) · Date: 21/05/09 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
Ah, thank you so much that Castiel fixed him! You had me worried there for a couple of chapters, but I'm glad I kept reading! I've been lurking for a long time now, but these last two chapters made me come out of hiding! And what happened to Sam at the end of last chapter? I'm dying to know whether or not Sam's okay. Please tell me that Lilith doesn't happen to be involved in this equation.
Author's Response: I could never allow a story line that had Dean remain diminished. It's just not Dean....
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 20
Castiel thought by himself and healed Dean. Dean is still in pain but he'll recovery, great news. Now, the bad news, who has Sam and where is he. Amazing story so far Mal, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane. Dean wasn't meant to live that way.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
All I can say is - Thank God you fixed him.
Author's Response: Hey, Cas fixed him., I'm just the narrator...ml
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 20
So glad that it was Cas that healed Dean,and now we have just got to find Sam. Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words---ml
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 20
Mal, This was just wonderful, can't say more than that. Now.....what did you do to Sam!??? Mary x
Author's Response: Mary---I'm just the narrator here, lol. It ain't me affecting Samuel now.....ml
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 20
YAY!!!! I knew Castiel would come to the rescue... what an awesome ending... I think I was silently cheering... Now Dean can go save Sam... Cause I'm sure not liking where he is and who I think has him... Great chap Mal!
Author's Response: Silently?? I expect nothing less than full, vocal cheering, lol---ml
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Its great that Dean is going to be able to drive his baby again but it's not the same as him being whole again, the trickster has to come back and fix it, How is he suppose to help Sam when he's paralysed'Great chapter..
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 19
Looks like Sam's in trouble, it's great that Dean can drive his beloved Impala again, Bobby's fantastic.
Author's Response: The hand controls will have a greater emotional effect than anything. It pulls him out of himself somewhat.
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
Hi Mal Great update. I just love your Bobby, he's so real and just so....Bobby! The hand controls are a great idea. What are you gonna do to Sam?? Little evil cliffie snuck in there between all the Bobby goodness! Hurry back please, Mary xx
Author's Response: Hey Mary Thanks for commenting--I'm a big Bobby fan.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was cool what Bobby bought for Dean, Dean driving his baby again is already half of his healing. No!Sam is in trouble, who got him. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Bobby understands the bond Dean holds with the car. It's home, It's John, it's freedom.
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 19
Much as it hurts to read of Dean in this state, this is a very good story -- Now I'm agog to find out who that woman is with Sam! -- Maybe Ruby, in an unassuming meatsuit?? - Hmm -- Good read!
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!---ml
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 18
Hi Mal What can I say! Gorgeous chapter. I love Bobby, and his little chat with Dean was just perfect in everyway. His concern and love shone through it, loved it. And then came Sam, and I'm glad that the boys are reconciled and as for this line - but I need you here with me. I need to know I can count on you, despite all the heavy stuff on the horizon. I have too much to deal with right now without worrying that you're gonna take off and go kamikaze against Lilith because you feel guilty over me. You've gotta promise that..." - they should have used that one in the show! More please! Mary xx
Author's Response: Thanks, Mary!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 18
I'm so glad, the brotherly bond's restored, communication was the key. That would be a perfect time for Castiel to show up and get Dean better. Can't wait to know what's next.
Author's Response: Thanks again, Oceane---ml
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 18
A brilliant chapter, Bobby's talk to Dean was perfect, so like Bobby, it's good the boy's are talking again.
Author's Response: I need a bumper sticker: I heart Bobby Singer.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 18
Well, at least Sam came back and saved Dean from going downhill any further, Now has Anna convinced Castiel to get his finger out and help? Post again soon....
Author's Response: Anna has a very convincing manner.....
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 18
This was just an incredible chapter... I dont think there's anything I love more than the relationship between Dean and Bobby. The conversation between them was crafted so beautifully - you really captured Bobby's voice- I could hear it in my head, see him slam the ballcap on the floor- could picture the look on his face. It was just so perfect... Then Sam came back- and the reactions were just so in character for both of them. I was smiling broadly by the end- that glimmer of hope that everything was going to be alright between them once again- I also loved the scene with Castiel and Anna... loved that it looks like she finally got through to him ( wish that would happen on the show). Again- just a great chapter... I figure you arent done with it yet- so I cant wait to see where its going now.
Author's Response: Thanks, Tree. I try to hear the conversations myself, so that they ring true...ml
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 11/05/09 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter -- the boys can be so frustrating.
Author's Response: Yeah, but that's the beauty of it too...ml
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/05/09 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
Good to see an update. I'm so glad you are very frequent in posting new chapters, I couldn't stand long waits, I'm addicted to this story... Gosh Dean, he is giving up... I want to shake him as well but then again I can understand him so much. Similar experience of a friend... Will Anna be able able to offer Castiel advice, perspective, guidance? I loved the way you portrayed Cas. As always looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hey. Sad to hear you know someone in that position. Dean, in my imagination, could handle any threat with bravery and strength, but when robbed permanently of his physical stamina, I could see him crumbling.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/05/09 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 17
I hope things start inproving for Dean or he's not going to survive. More soon Please.
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so. More coming---ml
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/05/09 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter, i hope Anna can help or that Sam can find the trickster.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Anna should have some wisdom for Cas.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 17
Dean is not getting better, his will to fight is leaving him. I hope that Sam'll find the trickster. With Castiel doubting himself and asking Anna for guidance, maybe there're hope. Heartwrenching chapter, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks as always, Oceane
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
lovely chapter- showing all the individual reactions to what was going on... I adore Ellen and David together.. loved fatherly Bobby... and I'm hoping that the ending you provided is a hint that there might be some Castiel/Anna interaction to come in the next chapter... Great chapter as always!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tree. I think you just may hear from Anna...
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 16
Mal, WOW; Dean breaking down like that and Bobby not being able to handle it. this chapter had me in tears. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so. And sorry for the tears.....
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