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Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 33

I hope that was Castiel coming to end that - will, I won't call her what I want to call her because it isn't a nice word.            Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Ruby is a very bad girl....

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 33

Wow! A jaw-dropping chapter! Holy crap, I loved that Castiel finally shut Uriel up. What an intense conversation. Oh man, why did I feel that Dean might run into trouble again? This time there is no Trickster to set things right. But maybe Bobby comes to the rescue or Castiel? What a cliffhanger! Argh, Dean hang in there!!!

Author's Response: Uriel had tha coming!  Don't fret for Dean,  though,  he's surrounded by good people--ml

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 32

Short but perfect - the way you let Bobby and Dean interact is just great1

Author's Response: thanks,  I always worry that any given chapter is boring or...

Reviewer: JLE (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 33

My god you love to kick the crap out of Dean!  I love that about your fics!  Looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Dean.



Author's Response: ..waddya mean..?

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 33

Yeah, I know. I email you about the fic and then don't review. I'm so sorry. But, I've caught up now and gotta tell you, I'm loving it. Castiel finally getting out from under Uriel's influence. And Ruby! OMG, what a bitch. But Cas to the rescue, right? What's sad though, is I'm not sure if Sam would go back to her or not if Dean and Bobby died, even knowing what he now knows.

Author's Response: Mmm...poor Sam doesn't know up from down.  Dean does,  but his way of offering that knowledge is more often than not a harangue rather  than an enlightenment....

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 32

Bobby talked so well to Dean. I don't like the idea of Dean going for a ride, alone, hope nothing'll happen to him. Amazing work Mal, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks as always,  Oceane.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 32

Or dear, should Dean have gone off by himself Is something going to happen?  Looking forward to the next chapter. Great stuff...

Author's Response: Thanks for saying so.  But Dean should be able to take a simple drive without experiencing mayhem,  shouldn't he...?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 32

Wow!  You gave Bobby some great advice for Dean.  And seeing the real core of Dean's pain is that he can't hold his family together was so sad.  this has been an incredible story and I think I like the last two chapter best of all because of the insight it shows into the relationship between Sam, Dean and Bobby.

Author's Response: Thanks.  Wouldn't it be a perfect world if we all had a Bobby...

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 31

Sam tried to excuse what he did to Dean by blaming the Trickster, it's too easy. After what Dean told him, I think Sam realized the enormity of what he did. Hoping for forgiveness and reconciliation. What an amazing story Mal, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks,  Oceane.  I think Sam will figure it out.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 31

Wow..... I love that Dean said his peace with Sam... in the real show- he's danced around it and buried it from as far back as Asylum... nice that Sam got to hear the cold hard truth....

Love that you wrapped the Trickster's motives into this one... that he was still doing his usual "take Sam down a peg" kinda thing... Didnt expect that he was going after Castiel too- but that made perfect sense.

 I must admit that I thought this story was over once everyone woke up.. but I'm SOOOOO glad it hasnt. The real aftermath has been delicious!



Author's Response: I need Dean Winchester to vent.  And Trickster--I love that creation...not sure he's ultimately a villain...thanks--ml

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 31

Wow!  What a powerful chapter!  It revealed so much about each character.  I had to re-read it. 

"None of them divulged just what they were honouring, but the sentiment was fervent."  A very intriguing observation!

 



Author's Response: Thanks for saying so.  I thrive on feedback.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 30

"It was alot easier to try to pursue your dubious innocence than face your guilt."  What a profound statement!  I had to stop and ponder it for a few minutes.

Dean's reflections on the dream were thought-provoking.  Interesting that he came to the conclusion that his nine lives were up and Sam would be the cause of his destruction.

I like that you give Castiel human emotions of joy and weariness.  It shows that we're not that different from angels.



Author's Response: I know Castiel is deeply affected.  I hope he is shown in that light in future...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 31

Oh Sam, I somehow feel sorry for him, but then again he wanted to turn against his brother and that's just awful. I so understand Dean, however I hope he does forgive Sam and they find a way out of this together. More please soon!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 30

I loved the way you described the drive. I could almost feel  the mood the brothers were in. Perfect chapter - what else can I say? :)

Author's Response: Thank you...love hearing it.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 31

A fantastic chapter, surely Dean will forgive Sam soon, as Bobby says he always does.



Author's Response: You know he will.  It's his programming after all...

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 31

Fantastic, way to go Dean, finally letting all that anger rip through him and tell Sam what he really thinks,  What did Sam expect, that Dean would hug and forgive him?  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: In my opinion,  Dean Winchester is entitled to a few more outbursts against his fate.

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 31

Wow. Sam, oh Sam. Why does this seem to be an ongoing thing with him? The mad doctor ghost made me do/say those things, but never mind that I thought those things. The Siren made me say those things but never mind that I was thinking it all along. Always with an excuse. I get what Bobby was trying to tell Sam at the end but Sam still intended to use his mojo on his brother and that's just wrong. Now, is Sam going to kiss Ruby goodbye or find more excuses to continue with her?

 

 



Author's Response: Sigh...neither brother has their head screwed on right.  Nice job,  John---Father Of The Year.   It's tragedy.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 30

They finally arrived at Bobby's without killing each other, that's something. With Bobby and Castiel maybe Dean and Sam'll figured what happened. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks,  O.  Glad it still piques your interest---ml

 

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 30

It's another great chapter.  Can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks,  ZZ.  Here it is...ml

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 30

I like that Dean can just up an forgive Sam anything, even after everything he's done. will they all be able to figure out what has happened to them and will Dean be able to get past what Sam did to him if they find out the dream was all true.looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks,  M.  I think Dean has an endless well of forgiveness,  which makes me weep---ml

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 30

Sam tripped and fell into my knuckles..... Still laughing at that one... very Dean...

Glad to see Castiel is getting back into the mix- hopefully between him and Bobby - they can fix these two.

Great chapter Mal!



Author's Response: Oh..Castiel,  would that you were the hero I envision...ml

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 30

Great chapter, loved the explanation the boys gave Bobby about the fight lol.

Author's Response: Brothers fight.  Well,  actually,  siblings fight.  I did,  with my younger brother...poor bugger,  lol---ml

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 29

Terrific chapter, this one and last one, Sam is so stupid, how can he just trust that bitch Ruby? I don't understand him at all, Looking forward to the next post.  Update again soon Please..

Author's Response: Thanks,  M.  As for Sam,  he doesn't understand himself either,  lol----ml

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 29

Incredible story!   I couldn't stop reading it. 

Geez, Sam is a damn hard sell.  Even after the dream, after Dean tells him it was real, after everyone they know had the same "dream," he still falls under Ruby's spell.  why won't that boy learn?



Author's Response: Thanks,  S.  Love the cluster of comments,  made me read the story myself,  lol---mal

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 28

hey!  Where did I miss that David and Ellen are an item?  I had no clue.  Was it in this story?  iIn a previous story?  I'd like to buy a vowel, Pat.

 

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