Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

My fav part in this one:

My heart has stopped
a while ago.
But my soul is
still looking for
a place to go.



Author's Response: aww thanks hunni..i know reading poetry it´s a bit dificult and not everybody like it...i´m glad you find it nice..thanks again!!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

You have such a powerful way with words. And just so you know, I love weird:)

Great poem.

Schelz



Author's Response: do you really think so? becuase english isn´t my mother tongue and i have lots of problems with it...wow thank you very much!!! you make my day brither!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good!  I love the emotion in your words.

Author's Response: thanks again sweety!!! your reviews made my day shine!!

Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 05/06/07 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

That's very good. I liked it. :-)



Author's Response: Thanks sweety!!!!

Reviewer: mia (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a very interesting point of view. I never really thought about until now. 

P.S WRITE MORE POEMS!!!! 



Author's Response:

awwwww than you very much hunni!!!

I love to write poems but it´s a bit difficult for me because i speak spanish and not english so i can´t write as beautiful as i want. i gonna try!!!  

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting take on the episode. I enjoy your poems. :)


Author's Response:

Thank you very much, you are so sweet.

I´m glad you like this poems as it´s so weird. I think i´m the only one who wants to know what is in the ghost and other monsters mind.....

Thanks again 

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 05/04/07 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh! What an interesting viewpoint to take of that episode! The ghosts in the asylum *weren't* normal, were they? They didn't harm the kids or our boys -- they asked for help... I never really thought about them before enough to think of what it would have been like to be trapped for eternity in the place that stole your life - even before you died. And not only that, but trapped with the person who killed you!

Nice job.



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!!!! This isn´t my best poem i know that. I tend to write from differents Povs, i always want to hear what everyone has to say. Why don´t we allow the monsters to talk? I´n my fic the worst hunt ( no hunn it isn´t here yet) i wrote a chapter from a demon Pov!!!!!

 

I thought that Dr Ellicott´s patients weren´t "bad boys" and i really want to hear that they have to say.!!! Yea i know i´m crazy jajaj 

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok I liked it.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much hun!!!

Your review make my day because i´m not  too proud of this poem. I like it but i´m not in love with it. 

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