Reviewer: Burrito2450 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/11 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Still the best. :)
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is good work. Great story and good work on just how freaked out and fractured everything would be, for both of them. Only one comment - stop, instead of abate. Abate doesn't fit in with the rest of the writing style. Clearly, not a big deal, but it kind of stops the flow. Anything I ever say will always be meant to be helpful. I mean that. And if you ever read my stuff, I'll take any criticisms as well-meant. I'm not shy. :)
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 09:40 PM · On: Shrapnel
What, are you nuts? Hurt Sammy and leave it there? That would be bad, very bad. :) Keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Reviewer: bitnblue (Signed) · Date: 28/02/11 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
glad you picked this story up again. i almost forgot about it! keep it coming!
Reviewer: supernaturalbabe07rb (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 03:49 PM · On: Shrapnel
Go on plz, think this is good x
Reviewer: cindy123 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/09 12:57 PM · On: Shrapnel
CONTINUE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! Cindy.
Reviewer: crashing_nightingales (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 01:07 AM · On: Shrapnel
You have to continue this, there's just no way I could bear the thought of not knowing what happens to Sammy.
Reviewer: sooo me (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 10:44 PM · On: Shrapnel
cool u have 2 go on
Author's Response: i shall indeed.
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 03:26 PM · On: Shrapnel
Holy crap! Amazing, although the description of Sam's carved up face made me (like Dean) kinda wanna hurl haha :) ... kudos my friend this is simply a master piece of angst! -Bex
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I know it was kinda gory-gross, but I had to do it!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 10:44 AM · On: Shrapnel
Glad to see your back. Please continue with this story....we need more...it's just too good to leave. I'll be looking for the other storys. you have been missed!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: I have missed you as well. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 06:26 AM · On: Shrapnel
No no please do not leave it like that, this is a great start,please write some more.
Author's Response: The vote is in: Shrapnel will be a three parter.
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 01:30 PM · On: Shrapnel
I'm so glad to see you back. I have missed your writing and yes I am waiting for you to finish those stories you mentioned. I think this story needs to be more than a one shot. PLEASE!! Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: I fully intend to finish my incompleted stories before adding any more new ones - and I have ALOT of new stuff to get on here, so I'm gonna get to work. SEEMINGLY IMPOSSIBLE will be updated and finished by Tuesday, QUAKE will be updated by Thursday/Friday, and then this fic - SHRAPNEL - will be updated by this week's end. After that, QUAKE and THE CASCADE will be updated alternately until finished, then I'll post the beginning of a new fic! Yeah, I know I'm leaving DAMNATIONS hanging there - I'll get to that one when I've got a beta once more...... Thanks for reading, babe
Reviewer: tsweeny (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 08:31 PM · On: Shrapnel
I liked the story and would like for you to continue it.
Author's Response: Will do.
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 07:08 PM · On: Shrapnel
small come back my rear, this is so worthy of more than a one shot... maybe a longer long shot even but it could have so much more to it... this is fantastic... Kiara
Author's Response: *grinning like mad* thank you! I'm so stoked you enjoyed! everyone is responding so well, I'm really very pleased!
Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 01:37 PM · On: Shrapnel
OMG No you can not just leave this as a one shot. I started reading it and now I am falling off a cliff here!!!! Why was a Live Sharapnel bomb there. I am so biting my nails here. Please write more on this, Don't leave us hangin
Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 01:33 PM · On: Shrapnel
OMG No you can not just leave this as a one shot. I started reading it and now I am falling off a cliff here!!!! Why was a Live Sharapnel bomb there. I am so biting my nails here. Please write more on this, Don't leave us hangin
Author's Response: The shrapnel grenade idea kind of just fell onto my brain - I've no idea where it came from! I was just sitting, and I thought - "hey, shrapnel grenade? Pretty painful. I should throw one at Sammy" and there it went! Lol, I'm so cruel to Sam! I just love hurtin him and making Dean all angsty....
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 12:53 PM · On: Shrapnel
Wow, great story! I think you should continue this! It is a great one-shot, but I think it would make an even better two-shot! Please give us another chapter! :D ~Kayla
Author's Response: Two-shot sounds like a good plan. I'll get on that. Expect this updated about a week from now - aiming for Sunday or Monday.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 11:43 AM · On: Shrapnel
Welcome back. You cannot leave this as a one-shot, we don't even know if Sam survives - you have to write more. Please write more.
Author's Response: Haha, ok - will do!
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 09:06 AM · On: Shrapnel
Wonderful come back and I accept your peace offering. I would love to know more but a part of me feels it's too much. There is no way to handwave this one or give the television fix - Sam is going to have that scar for the rest of his life and I don't know if I can stomach it. Your descriptions were exquisitely, painfully accurate. I love the juxtaposition between sound/no sound, movie/no movie - it made it all feel so real because when the unthinkable happens time ceases to exist and our thougts are not our own and our senses are out of control. Brilliant. Looking forward to rereading all your stuff that you are updating so I can remember your stories. I had you listed as one of my favorite authors for a reason - now I am reminded why.
Author's Response: I totally agree - Sam's going to have that scar forever. That's why I decided to list it as AU too. I might be willing to brave one more chapter, though, just to see what happens. And I'm honored to be one of your 'fave authors' - hopefully I can continue to earn the place I hold on that list!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 07:23 AM · On: Shrapnel
This was great. Vividly descriptive. To go from such a placid scene to such a horrid one in a split second is incredible. Personally, I'd dearly love to see you add at least another chapter. Probably because I'm a hospital fic addict. But truly, I'd love to see some awesome comfort after this incredible hurt...
Author's Response: I'm general not too confident in my hospital-scene ability, mostly because my medical knowledge amounts to a pile of nothing, hahaha. But I think enough people have responded in the affirmative that at least one more chapter is in order....
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 06:47 AM · On: Shrapnel
This was an excellent comeback. You did an excellent job describing Sam's horrific injuries. Very well-written! Poor Sammy! I wouldn't worry about not updating in a long time. You have to live your life and sometimes your writing has to take a backseat. I will continue to follow your work no matter how long the time between updates. Please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's really been pretty hectic just living life as of late, and college is great, but I never thought it'd be so busy! I'm glad to be back though, and really intend to make time for this, because I love my boys too much, and I love writing them getting beat up too much, lol.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 04:56 AM · On: Shrapnel
hey Alahnah. Welcome back sweety and what a come back. As always this is packed with descriptions that are wonderfully, beautifully evocative, that take me to the place your eyes see. I feel the warm soft breeze blowing through that initially gentle scene. "It was one of those days where everything is like a movie. The kind where the sun is out and the sky is blue and those perfect clouds make the afternoon the perfect color while you drive down an empty highway and park alongside the road next to an open field of golden brown dirt and dried grass that looks oddly soft for being so thirsty." I love this line, it is a wonderful opening as it brings an unheard of peace to the boys frightening life. And then you hit us with the horror of the grenade scene. And the breathless terror there made me tremble for them. The noise of Sam's scream echoed in my head. Its a wonderful one shot hunny. If you were to write more of it I would be delighted to read it. It is a joy and i thank you for sharing. Bev xxxxxx
Author's Response: You're very welcome, I'm very glad you liked! That was the first thought that popped into my head when this idea hit me - the perfect day, with this gruesome realism of injury splattered across it. Thanks for the great review.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 02:46 AM · On: Shrapnel
You leave it there and I'll sic the hellhounds on ya! What a come back!!!! (See? You've driven me to multiple exclamation marks now...) Gory and vivid - can't wait for more on everything, so WELCOME BACK!
Author's Response: Thanks much, I certainly feel welcomed. *beams*
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