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Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

Good storytelling. I have always thought they should take up teaching future hunters. I really liked the motherly Ellen you portrayed, since I see her as being like that with the boys eventually.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. The sequel to this is also on the site. It's called In Dreams I Walk With You, and it's quite a long story. Thank you for the review, and for tracking down my stories. It is really appreciated...Jules

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 11

If they ever come up for auction I'll take the tall one!

This was fab, off to read the next one! 

Dix 



Author's Response: LOL! If they ever come up for auction, I'll let you know. Thanks for that, and thanks for the pretty stars....Jules

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

How do I describe this...this was an AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME story....yeah I think I got it right. Hehe, I loved this story, it was amazing! Super fantastic!

I just wish we could know what happened to the other wordly Sam and Dean!

This was great, I loved it!



Author's Response: Wow - thank you very much. The sequel is actually being posted - it's called In Dreams I Walk With You, and it's up to about chapter 9, I think. Hope you can head over and have a look...Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great ending and now considering you're new story I loved the mirror Sam and Dean.  Gonna go start your new one.. - K

Author's Response: Thanks Kel - see you over there...Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great ending and now considering you're new story I loved the mirror Sam and Dean.  Gonna go start your new one.. - K

Author's Response: Thanks Kelly - I'm glad you enjoyed it - hope you like the sequel...Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 10

Great, just great.. love that the students are standing up with the boys.. moving on. ;) K

Author's Response: Thank you - I enjoyed writing that scene...Jules

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 9

Okay, read this before, but it's been a while..lol.  Wanted to refresh so I could start the next.  Great chapter, love the whole Cowboy thing.. - K

Author's Response: Thanks Kelly - I've had to keep going back to it as well for the sequel, to keep the au Sam and Dean the way I wrote them originally. Glad you liked Rebecca's line...Jules

Reviewer: snaturalfreak (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 11

ok that was crazy!! I literally screamed when the demon cut Bobby's throat and then I was about to stop reading when Dean died! Then suddenly I'm reading that it's all been a dream!! It was just like that show Dallas, although why u didn't have Sam wake up in the shower I don't know! Lol!!! Good work

Author's Response:

Hehe - now that would have been just too Dallas! Although Sammy girls would probably have thanked me for the shower scene. Thanks for the review, and I am so glad you enjoyed it. I was worried about this one not working, as I didn't expect it to be so darned long. There was just so much material that kept pouring into it - I was almost tempted to shoot it with rock salt to slow it down - lol. Just remember, I don't do death fics, but I do like to play with people's minds......Jules

Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

You know, I'm just now catching up on all the stories over here.  (Don't tell anyone from the sn.tv boards lol...I've been falling behind there but can't help it if I like spending a bit of time here hahahahaha...)

I still love this story!!  Do you hear me Jules??  I love it.  If I could add sugar to it, I'd eat it...and I'd only need to add sugar cuz its a bit bloody, and well I need something to fend off the coppery taste. 

I love the fact that you ended it in a dream, and it totally came off as intentional.  I know when a writer has backed themselves into a corner (I've done it to myself enough times) and that wasn't even close.  There's a raw panic that can be felt when a writer is just trying to pass a story off, and that my friend, was not it.  Ever read my first story?  That was it haha.  By the end of your story I was bawling and throwing a fit over the deaths of my boys...and then suddenly there they were, all pretty and harm-free, lying in bed...I kind of sat back down at my desk in an "oh...okay" fashion.  You totally knocked me for a loop, and I love it when stories do that.

But I left you a really really long review last time, so I won't prattle your ears off this time.  Still thinkin' of doing what you asked about?  I freakin' hope so!!  I can't waaa-aait...

No, I'm serious, I can't wait...

Oh...and...the Word of the Day toilet paper...did that come from me?  When?  I have memory problems...and for the life of me cannot remember mentioning that...so I'm wondering if it was another Kristen from the site...lol...I hope so or I have some serious problems goin' on up here...

Loves girl, and I hope work is starting to slow down a bit for you...

Kris



Author's Response:

Actually, Kris, the Word of the Day toilet paper comment came from a review that you left in Alisa's story. It stuck in my head, and I was pleased to be able to use it in a fic. And I won't tell anyone from sn.tv, if you dont.....lol!

Yes, there is a sequel planned for this one, and I will do what I spoke to you about. The first three chapters are already written, and it may be the next story up after I finish Resort Breagadoir. Thanks for the help, and the review. And yes, I did read your first fic - the one where you borrowed the idea from Alisa and had Dean accidently shoot Sam. I liked it, and of course, I love World of Confusion and Rage Against The Storm.

Yes, I always planned to have Dean wake Sam up from the dream at the critical moment. I just never in a million years expected the story to blow out to the length that it did, and that was the only thing that had me worried - that I had made it too long for the original idea to work. But I re-read it just before I posted the epilogue, and crossed my fingers that it would still work. And it seemed to. I lost some readers, but a lot of people did enjoy it. And of course, it is in the final voting on the sn.tv site for Best Miscellaneous - that is a thrill, I can tell you. See you around the boards, hon...Jul

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 11

  ok Jules, i definetly gonna be here for your next story ! I couldn't believe you killed Dean, so this twist was really welcomed. With just enough banter and sincerity to wrap this story in the more nicely manner...

Author's Response: Thank you fredo - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for sticking with me, too. I appreciate it, and I love the reviews. The next story should be out in a week or two. Jules

Reviewer: chillmills (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting story and the concept of a hunter school is actually quite thought provoking, i've read 2 chapters as yet but they've left me with lots to think on.



Author's Response: Thank you - and thanks for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 11

awwww...awesome job!! i really enjoyed the story!! very cool ending!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that - I threw everything I had into this one - glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 11

What a finale, what a twist, you got me big time, I loved it. Terrific ride you gave us mizpah, I enjoyed it start to end. Thanks for sharing your amazing writing with us.

Author's Response: Thank you, Oceane - as always. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: pinky (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

Twist? Twist? That wasn't a twist at the end, that was an alternate ending.

A twist in the story is when the story has subtly dropped hints throughout. Leading in one direction and surprising with a different outcome. But realize all the hints dropped earlier now make sense. It can be done without hints, but better with. Example, recent episode "Roadkill", well done twist.

You had a really wonderful story going with romance, action and angst. Only to suddenly end it and throw them in the Impala off to another gig.

It smacks of "Oh, I don't have an ending for this, so I'll just stop it here. Give it a happy ending and say its a dream."

I blame the Dallas writers for giving writers everywhere an easy out by making it all a dream!



Author's Response: Pinky - I'm sorry you were disappointed. But I must make a point very plain - this story was always intended to be all a dream from the moment the first line was written - I did not write myself into a corner and take the easy way out. Again, I am sorry you didn't like it, but I don't regret my decision to take this story the way it went. Regards, Julie.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

What a great ending! I loved it, and am completely sad that this story is over. Looking forward to the next story!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thank you, Kayla - and thanks for all the reviews - they do mean a lot.

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 11

I must say that your ending totally threw me for a loop.  I had not expected it all to be a dream, but I'm glad it was--that Sam didn't go thru all that hell and that Dean and Bobby weren't killed by the demon!

Author's Response: Thanks for that - yes, it was intended to be a dream right from the start - I just didn't expect it to end up quite as long as it became. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

Sneaky sneaky girl you! That was good i hate it when people make them die thanks for not making it end like that.

Author's Response: Will never write a death fic, bookworm - don't like them either. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

WHOA!!!! totally wasnt expecting that! love the twist, love everything about it! this is exactly why i read these, you did amazing, and i cant wait for your next one!!! you rock, and i will always remember when reading your stories to breath :) 

Author's Response: Thanks, bopeep - and yes, it's a good idea to remember the three golden rules, especially the last one. Thanks so much for your reviews - they are gold, truly!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 11

Jules...

You certainly know how to deliver them! I never saw the idea of it being all a dream coming and you did it beautifully!

And I thank you for the shower scene...you always seem to know that I want!

And as for the bribes, you know there were absolutely worth it even if I did reduce you to tears.

Great job and I look forward to more of you!

Steph



Author's Response: Thanks, Steph - and hey - no probs re the shower scene. My pleasure. And I really did love the bribe, you know - it was worth the tissues! Jules

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 10

What an evil little cliff hanger you've got here! Waiting for the epilogue!!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla - hey - thanks so much for sticking the distance! Whew - this was a long fic - I never intended for it to go this long - it just took on a life of its own! Anyway, hope you enjoy the ending - and all its twists! Jules

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

aaaaarrrrrrgggghhhh!!!!! A truly, yellow-eyed evil cliffie! Who is left to save Sam? And Dean? I can't imagine what this will do to Dean if he can't be the one to save Sam. I'm really hoping that Jeremy isn't really, really dead - just when he'd finally gotten his s*** together. Please promise your muse some cookies for staying at work just a little longer....

Author's Response: lam - I actually intended for a much more evil cliffie than that, but...not much of this fic has worked out to plan, except for the original concept and the ending. Hope you enjoy the ending. And thanks a whole bunch for your wonderful reviews - I treasure them! Jules

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

AAAAAHHHHHHH! no no no no no!! oh my gosh, this was so amazing of a chapter! how can sammy and everyone else send the demon back to hell with sammy just outta the hospital, dean carved up like sushi, and his girlfriend as a chance to get close to sam??? i know the odds suck, but can you let them NOT die? :) love the story as always, please upd8 asap! :)

Author's Response: Bopeep - breathe, please - just remember to breathe. There are two golden rules I stick to, and they will be revealed at the end of the epilogue. Don't forget them. And hang on to the edge of your seat - th eending is a wild ride!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

Jules!

How could you do that to me...to us? I am screaming at you so much right now! Alyssa is possessed by the damn demon...Dean is bleeding...what the hell???

Update...NOW!!!!

Oh, and great job!



Author's Response: Now, Stephanie - how could I do this? May I remind you that you - ahem - reduced me to tears with one of your chapters? Hmm? And of course, everyone knows that we have you and your nagging/bribes to thank for the last chapter and this one being so prompt. Hope you like the little plot twist - oh, and the shower scene - just for you, hon! Jules

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

   speaking about holiday, i'll leave in a few hours, and you let me go after writing THAT !!! Common, he can't be dead right ? Hope for you i'm gonna find a great epilogue full of good news when i come back.. Or i'll boycott your next stories !

Author's Response: Fredo - I hope you don't feel you have to boycott me! I'd feel awful! I have an epilogue packed with action and one heck of a twist - so I do hope I don't disappoint you. Thank you so much for sticking through an unexpectedly long story. I do appreciate it - and I loved all your reviews. Thanks heaps! Jules

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

Nooooo.Dean can't be dead. And Sam is unwared that Alyssa is possessed by the YED. Aaarghh...That was an evil cliffy indeed. Can't wait for the last installment.

Author's Response: Oceane - thanks - actually the evil cliffie I had planned was much more evil than that - but chapter 10 blew out so far that it ended up halfway through the epilogue instead - hope you enjoy the ending.

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