Wow, all i can recall from my incident was that I went to a shoping mall across the street.

This story reflects to my inscedent.

Author's Response: My gosh - I really hope that I haven't rattled you too much. How freaky that Sam's experience has mirrored yours. 

Just reading both of my hands start to quiver and shake. It is scareing me to hell i do love your story, but I can sense the imagery that is playing out for both of them.

Author's Response: Thank you for that. That is one of the highest compliments you can pay a writer, to know that the story has gotten you so involved like that.

You did . . . but its not like DEAN has never tried to PIMP OUT SAM before.

It makes me wonder if he would be known back in time as the first fitted PIMP ASSER of the centurey and wonder if their is a star constillation named SHORT BUS?

Author's Response: No, that's true - Dean has happily pushed Sam towards a 'hot chick' before, hasn't he? Poor Sammy...

I think this is a great sinopsis that you leave the readers to fill in the blanks which is good. At least, they don't stop reading the story and fullfill themselves up with action.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. I certainly hope they don't stop reading....

Oh wow, I LOVE the idea for this story! Who better to be teacher and trainers for upcoming hunters than THE Winchesters themselves. And it's so well written it scares me. The whole fight scene with Sam and Turner..you make it so visual and real, I actually feel like I'm watching it rather than reading it. ;D

Author's Response:

Wow - thank you for that. I've garnered a bit of a reputation for my fight scenes...*scratches head worriedly*.... So glad you're enjoying it - and hope that you like the ending.....

Jules

Very different perspective on the hunting community.  Could have used more detail to help with the imagery.  Like what the school looked like and how many students attended.  Still, a nice tale, thanks!

 

Author's Response: Thanks for that. Will take that under advisement....Jules

This was a great story, I loved the characters, they were all very well written and had depth. Loved the intensity of the visions and the flow of the story. You really make it very interesting and I just want to continue reading, neglecting other things I need to do (well, that's not so good). Anyway, I liked the ending. I first seemed like a little bit of a let down, but I think it was very fitting and it allowed for an end to the dream, when everyone died, without actually killing them. And made me think, that maybe this could have been the future after all, not just a random dream. So I really got to appreciate and even love the ending. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie. I was so worried as the story progressed, that the dream idea wouldn't work any more. But I had to keep going and just trust that I wouldn't lose too many readers over it.

As for it possibly being a future event...well, have you checked out the sequel? It's called In Dreams I Walk With You - think you might be pleasantly surprised...(well, I hope so). Thank you so much....Jules

Oh that is hitting below the waste but it does have the good tacttic.

Author's Response: Yes, I pushed it a bit in this one - and I'll push the envelope even further for the epilogue - hope you enjoy...Jules

I don't care it is very SUPERBLY DONE.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hope you enjoy the ending...Jules

What can I say . . .  I have no words to state at this time, but it hurts me to be able to feel, capture the tortured sole of SAM. It scares me, but again it makes me remince that great experiance that I had with my crew at a younger age after five at least I cant say that my whole childhood life sucked badly. The RATE is extremly high, punk you've been able to make remince things that I have hid so well. Keep doing a HELL of job in stroy telling. Images are impact. 

Author's Response: Well, again I hope I haven't stressed you out too badly. This story was quite a bit darker than my usual, but it was just screaming to be written. And as it got longer, I really began to worry that the ending wouldn't come off properly. Anyway, hope that you are still enjoying it....Jules

Within the story you have portrayed has even scared me and I am a fanatic over the scared victum of SAM. I like the way you have portrayed it. Thank you. I am no hunter, but I became a witness to a dying friend whom thought they were dying in a nightmare. I am really not the type of person whom opens semi-closed wounds, but if I told you or anyone else what my true childhood was from the age of five till now you would be amazed and probably concerend. I even shed a tear, something I don't usually do at all. I have to look tuff for my husband, his child of ten years of age, my cousins, and my only three brothers. As well as close friend family too me. RATE:1000++++ Thank You.

Author's Response: Well - your review has left me a little speechless. I do hope that I didn't distress you too much. And that sounds such a traumatic experience you went through. I have witnessed the death of a close family member, but it was through cancer, and it was in the sterile environment of a major hospital. I can only imagine what you went through....Jules

. . . WOW . . . This has completely hit me hard. I could not emagine both of the WINCHESTERS as instructers . . . DEAN that is  a ? in itself. It is real good.

Author's Response: Thanks for that, but remember, all is not what it seems....Jules