Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
more, more, more. And "uncle Danny" ? Don't like him, definitely don't trust him !
Author's Response: Don't like young Danny, hmm? Oh, well - and here' s more for you. Thanks for sticking with me.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
Nice job, yet again. Can't wait for an updat.
Author's Response: Thanks so much - update has now been posted.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
I know I say this every single time, but I love this chapter. Maybe if you didn't keep writing such good ones, I could quit saying that! (Seriously, don't stop writing them...please!) So Sam is having more and more visions about the Demon. Must mean another huge showdown is about to go down. I really am loving Alyssa in this, for the mere fact that she's not afraid to stick up to Dean. That takes a lot of guts, in my book especially when it conerns Sam. I loved the little impromptu fight between the brothers. They sure are some tricky little rascals!
Author's Response: Oh, Stephanie - stop making me blush! Thanks for liking Alyssa - she's really only doing the best she knows how, and she does really care for Sam. And glad you enjoyed the wrestling match - it was fun to write.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
nuance, i do like the flashbacks, but i prefer the present chapter. So no way i'm gonna keep my eyes shut, i'm on bord whatever !
Author's Response: Good for you! The next flashback is stretched over two chapters, but the next chapter is solely in the present - hope you like. And thanks for reading - I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 5
dude! its been forever,PLEASE update soon!!!!!! i honestly cant wait to see what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Dude - seriously - it's been three days! (nag, nag, nag...) okay - greedy guts - here's the next chapter.
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
oh, very good!! so intense!! can't wait to read more!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thank you for that. More will be posted soon, I promise - just have to get through a busy week first.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow, Jules! That flashback was intense! My stomach was in knots the entire time! You really did an awesome job with it. It's good to finally know what exactly has been affecting Sam and how bad it really was. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved putting the flashback together - I was really happy with it. I'm throwing everything I have at this fic - think I might take a break after this one is completed and catch my breath.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
Loved the update, Jules! The guy at the bar is freaking me out...yellow eyes! WTF!? I am loving Alyssa more and more and even Jeremy is a little better to me now! Off to read your next chapter...the war flashback! Woo-hoo!
Author's Response: Thanks, Stephanie - yes, Jeremy wasn't evil - just a brat! Glad you are liking Alyssa - last girl I had in a fic that was interested in Sam - well a few people wanted her gone, quick smart! Yes, yellow eyes - (evil laugh).
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
Just read the last three updates. What a captivating story. I love Alyssa, she can be good for Sam. So there're a new guy in town with yellow eyes. The battle between the demon and the hunters was so intense. Poor Sam, no wonder he has still terrible nightmares about that day. Thank go he has Dean beside him to help him. Amazing work so far mizpah. I so can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Oceane - thank you. The flashbacks to the recovery will go a long way to explain why Dean is now super-protective - it was a long road. That's coming up in about chap 7 & 8, I think.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 5
I was looking so forward to this chapter! And I gotta tell you that I am not one bit disappointed! It was amazing! Poor Sammy! Can't wait to see how his recovery went.
Author's Response: Thank you - I actually had this chapter finished before chapter 4. Glad you liked it - and Sam's recovery flashback takes place over two chapters, as there's a lot to pack into it. Hope you like.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great job! It will be interesting to see how your show down compares to the one coming up on the show! I love how Dean helps to unlock Sam's power and the scene with the two of them working the ritual together to defeat the demon is just perfect. And, ya, your latin is scary-good!
Author's Response: Can't take credit for the latin - I've been so busy with stuff, I forgot to put the thank you at the beginning of the chapter - one of the girls from another forum sent me the full latin exorcism rite - over 40 pages, and the ritual was picked from that. I'm going to fix that omission in the next update. Slack of me...
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great Job! I'm really enjoying it
Author's Response: Thank you for that. Another update is due by the end of the week.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
must have been on the top on your latin class, haven't you ?! So, good chapter, but i think i prefer the present ones, because it's more original to se them in the teacher position rather than in the fighter one. So i definitely gonna wait for your next update.
Author's Response: No - the Latin was taken from the Roman Catholic full exorcism rite, which is about 40+ pages long. Don't like the flashbacks, eh? Awwww - darn it. There are two more coming - better shut your eyes.
Reviewer: Lucy Wiggin (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
What I think? Well, I love it so far. Will have to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - this one is the most adventurous fic I've written so far - and the longest! Might have to get the shotgun out if this puppy gets any longer!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great job so far.
Author's Response: Thank you - here's chapter 5 - the first of the flashbacks.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
liking it so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - glad you are enjoying it. There are a few more chapters to go - this one's turning into a monster.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
yay! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'll be checking for it every day! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Kayla - check no more - here it is! Glad you're enjoying it - this one is stretching me as a writer.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
I can almost forgive you for that horrible cliffy because this chapter is just soooo good. I love what you do with the pool game and Sam's rendezvous - really well written. How perfect is it that Sam is with someone who can't stop asking questions?! I just know that Dean is going to regret getting Jeremy to stay - I see a whole world of Dean angst if anything happens to the kid now! Soooo, you did say that chapter 5 was all but written, right? So you're going to post soooon, right??????
Author's Response: Oh, lam - you can forgive me, can't you? Here is chapter 5 as promised - yes it was actually completed before chapter 4 - it only needed a little tweaking. Enjoy.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
and the next chapter is coming... soon, right ? Because i really wanna know more about this war, also it probably means pain and fear. I'm gonna miss the hundred watt smiles, i can so picture them in my head...
Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is here - thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate them all. And they do have rather nice smiles, don't they?
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/07 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved this chapter! Sam now knows he is still a desirable man even after everything he has gone through.
Author's Response: Yes, he is most definitely. Had to get him past the hang-up he had first, but he's well on the way to recovery now.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/04/07 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 3
still love it. A happy Sam makes me happy too. And you do write romance, and also comedy for sure. I really laugh. A little fun for Dean next to come ?
Author's Response: A little fun for Dean? hmm - I don't kiss and tell.....lol Thanks for the feedback - it's the first time I've attempted romance - I much prefer action and mystery - and a little humour!
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/07 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
awww...that was so sweet!! excellent job!! waiting for more!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks bambers - and thanks for reviewing. You know how addicted I am to reviews
Reviewer: Windyfontaine (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ooh actually reviewed on the other site, but awesome job, and happy sigh. Good chapter, and finally a happy one for Sam! So I know there will be angst to come, but hoping it won't end too badly. Will stick with this regardless, you're amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you - you're amazing too. Yes, some angst, but some more happy bits for our resident psychic hunk. I mean, who could resist...
Reviewer: Windyfontaine (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 2
Second chapter also excellent. And I'm thinking that Sam's stunt in Dean's class was actually helpful for the students, especially the kid Turner. I kinda felt that would help him to turn around.
So many good lines in the second chapter as well! And when Dean was ready to kick the woman's butt that spurned Sam when she saw the scars I laughed and then read the line where Sam laughed. Awesome job. And aww, poor Sammy. I have a feeling I'm going to be saying that a lot :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Alisa - and yes, you will be saying that a lot in upcoming chapters
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
You did great! Romance is hard to write, but you did amazing! Looking forward to the next chapter! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla - this is the first time I have attempted anything like a romantic scene - glad it's being enjoyed.
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