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Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 29/07/09 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Golly gosh! That's deep and emotive and I so feel for Sam.

Author's Response: Thank you. This piece seemed to write itself once I'd got Sam in my head!

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! Thanks for posting.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/04/09 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wanted to live like normal people. I wanted to be able to take a walk through a forest and not spend the whole time looking over my shoulder for black dogs or wendigos. I wanted to be able to smell the morning air, free of smoke and cinders from another burned corpse. I wanted to be able to have a conversation that didn’t revolve around the latest injuries. I wanted to gaze into the night sky and not worry about the phases of the moon. I wanted to read the paper and see just the news - Great wording, I can so clearly see season 1 Sammy in this story ;) Kel

Author's Response:
Season 1 Sam was so, so different to Season 4 Sam and I just wanted to go back to that yearning and explore how he felt about Jessica's loss a little bit more.
Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I see few 'Sam' based stories and you have done this really well, and you are newish here too, well done. You captured his feelings just right. I read first 'Hector' a while back,(loved that one too)...Jacq

Author's Response:
Funny thing is, I'm really a Dean girl but when I start to write for Sam it just flows. He's such an interesting character. There's so much going on inside his head and it's not all sweetness and light in there.

Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

I liked this, i think you told this story beautifuly from Sam's pov, well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - it made my day :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey Jenny.
well i think you were unjustified in your concerns at posting here! It's a well constructed, grown up POV that's articulates well Sam's position. It has emotion but is not self-indungent in its description.
I liked it. Write some more stories and share them here.
Bird xx

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for that. I don't normally write Sam so this was a challenge for me.

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

loved it! pure and simple. thanks for posting B xx

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing - it does my confidence good :)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ouch! Poor Sam and Dean. I really enjoyed Sam's POV of preseries/1st series events, especially how he viewed Dean even though he knew Dean had nothing to do with Jess's death. Thanks for the short story.

Author's Response: I wasn't sure if I'd got into Sam's head properly but I think I got it right. Thanks for reviewing.

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