Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 05/04/10 07:22 AM · On: Finding My Father

i hope you will update soon and will bobbys guests be sam and dean

Author's Response: Wow. I really need to update my fanfics. Thanks for the review and you guess well :D

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 09:39 PM · On: Finding My Father

umm not to be nit picky...but you have a continuity error...Sara here says that her father (Bobby) never knew about her at the beginning...

It’s not the old man’s fault though. He didn’t know I existed; blame my mother for that one.

Then she suddenly has a picture of the three of them when she was a baby....

I figured he would know who she was without last names. Then, I handed him the picture of all three of us.

Not bad otherwise. except maybe the wind from Canada part...that was a bit random...and how is it even important that it was from Canada?

Author's Response:

To clear that up, he knew that Betty had a kid, but he didn't know the kid was his. That's why he didn't know she existed, per say. As for the wind from Canada, my sister lives in North Dakota so that wind is really cold and frigid. That was the point behind that.

 Thanks for the review though. I like it when people pinpoint things.