Hi,

This is a cool little story, covering a time that can be difficult to write about. Set before NRFTW, you can have Dean's thoughts and dreams be about anything without contradicting the canon to come, and also indulge in a bit of foreshadowing. I also like the piece-meal handling of Dean's encounter with the semi--it was disjointed and left the reader hanging until you filled the gaps in later--which paralleled Dean's frame of mind nicely.

Thanks for a nice look-back read.

Sue

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read, Sue, as well as for your generous review.  Glad you liked it!

Maddie