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Reviews For Final Straw
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 07:34 PM · On: One Condition

You had me scared at first that Sam really had gone dark side.  Great story!  It kept me in suspense until Dean saw Sam sleeping on the bed.  You have a great way of telling a story.  I hope you will continue to write and post.

Reviewer: PenguinLova0720 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 12:11 AM · On: One Condition

This would be the perfect series finale for Supernatural. I love the suspense, and well I just loved everything about the story. Very well planned and excellent job! :)

Reviewer: allkar (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 10:37 AM · On: One Condition

Wow, I read that all in one go and it was one of the best fan fictions I have ever read! Very cleverly thought out and action all the way, well done!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 10:37 PM · On: One Condition

Omg!!  Wickedly good story!!  One of my faves.  Poor Dean.....experiencing his worst nightmare.  And Evil!Sam......what a bad, bad boy!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Vampress (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 07:32 PM · On: Silenced

Loved it, i've always wanted to read a story with Sam going evil! 

Reviewer: Deana1000 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 06:39 PM · On: One Condition

I really need to reread it a couple of times before I comment but just thought I'd let you know that I thought it a pretty cool story and to warn you not to get the idea that this is it - I mean with Season 5 supposedly coming up...you've got some more writing to do...I'm hoping yo've got more stories in your creative mind to share with us!

 



Author's Response: Thank you!  I actually have a sequel idea in mind, so there might be my own version of Season 5 coming along in a little while.  Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 08:31 PM · On: Sam

Great chapter,  Angles are such fickled creatures, can't wait for the next post. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: PenguinLova0720 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 08:16 PM · On: Tears

Awesome Chapter! Very thrilling. Great job!

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 08:36 PM · On: The Only Hope

Wow.............what an excellent chapter

had me in tears at the end.

Dean having to kill Sam to send Lucifer back to hell.  

Castiel finding the strength to fight giving Dean the chance to get the colt.

good job

Renee

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 01:50 PM · On: The Only Hope

OMG, what a chapter, it's terrible that dean has had to shoot Sam, but will the bullet get him, I mean Lucifer isn't just any old demon.  Is the colt enough?  How will Dean feel afterwards? Please update again soon. Can't wait.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 11:01 AM · On: The Only Hope

Yikes! That was one intense read. I hope Dean's aim was true, because there is no way Sam could come  back from being possessed by Lucifer (I think). I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/02/09 02:39 PM · On: Two Wrongs

Fantastic chapter, not sorry to see the end of Lilith, she was a real pain in the ***.  How is Dean going to fight Lucifer possessing him? Going to look forward to the next chapter, please update again soon...

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 25/02/09 08:05 PM · On: Most Afraid

Brilliant, Can Dean reach Sam? is he even there anymore, or is the good Sammy gone for ever. Please update soon.

Reviewer: gatefan (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:50 PM · On: Down Deep

this is just getting better and better well done really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 11:06 AM · On: Down Deep

Terrific chapter,  Why did you have to drown Florida, now I don't have an American Football team to follow next season.  Can't wait for why Dean will need to be well rested in the next chapter, Please update soon. 

Author's Response: Sorry about Florida.  You can consider it as accelerated global warming, I guess.  More coming soon!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:48 AM · On: Thrown

Hey hun.

nice second chapter. Sarcastic poseur Sammy is cool and I loved Dean's retort about his 'darkside' outfit.

Keen to know where the 'i just want you our of the way' theme goes cause I don't see Dean staying out of Sam's way if he has anything to do with it.

Tagging ya hun, write some more!

Bird x



Author's Response: I just like the image of Sam in all black.  :)  And yeah, Dean's probably not going to be too keen to stick with the program...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:34 AM · On: Silenced

Hey Hunny

This is a real interesting story. I'm just exploring 'evil Sam' myself (In Darkness) and its facinating to write him this way isn't it?

I like this line..."People to meet. Worlds to conquor. That sort of thing."  very cool! And this "...unsure if he was reaching out to his brother in anger or in supplication." I love the conflict in that statement.

Great chapter, really enjoyed it and reading on!

Bird x



Author's Response: Thanks!  That first line is actually courtesy of my beta; glad you liked it.  I had quite a hard time writing evil!Sam, so I'm glad he comes off as realistic.

Reviewer: gatefan (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 12:17 AM · On: Silenced

thanks great so far really enjoying the story

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 04:39 PM · On: Thrown

Great update, looking forward to more. K.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/02/09 07:35 PM · On: Silenced

Great first chapter, I love evil Sam/tortured Dean stories. Please update soon. can't wait.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you like it so far.  I'll be updating every couple of days.

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