Supernaturalville
Reviews For Vampyre's Kiss
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/01/10 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

Whenever I'm feeling down, I come back to these 3 drabbles for comfort. Not sure what it says about me that I find comfort in Dean's pain, but somehow the phrase "Satiated, she uncoiled from his cruelly restrained body, her eyes dilated with languid desire." has the desired effect everytime. And the rest acts as soothing balm just as well.

Thank you. 

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

Excellente!  I think you have the outline of a new story here.  Just fill in all the lovely details please.



Author's Response:

Hey Shannon

ya know babe its funny, I have one chapter of So Not An Angel to finish and then this is gonna get expanded out into a bit of a longer story! I feel the need for a bit of Winchester related Vampyre lust! Hope to maybe see ya there!

thanks as always for yuor supprtive words.  bev xx

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 2 Vampyre's Fever

Spooky cool!  so what is the task?  You've made me very nosy.

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

Aw - What a lovely hurt/comfort scene - So much there, in so few words! -- Though that's not saying I wouldn't just Love that longer version you've so tantalizingly teased us with...!

Author's Response: Moi? Tease?  Never...heehee Bev xx

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 Vampyre's Fever

Oh yesss! - I remember this delightful little snippet-- Dean growling at the darkness within him is just, well, so hot!!  -Another great one, hunny-!

Author's Response:

Hey Hun.

Yeah, I, too, enjoy Dean growling!

Bev xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

Excellent,but now i need more lol, hope you do write the longer version one day,i'd love to read it.

Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay.

I will do as soon as I can fit it in.  Thanks for reviewing as always appreciated. Bev xx

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

Now how in heck did I miss this continuing?! Wow. Sauce was right! Can't wait for that longer version (hint hint) but your drabbles are awesome! So tactile - can practically feel Dean's determination in Fever, and his pain and disorientation in Shudder. Sam's desperation too - and I'd love to see the moment he realises what's happened to Dean!

Fantastic hun.

Cal



Author's Response:

Hey Cal.

Thanks hunny. tactile is a really nice review. smiles Bev xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 Vampyre's Shudder

You know when I saw this posted, I hoped you had given in to the begging for a longer version. Oh well I'll just have to beg again.

Please please write the full story to these wonderful drabbles. They are evil teasers for what has to be an amazing story that I'm begging you to write. 



Author's Response: Heehee...patience woman! xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 09/03/09 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh boy - this snippet gets me deep down every time I come across it - and I have to admit I hunt it out often - when I feel the need for a touch of lust.

Would getting down on my knees help persuade you to expand this little gem? I really really want more. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with a cherry on top.



Author's Response:

hey Ann.

Thank you hunny, that made me giggle..strangely I've just penned Vampyre's Fever which follows on but ..you're gonna be mad...is only 100 words - a drabble!  I did it for the E/O drabble challenge on FF.net. Don't know if ya hang there so I'll send it ya of ya don't just pm me ya e-mail.

Oh hey had no idea you were a Brit...fabulous... Bev xxx

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start...... please add more to this..

Author's Response:

Hey Loretta.

Thank you for your kind words and yeah...one day I may well write some more of this one.

My sympathies on your sad loss and I hope you find lots on this wonderful site to bring back happy memories of watching Supernatural with your hubby. It's a good friendly site.

Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated.

Bird xx

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Damn that was good!  Made me want more---lots more!

Author's Response:

Hey Shannon.

I enjoyed writing this one a lot! Heehee Bev xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Bev,

i could picture this whole scene in my head.

i am thinking you need to turn this into a several chapter story.

Dean tied up....................i am so liking that.  with out the vampire of course.

Renee



Author's Response:

Renee, sweety.

Owh you little minx! Dean tied up indeed! Heehee...

I really only thought of it as a one shot but now ya mention it..!

Bev xxxx

Reviewer: PADavis (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks to all of you for doing this!  Yay Muffy and yay for this story for being so ... so.... well  suggestive.

Phoebe



Author's Response:

Hey Phoebe.

Suggestive..?  I'm not sure what you could mean! heehee.  Glad you liked it. Bev xx

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know about Muffy liking it, but I loved it, and I would love to read an expanded version of this scene. How did Dean end up there? how does he survive this encounter?

What can I do to persuade you to write more? Virtual Cookies? Virtual chocolate ? Virtual Beer? A non -virtual promise to read and review?

PS. I love your sentence " Satiated, she uncoiled from his cruelly restrained body, her eyes dilated with languid desire." Down right sexy! Fab!



Author's Response:

Hey Midge.

Thank you very much for your kind words I am very flattered.

I didn't intend writing anymore but a few people have asked so maybe I will.

I'm glad you liked that sentence, i love the word satiated!!

Bev xx

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

OOooooh!  Wickedly good!

Author's Response:

Hey Hunny.

Wicked huh? That's a good thing...right? Heehee, thanks for reviewing much appreciated

Bev xx

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh Bev, awesome as always, loved it - there's more right????  Karen

Author's Response:

Karen, Hi!

Thank you for reviewing much appreciated.

Well there isn't anymore written. It was only a little drabbly thing!  Did ya want more?

Bev xx

Reviewer: MuffyMorrigan (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sniff, thank you sniff

Oh I love this, lovely awesome. YAY. Dean and lovliness and a little sauciness. Oh I love it, and Sniff, Hug, Sniff Awesome Banner Cal!

Five Impalas lovingly detailed by Dean and full of barefooted Dean's looking for you!

 



Author's Response:

Muffy

Well if ot made ya feel good then all is well!

bev x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent as always,, but do you think you could please do another chapter,pretty please lol.

 



Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay.

Thank you so much...another chapter?  Umm you think?   bev xx

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Birdy :) -- Oh, I really loved this one, as I do everything you've written, but truly- I sooo want to see just how our dear boy gets out of this one! -- Excellently done!

Author's Response:

Hey Ash.

Well thanks hunny, that is so kind of you to say that. You want to see more?  I'd only really thought of it a a oneshot...

Bev xxx

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH Bev, this one is HOT! *fans self*

The drool bucket has been emptied several times.There is something definitely sexy about vampires, isn't there?

And by the way, Dean is always, ALWAYS worth the wait. I wish I was that vamp, yummy. Poor hurt Dean though. Then again, I didn't expect differently! You do him so well, so vulnerable! Just please, write another chappie to this one! I am curious and anxious to read how he is saved!!!!

Hugs ya, Ilka



Author's Response:

Hey Ilka hunny.

I'm so glad you liked it...another chapter?  Ya think?  maybe...

Bev xxxx

Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful. 

Author's Response:

Kim.

Ya think? heehee, that makes me feel sooo good.  bev xx

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hye Hunny,

Wow!  What more can I say, apart from 'where's the rest?'  I want more!!  Another ten chapters and a sequel! 

Good god, what have you got my poor babe into this time...?  Hehehe I feel I should go and offer him some comfort.  Those trembling thighs, scrabbling feet and that that liquid lust!  I think I need to go lie down!

Loved it!  More please!!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Nooooooooooooooooooo!  It's a one shot ya numpty! Heehee...well maybe...

Bev xxx

Reviewer: Abni (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey, what's that, "OneShot"??? No no, you don't mean that, pleeeaaaseeeeee write more, this leaves so many questions unanswered - who is she, how did Dean come to be there, where's Sam, will he save Dean before it's too late??? (Oh, and of course I wouldn't mind getting a tiny bit more hurt Dean and delightfully evil vampire chick either...) 

 Love your writing style, so very vivid and effective, making the readers feel the story as we read - great job!

Hugs, Abni



Author's Response:

Hey Anne.

Squeal!   So glad you liked it and nice working with you guys!

More....umm...ya think?

Heehee, well maybe!  Bev xxxx 

You must login (register) to review.