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Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/11 09:13 AM · On: Chapter Seven

OMG! sooooo good I cannot wait for the next chapter! update soon please! :)

Reviewer: berylspring (Signed) · Date: 16/10/11 11:24 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Great start to the story!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 07:35 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Nice to see you back with an update and Dean's in trouble YAH!!! This love of Dean whumpage is a sickness I can't help it!

 I would dearly love for an update of  No Need To Remember it's such a wonderful story. I hope you plan on finishing it?

 Looking forward to more... soon???

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 01:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Gulp, please, please tell me you didn't actually kill Dean, did you? I don't think I could continue reading if Dean is dead! I hope they all can escape this madman. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 05:52 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Great update,  it's been a while.  I'm not sure if Sam and Jessi have reached Dean in time to save him, Have they?    Is Jessi going to just let Raef kill her?  Too many questions.  Hope to read more soon. Thanks.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 07:17 PM · On: Chapter Six

Yowza! Dean is in a bad way and  needs Sam right now to save him, and then he needs a hospital because there is no way he can survive those injuries with out it. I'm biting my nails that Sam will get Dean away from the madman!!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 07:09 PM · On: Chapter Five

Yikes! Was that a trap for Dean and Sam? Wonder what Raef will do  that he has found Dean? Looking forward to reading ch. 6!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 10:06 AM · On: Chapter Six

Great chapter, Poor Dean, what is Raef going to do to him?  Can Sam get there to save his brother? More soon Please.  Can't wait..

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 08:50 AM · On: Chapter Six

Poor Dean!  He takes such a beating, physically and emotionally.  I'm eager to see how the Winchesters get out of this one and what happens to Jessi.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 08:41 AM · On: Chapter Five

Oh my stars!  That was very intense and suspenseful!  You seem to have a fondness for torture just like Raef.

And Jessi showing up was an amazing surprise!  I understand her need to see Raef dead and live without fear. 

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 05:37 PM · On: Chapter Six

I loved this chapter.... despise Raef... he's wonderfully evil... I loved the taunting about Dean's fears and how he so perfectly picked out that Dean's worse fear had nothing to do with rats or flying... nicely done!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 04:52 PM · On: Chapter Four

I'm biting my nails wondering how Sammy is going to get Dean out of this mess. Wonder if he'll be able to talk Jessi into helping.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/07/09 10:21 PM · On: Chapter Four

Keep throwing those breadcrumbs!  I'm following every one of them.  Weaving the past and present together is a nice technique.

the description of Jessi is so realistic!  I'm glad Sam didn't push her, glad his compassion and humanity for this frail girl outweighed the desire he had to save his brother.

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/09 07:36 PM · On: Chapter Four

OMG!!! THAT'S SO GOOD! I was literally glued to the screen!! I can't wait for the rest of it!!!!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 11:09 AM · On: Chapter Three

Update soon please. This is scarily, horrifyingly good.

I'm not sure what it makes me but I'm enjoying Dean's suffering. Sick I know, but even I don't like the idea of his suffering being dragged out indefinitely. 

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 09:25 AM · On: Chapter Three

Fantastic chapter, Poor Dean, so psycho Raef is going to torture Dean both ways, physically and mentally.  Where is Sam?  More soon Please.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 08:19 PM · On: Chapter Three

Wow!  Raef is one of Azazel's special kids?!  How did he find out about Sam?

Excellent chapter!  I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!  You've created such a demented character and there's so much excitement built up.  Please post again soon!  Like tomorrow?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 04:40 PM · On: Chapter Two

Fabulous!  the tension had my heart pounding!  All this becasue psycho is in love with a woman he tortured?  Beautifully bizarre!

And I like how you reiterated the word around several times within the chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 04:21 PM · On: Chapter One

Brilliant beginning!  I love that we're already in the middle of the action!  I can't wait to find out the background behind the crazy man and how he became associated with the Winchesters.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 02:15 PM · On: Chapter Two

Great second chapter, poor Dean, sometimes he just doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut. Please update again soon. Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 06:46 AM · On: Chapter Two

Hey hun.

Okay so you have me I'm hooked. tagging ya so write some more soon.  creapily, wonderfully atmospheric

Bird xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 06:41 AM · On: Chapter One

Wow hunny.

This is psychlogically scary! The 'torturer's' insanity is terrifying and I can feel Sam's panic. Nicely written  off to chapter two!

Bird xx

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 06:15 PM · On: Chapter Two

Well holy crap and a half!  That's a bit of a pickle, isn't it?!  It's not really the Winchester way to trade other peoples'  lives for their own, or for their family...

Can't wait for the next chapter!! 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 05:52 PM · On: Chapter Two

Yikes! Dean is truly in a bad way. I shudder to think what else the loon may do to him. Poor Sam must be frantic. I can't  imagine either one of them wanting to give over an innocent in trade. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: stace (Signed) · Date: 01/03/09 11:09 PM · On: Chapter One

asowme!!!plez to another one!

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