Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
NO!! it was humilating the grandest story I've ever read. You are in the GOLDEN folder of more than respect, but alot of loyaty to a composer that has brought an imagel feeling of what I have to fear at a daily basis in hops that an attack never hits me where I'm least protective. You are the 2nd that knows a deep secret of mine and again and again thank you for bring a part of my sanity back. RATING:) Shit why don't you put your rating. Be proud of this story for you have found another loveing reader and friend. lamix1mana@yahoo.com
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is EXCELENCY . . . POWERFUL. THANK YOU FRIEND. RATING:) ETERNAL NUMERATION. Cause I don't think that maybe you are the second one that has ever got a rating such as this. If you don't approve of it . . . then i'd give you 200++++ lamix1mana@yahoo.com thank you for reviving my SANITY. You are trully the second person whom found the thing that I carry and that i've been luck to be stable for more than 5 yrs. thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
How did you know that I have the same syptoms as SAM? . . . SORRY, SAM! “Sammy?” images of his brother on the forest floor, not breathing, on the bed in shock, not breathing; they flashed and mixed in his mind, bringing back the same fear, the same jolt, the same stuttering terror that this was out of his control, beyond the reach of his aid. He was already running across the room, but before he had moved more than a foot, Sam’s eyes rolled high and back, and his entire body was racked with spasms as he began to convulse, back arching, mouth gaping, and hand half-fisted with his arms stiffened at awkward angles. “SAM!” Dean untied him again, remembering the last time, and the too recent memory of the experience swept over him again. He gripped his brother around the waste, trying to hold him still, but the seizure was too powerful, and Sam continued to jerk and buck even in his arms. It's funny how even a writer can imagen of what a true seizure imagens that it would be and that right there is the GOSPEL HONEST TRUTH of what happens to one. Like I said before, you are some how telling a bit of my story except i'm not a hunter, but the true feeling that you write in DEANS thoughts are like ine as well as SAMS. Every reading literature that I've read from most writers as your self still give me the strength of being not only SANE, but also an enjoyment of each and bezzar reading that each of you right. THAT IS GOLDEN LITERATURE TTO ME THAT I WOULD HUMBLY ENJOY READING EVEN IF IT SCARES THE LIVING PISS AND HELL OUT OF ME. THANK YOU and yes u are BAD and wicked, but I still love your story. I say this should get an emmy for best composition. Thank you Rating:) I'd say 200 to 400 ++++, but I would simply be lying this is a very dedicated and awsome ass story congrates for the hard work . . . and i'm still not done . . . YET!!!!!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
N-no, keep doing it that is what is makeing this story even better and more of a thrill in the end of the tremor of the characters. Its great and I love it. You are another of my golden writers to the favorite piled folders of worth reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
I feel that this situation is real depressing DEAN to view his brother in this form. I thank you for this line . . . its like you are able to link to the ?s that keep playing in my mind . . . Dean. Dean? Why was Dean just watching? Why wasn’t Dean stopping them? Why wouldn’t Dean do something? Why did Dean hate him so much that he would let him suffer like this? Why didn’t Dean love him anymore? What had he done to make Dean so angry? What had he done to make Dean hate him? all those are hidden ?s that neither of my parents have been faithfull to answer. I thank you for placing the in the story it fitted very well. To ost of it I can relate to. I real do feel proud in reading it and I hope you keep doing similer ones again. “Wh-what did I do?” Sam asked, pleading weakly as he gazed at his brother, his everything, his home, his world, “Please…I-I’m sorry,” for some reason it was important that Dean know Sam was sorry for whatever he had done. Sam didn’t want Dean to hate him, but maybe he deserved it. Maybe he deserved what Dean was doing to him. I at times feel that the character of Dean and Sam is my brother and I except I'm the oldest and he's four years younger than me. Thank you for at least presenting a bit my life story where no one cares to listen nor understand me. I thank you for putting it in a one person literature. That is good. A sense of me being two chatacters of how every image and stress is driving through SAM AND DEAN as frightening as it may be I feel that that is me stateing it and I think in my mind that in someway. The story is setteling my DEMONS i trully have in a black / purple PANDORA BOX in my head and to tell you the truth it is starting to be theraputic for me. So, thank you. Rating:) 100++++
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
No your doing awfuly fantastic . . . ha,ha,ha . . . Now you are lagitimitly getting me hooked to your way of writing and I applaude you for it. I feel that you are placeing a mirror in front of Dean. Like SAM is going through the pain and anguish, but Dean views his brother as if it where to have been him and not his brother. Its a mirror image for Dean he sees hiself and its not Sam. Now, that is what I mean to be a good classy to superfantastic writer and I'm realy liking you.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Those images that were bestowed in my mind wow. I do like the senerio of the actions that the witched bestowed on Sam and then the action of his brother. I like it very much.
Author's Response: you please me.
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 7
That was really great! I started reading it last night and I read the last 4 chapters on my phone this morning after dreaming it all night! That's amazing! Now can you finish seemingly impossible 2? Please? :) kiara
Reviewer: Sensue (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
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Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 7
Like it....The ending was satisfactory, and sort of full circle kind...LOL Happy New Year!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
..."or perhaps, just another taste of an old one." Too clever! Perfect ending---Sam saving Dean and Dean deciding that watching Sam's agony was the worst thing.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
I was afraid they'd have to go back. *groan* At least they got a few days to recuperate before being thrown back into the fray.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
OK all i can say is WOW!!!!!!!!!!! This story has been so intense from the beginning that I was holding my breath as I was reading it. You are a true master storyteller!!!!! OUTSTANDING in every aspect.OMG .. Sam's ordeal- Dean's angst- Dean's thughts-all so painful even for the reader. AWESOME ... AWESOME job!!!!!! Going back after the witch -Dean experiencing the same pain that Sammy had- his realization of what his brother went thru....EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
yup girl, great job here! But best story so far... naw, you know my love for Dimensions... And again the same scene from differents POVs, i so like that style. Thanks for the great read.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
straight to last one, was worrying a bit about not seing any witch-ass-kick!
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very, very satisfying, and yes, I agree with you, it was definitely your best story, (so far). I didn't think your writing could get any better, but you have proved me very wrong. You have an amazing talent, the intensity, emotion and details in your stories is nothing short of genius. The story grabs the reader from start to finish and stays with them long after it has ended. I have already printed this one out and I will take great pleasure in reading it many, many more times. Thank you, Nicki.
Author's Response: You've made my day, you have no idea!
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ouch! Very very well written... Love your stuff Dix
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thank you for completing this story. I did like the ending. Having Dean experience a little bit of what Sam went through was a good way for him to relate to what Sam had went through. I liked how you had Sam face the witch so he could conquer his fear. The only suggestion I do have is if there is a long break between chapters, could you do a little summary of what happened so far or in the last chapter at the beginning of the chapter. I had to go back a couple of chapters to refresh my memory.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked, and I totally her what you're saying - thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep that in mind when I update my other stories. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 7
YEAH!! What a great end! As fun as torturing our boys is, I think you got the limits just right. Congratulations on a fantastic fic!! Loving everything of ours at the mo. ;) sophie
Reviewer: Lulu (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
hey good story,I like it
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 5
I actually read this quite a while ago, but I was in my 'just found this site and not brave enough to review' phase then. Anyway, I really like this and wanted to let you know we're still checking in on this one! Thanks for the read - Angela
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
hey wow wonderful story-I would have reviewed the ealier chapters but I was enjoying them too much so just kept on reading lol! Now however I need to tell you what a fantastic job you're doing! poor sammy-glad he will be getting better after this-the torture and angst were superbly written but I think we need some banter now too lol! Can't wait to see where this goes next and if the boys go back to get the witch or not. -Aliyssa x
Author's Response: don't worry, the boys will sooo totally be getting back at the witch. but it might take some persuading...
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yeah, the pain is gone...happy dance:)
Author's Response: yay! now I'm not the only once dancing! Im happy that sam don't gotta suffer no more.
Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hooray! Sam's finally out of his painful hell. I was literally cringing when he broke the glass and tried to kill himself. Your writing is very clear and vivid and I love being able to see the story in my head. Great job and I'm looking foward to what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I could create such vivid picture for you! i feel like im succeeding in my storytelling.
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter! It's wonderful to see that Sammy has finally made it thru to the end of the torture from being subjected to that witch's hands. Now the healing begins--for him, and for Dean. I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: true the healing will begin, but though sammy has been suffering most of the way through this tale, dean will soon have too encounter a pain all his own...
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