Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/09 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great job! I like how it starts off really dark, but lightens up a little at the end. And I can definitely imagine Dean thinking those things so Bravo!
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much for your very positive review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. I wanted to show the negative thoughts that might run through Dean's mind and then show where he might get his energy and inspiration to keep doing what he does. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. *bg*
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
hey hun. this was interestingly constructed -the commencement of each paragraph giving it a sort of stacatto cadence. thanks for sharing bird x
Author's Response: Funny you should mention that. Initially, I was going to write this as a sort of poem. But, I just couldn't get the form to work. However, I did try to keep a bit of a rhythm to the story. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Really, really, REALLY good! I loved the way you got in Dean's head and what he feels every night... Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment and the stars. *bg* I thought that this might accurately fit what runs through Dean's mind before he goes to sleep. I'm glad that you agree. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review and stars.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked this, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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