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Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 12:29 AM · On: Be Glad the Bunyip is Dead

Great job! I've enjoyed all of your stories so far. The Trickster was a hoot!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 12:50 AM · On: Be Glad the Bunyip is Dead

Interesting story, with very good dialogue. Major points for originality. I'm a little unclear about what a bunyip looks like, other than BIG and lots of teeth and claws. Nice job interweaving snippets of season four into the story, too.
Sue

Reviewer: debkyle (Signed) · Date: 20/03/09 11:45 PM · On: Be Glad the Bunyip is Dead

Great ending - kangaroo scrotum leather.... made me laugh! Loved it.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/09 10:44 PM · On: Be Glad the Bunyip is Dead

Phoebe,
another great story.
i am going to add you to my favorite list.
your stories just keep getting better and better.
Renee

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/03/09 10:24 PM · On: Be Glad the Bunyip is Dead

hilarious, just what was needed after all the angst.
As an Australian I wasn't in the least offended, just upset you managed to mention all my favourite foods and me on a diet! Oh well at least you got in that Mel Gibson was born in America!

Reviewer: debkyle (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 03:06 PM · On: No Wonder He's Cranky

I love your writing - very well-written and extremely entertaining. Your dialogue (even the silent communication, lol) is great. You have definitely peaked my interest to read more of your work.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 03:19 AM · On: No Wonder He's Cranky

As always, another excellent chapter. Always a treat; always a joy to read.
Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 14/03/09 04:04 PM · On: No Wonder He's Cranky

Wow- another great chapter!- So relieved that Lulubelle's alive and bleating- And just can't get enough of Dean in the hospital-- Love it!!

Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 14/03/09 05:57 AM · On: No Wonder He's Cranky

Love your work.
[He felt something on his arm and looked over, and down, to see a pair of nurses trying to pry his fingers off the doctor’s head. He jerked his hand back, rocking the doctor back and forth like a buoy. “Shit, um, shoot, sorry. I’m sorry. I was aiming for the wall.”]...had me LOL...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 04:13 AM · On: He Named the Bait?

Heh heh - can just see Sam splattered in gore. But it's a good thing he got the message - think you've beat Dean up enough without blowing them both up along with the bunyip! Can't believe I said that. No such thing as too much whump...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 03:58 AM · On: Come On, Strip Down!

Aw, even mute, he's one hell of a character. Love the expression you put in his clicks/cards/whistles/actions. Moving on, 'cause you gaves us a twofer, yay!

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 22/02/09 10:59 AM · On: One for Yes, Two for No?

Heheh, I love Bamapana. What a filthy old bugger :)

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 22/02/09 10:25 AM · On: He'll Never Make That Shot, Mate

Huh, who's the little guy? This is extremely intriguing...

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 10:34 PM · On: One for Yes, Two for No?

Oh my holy GAWD this is funny! I mean, it's kind of sad with the post-Hell stress, and the not-talking stress, but I've been wheeze-laughing like an old woman at Dean's antics with the clicker.
Seriously, everything you touch is gold, PA David. Everything. I'd PAY you to write stories for me. I'd pay to see your stories turned into episodes. Not sure a compliment gets bigger than that. So there you have it.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 09:49 AM · On: We Haven't Hurt Anyone Here

Uh oh! This is so much worse than I had imagined! Dean can't talk at all without Sam hurting, even when Sam's not around? That's an ingenious spin on the whole "mute Dean" concept.
Awesome chapter!!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 02:05 PM · On: We Haven't Hurt Anyone Here

Oh this is not good. The situation isn't good. The story is great! I want you to update more and more because I am impatient and hate waiting and have to find out what is going to happen! AHHH!!!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 10:09 AM · On: He'll Never Make That Shot, Mate

Oh, wow, this is so freaky wierd it's cool! Dean's got ear-bleeding dolphin speech disease! Write somemore hun! bev x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 02:56 AM · On: He'll Never Make That Shot, Mate

what a nasty midget no wonder Dean hit him!
great start can't wait for more

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Phoebe

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 09:48 PM · On: He'll Never Make That Shot, Mate

What the? Uh oh! This is bad!
And holy crap, that midget man is an ASSHOLE! What is his freakin' problem?
I absolutely love your stories, and I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. I was so engrossed in OBX that I had to go find it on FFNet to read it where it was posted in full. I checked there for this one (hoping to get it in one go as well), but no such luck.
Ah well... I can dream. At least I know this one is all written, so I can get my PA Davis fix once a week. :) This one is alread VERY intriguing.

Author's Response:
Yep - this is the first one I've posted simultaneously here and on ff.net. Thanks for the great review and the compliments.
Phoebe

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 09:06 PM · On: He'll Never Make That Shot, Mate

Oh my!- A new story- I'm very happy here :) -Looks like the Winchesters are dealing with a very nasty fugly here- Can't wait!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Phoebe

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