Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 07:50 AM · On: You Should Show Me Some Respect
Fabulous! I love how at the end Dean is the one thinking he should show respect instead of being ordered to do so.
Author's Response: There is a big difference between to be ordered and to show respect. I think that with John Winchester the first is correct. But the second its belong to Castiel. I don't know if I was clear enough. Thank you very much. And sorry my delay in answer.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 02:11 PM · On: You Should Show Me Some Respect
This had an awesome pace, I loved the repetition of 'You should show me some respect.' and though small one of my favourite bits was -- His heart ran away. His mind followed it. Ever need help or a beta I'd be happy to help you. Schelzx
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 07:24 PM · On: You Should Show Me Some Respect
wow...this was really good. He must to believe, to survive. He must to fight, to believe. And his body shook again and again. It could be a dream. Only a dream. But he shows him his strong black wings. And he enveloped him in a crazy big celestial hug and called his name and, damn!, he is an angel. He should show him some respect and this part probably had to be my favorite...the way you wrote it and the way you ended it...pricless :)Jess
Author's Response: Thank you very much for take time to read it.
I'll try to write better in future. You know English isn't my mother tongue. Thank you again!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 05:57 PM · On: You Should Show Me Some Respect
Hey Hunny. That has a nice rhythm. i like the repeat of the essential line “You should show me some respect.” You have a couple of typo's, I'll PM ya if it helps. Birdie xx
Author's Response: I received you private message and I really loved. Thank you very much for all. Thank you! I was affraid in put the story in that site but I encouraged myself as I haven't a beta reader. Now I will find a way to correct the story. Would you help me? If it isn't ask too much... Thank you very much, Birdie.
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