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Reviews For How Ends An Hero
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 07:54 AM · On: Dust In The Wind

Wow!  Beautiful!  It was such a touching piece!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 02:05 PM · On: Dust In The Wind

This was so beautiful, good choice of song hun and words! My heart flipped with these words -- Don’t look as if I couldn’t love you anymore ... Or  take care of you ... Or be at your side when you need.

We only disappear when someone stops to search for us. Then, it’s the same, don’t? We only die when someone really ceases to remember that we existed one day.  -- so few words yet they're so powerful to me.                                                                                

Wow, this really touched me and made my heart ache when he was at the grand canyon.

schelz x



Author's Response:

Thank you veery much for.

It's really lovely to receive such kind of review. It makes me happy. I really loved. I hope to write better in future.

Thank you again.

Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 11:52 AM · On: Dust In The Wind

"We only die when someone really ceases to remember that we existed one day."

So true. This was beautiful - the opening, the lyrics used (played the song before I read this), and the ending. Ah, the ending. I'd be lying if I said I didn't have something in my eye.

"Grand canyon..."

Why did you have to write that?  

"...dancing freely, celebrating the end of a night and the start of a new day."

That bit made me disagree with Sam, if only cos of my own personal experience. No, it never makes sense. No, there is no God if he does this to people like Sam and Dean.

But hey, this is fiction. It was very well done. It was excellent. It was moving and heart-rending.

Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, very much.

English isn't my mother tongue. I was affraid to share this little text because I don't know how to express myself easily in english. I write stories in portuguese, in the fanfiction.net

I'm very glad you read my story. You made my day!

Dean and Sam were heroes to me. I really love them a lot.

Thanks again.

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