Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yet again, you've left me feeliing almost speechless and emotionally spent.

This is so deep down sad and I so want to give both brothers a big hug and make everything alright between them. 



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks for another review on this one! Is that deliberate?

And you can blame Ilka for this one. It's all her fault, really... 

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 23/05/09 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Painful missing scene. I felt every hurt, whether they were physical or mental. Well done.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for writing, it makes the episode more complete.



Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

God, this is awesome, it feels like you're taking us down an alley of despair and sorrow, getting more and more intense; Dean's thoughts overwhelmingly sad - and I wished I could express it better, I absolutely love the sound of it, magic!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was  fine line this one, between mush and angst, but I think the muse kept me from falling over too much...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Cal.

I like the rhythm of this piece, when I close my eyes the words sort of become a rhythm, a heartbeat...I like it.  bev x



Author's Response: Aw, thanks hun! Always love to know you enjoyed it - since you've been lurking behind the scenes ever since I started writing fanfic!

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

When I saw that scene in the hotel in episode 4:9, I thought the Kripkeeper heavily deprived all us fans of a great whumping scene followed by h/c -- But now I can thank him, as the interval between the church window and the hotel leaves much to the creative imaginations of writers like you ;-)

Cal, you did a wonderful job writing Dean's point of view here.  What angst!!



Author's Response: Aw, ta hun! SN leaves us lots of little snippets to fill in - this one just jumped out at me and it kind of grew from there... I rarely know exacty where a story's going, but this one took me on more of a ride than usual! Damn that muse. Last time I let him navigate...

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

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Author's Response: oh dear - hope that's just a sad face 'cause it's a tad angsty?

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved that particular scene in the episode!  I would hav elove to see more angst, more of their post-fall interactions.....so thanks for helping to fill in some of the blanks!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It bugged me when I saw it - that they went straight from jumping out the window to patching up. Still - guess it leaves some nice stuff to write about!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Perfect.  I loved the triage scene in that episode, and am very glad you've made it longer.  :)  I loved Dean's point of view, painful as it was.  Good job!

Author's Response:

Well, the pain all comes from RoweenaC - that was an odd IM session... And it was only meant to be a quick little scene - guess he just wanted to have his say.

Thanks hun!

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