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Reviewer: Pallas Athen (Signed) · Date: 21/04/10 11:00 AM · On: The Wrong Notebook

I like this, but the dialogue really bothers me. It seems really forced and unnatural. Also, since Dean and Sammy are from the US, they're not going to use terms like shagging.

Author's Response: Actually, I'm an American and I use it all the time. I think that Dean would use the term since he has a perverted mind.

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 11:48 PM · On: Watchful Eyes

OH! THAT LITTLE--STUPID--JERKY--MALFOY--DICKHEAD!
I knew it too though! I knew that if they were to be caught it'd be by him! THat little...*incoherant words as has hands in a wringing motion, imaging his neck there*

Really really good! Keep it up! :) :) :)
Tori

Author's Response: Haha. Your review really cracked me up! Thanks for that and thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 09:40 AM · On: Watchful Eyes

oh shit they're in trouble

Author's Response: Hahaha. Yeah. Thanks for that review. That really cracked me up.

Reviewer: mariahpapiya101 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/09 05:26 PM · On: The Morning After

Wow I Really Liked It. I Hope There's More.

Author's Response: There will be. You just got to hang in there and wait. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 03:00 PM · On: The Morning After

Oooh. Interesting. This is a really good story. I like it. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 23/03/09 07:17 PM · On: Arriving at Hogwarts

This is a good story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 01:24 AM · On: Calling Reinforcements

this is sooo cool

Author's Response: Thank you!

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