:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: TheSoulCollector (Signed) · Date: 26/02/10 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting and cool oneshot. I liked that you made Dean into Micheal even if that's not how it played out in the show. Too bad though that Dean didn't kill Ruby then...damn i hated her so much!! Awesome Job! Hugs, Ember

Author's Response:
*hugs back!* I hated Ruby, too! The Katie Cassidy Ruby was more saucy and fun. But Sam and Dean would have never trusted her. I can't believe they trusted her in any form---hello! Demon. No big surprise that it bit them in the you know what.
I like Kripke's version but mine was fun to write. Thanks for reading and especially for leaving a review. I'm delighted that you liked it!

Reviewer: soncnica (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

ROFL: "Yeah? When?" Dean’s voice was gruff with anger. "After G. I. Uriel blows apart our motel room and exterminates you?"
OH SAMMY, GOSH HE WAS SO DELUDED, WASN'T HE!? I FEEL SO SORRY FOR HIM, HE REALLY THOUGH HE WAS DOING THE RIGHT THING, BUT....YEAH: "She’s on our side, Dean," he defended, moving to stand beside the small woman, showing his loyalty by his proximity.
DEAN BEING AN ANGEL...OH GOD, I HOPE KRIPKE WON'T GO THAT WAY...THAT WOULD JUST RUIN THE SHOW FOR ME, JUST LIKE JUMP THE SHARK EP KINDA RUINED MY VIEW ON JOHN...BUT IN FICTION IT'S TOTALLY OKAY, AND I REALLY LIKED WHEN YOU WROTE:"See, not only have I spent my life looking out for you, Sammy, I gave up my grace to be your big brother." AW, SWEET!
NOW I HAVE TEA ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, ROFL: Your lover was supposed to be your mother. Twisted even in our line of work."
I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING, AND I LIKE YOUR DEAN AND HIS ATTITUDE!!! AWESOME!!
I NEED TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES!!!!
hugs,
S.

Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks Spela! It didn't take you long to find my stories. Yay me!
Yeah, I hope Dean isn't really an angel in the episodes. I thought it would be a jaw-dropper for Sammy in this story but isn't what I want for the real SPN. I hated Jump the Shark just because of the unknown brother. Take that away and it was an awesome episode!
Yeah, poor Sammy. He wanted so badly to be the one taking care of things the way his big brother does. When it comes to seeing the value in being himself, he's as clueless as Dean.
Thanks for the R&R!! I look forward to hearing more from you!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked the dialogue and how spot on you were with Sam and Dean's mannerisms. I liked how you gave us a glimpse into Sam's thoughts about his growing abilities, about his life so far and the future. I liked the Star Wars reference which seemed very appropriate in this situation. I liked your take on Dean confronting Sam about using his powers. I was glad that you had Dean telling Sam about what he learned about their mother during his journey to the past. Very creative explanation for the deaths of Mary's acquaintance and friends. I liked the twist with Dean. I thought you really did a phenomenal job on this.

Author's Response: Wow Marlana! What a wonderful review! I'm humbled and speechless. I'm delighted that you liked so many aspects of the story. It sounds like you really put some thought into what was written and that is the greatest compliment of all. Thanks for reading and taking the time to give such a great review!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

A great one shot, i enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks Lindsay! My imagination went crazy after Heaven and Hell. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

How come you decided to end the story there? There were so many cool plots revealed: Ruby, Michael, Anna, baby Dean, etc. I would love to read more!
Only one negative comment: It seemed strange for the boys to have so much of the conversation while Dean was on the ceiling and Sam's comment about "it being safer for Dean there" wasn't really explained. Given that both Mary & Jess died on the ceiling, you'd think that Sam would have wanted to let Dean down as soon as he realized what he had done.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I guess I put too much into this for a one shot. Ooops! that'll teach me to write something in an hour and post it without being beta'd.
As for the ceiling thing, I guess I didn't really explain that he didn't have control over what he'd done and didn't know how to un-do it. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. Once again, beta--- good, posting quick---bad.

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