:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wow, I never noticed the whole green and red colors before on the episode. I noticed it in this story, but I thought you were just being detailed. I wonder what putting tons of those specific colors in the show means. Knowing Kripke, it'll sure mean something. ;P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

That whole scene with Sam and Dean first seeing each other again, in the show, I have to admit, that was confusing and a little weird, with the whole Ruby part. Of course at the time I didn't know it was Ruby, but later, and then I just didn't understand how she pulled off the acting so well, if it was her, but the way you put it here is so believable, it kinda makes me feel better. I mean I know it's your story here, but from now on, I'm just assuming that's what really happened. ;D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oooooh, steamy. ;P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

You know, I really really love how you get all the words right. Most people kind of just go on memory, therefore, they mess up a lot, but you..everything in here is right out of the show, perfectly, word for word. Awesome job with that. ;D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Yay! I love your stories with Ruby in them! *rubs hands together gleefully* ;D

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, this was just...wow, this first chapter was amazing I really don't know what to say caus eit was really good!
:)Jess

Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't even know what to say, honestly. That description of Dean, his time in hell, the pain, suffering, torment he had to go through, you have it described in a such a painful way that makes my chest ache. I really thought I never wanted to know what Dean had to go through in hell, though when he was describing it I couldn't look away from the screen. I think this is a horribly beautiful depiction of that time.
The way you have him trying to kill himself, even though he realizes he can't, the way Alistair urges him to try again. How he gets pleasure in making Dean suffer like that, it's sick and twisted and so spot on.
Very awesome to have Dean thinking about Sam, even in hell, wondering if he's dead or alive. True to Dean's character, even when he's being tortured he's thinking of his brother!
And really great ending, when Castiel comes go save Dean. I love how the demons are screaming and scared, and Dean is enjoying it. Finally a good feeling for the poor boy.
Great work here. Good, solid writing, disturbing imagery (hello, hell!) and well written description and emotions. Thanks for a chilling read!
<3 Jenn

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