Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Back to where it began

Still liking this, nice to see how it started moving on now to chap3

Jacq x

Author's Response:

really glad you're still liking it! :D thanks for the review and stars, always appreciated.

Schelz x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Back to where it began

Good!  Love the flashbacks!  I really liked Kanis.  Too bad he was a murderous blood-thirsty dog soldier.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the flashbacks and Kanis, I liked him too. It really is too bad he's such an animal lol Thanks for the review sweet! x

Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Back to where it began

Okay I'm in love with the addition of flashbacks, you've given us a chance to know where Dean and Kanis' developed the friendship that became so hard to end. I liked Bobby torturing Roth until he screamed, that was a nice touch. Very considerate of you to give us a glimpse into Kanis' personal life..This was the part I really liked  =

"You answering my question with a question just told me all about her." Kanis smiled. "The one. It was deep, was it not? The kinda love that you knew would screw you up but you were so caught up in it you didn't care." Kanis gazed as though remembering her.

 

And then with Dean, my favourite part though small was important to the whole history of their friendship. =

"You got a smart mouth...you remind me of my sister Fawn." Kanis said, a faraway look in his eyes.

 

"Ah, that's funny... ‘cause you remind me of me."  -- I could hear Dean, I'm starting to really like where this story is going, so keeping posting.

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much Saddle :D I'm am really happy the flashbacks are a positive addition for you. Thank you for quoting parts that you felt were important to the story and histoy of Dean and Kanis as friends. I really like the fact that you're starting to like the story more. I wrote this soooo long ago and it's taken me a while to get up. Thanks for your comments and leaving so many stars.

Schelz x

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Kill or be Killed.

ooh err, I will await with eager anticipation the next chapter, dark, creepy, evil things, thats good, like those lol...Jacq x

Author's Response:

:D Jacq, nice to see you, thanks for the lovely stars. I hope you will enjoy what's to come, I defo plan dark, creepy and evil in this series of stories coming.

Schelz x

Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Kill or be Killed.

What an opening... "Dean!" Sam shouted. "Behind you!"  -- enough to make me read down. Very enticing how you started with action. What I really like is how Sam and Dean's reaction to Kanis and his situation is completely different. I'm looking forward to learning more about it.

I like a lot, baby girl!

DRUBABY XX

Author's Response:

Drubaby!!! *hugs* Do I have to write a new story to hear from you? lol.

Thanks for the review hun, I'm glad you liked the opening and found it enticing, that's a compliment and a half. I'm also chuffed that you liked how different Sam and Dean's reactions were to Kanis, you'll see more of why later.

Schelz x

Author's Response: Thanks for the stars.