Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:23 PM · On: Nature of the Beast
Okay and an after thought! Poor Camyll! Seriously what must Isaac have told her for her never to have searched out Dean! Grr Isaac! lol that is all...for now...DS
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:18 PM · On: Nature of the Beast
I BOW DOWN TO THE AWESOME THAT IS SCHELZ!!! This chapter rocked! Action packed you are awesome with the fight scenes! Fawn being a dog-person thingie queen bee...I concidered that she might be one when George was attacked...but then dismissed the idea...never thought she was the queen bee tho!!! NICE TWIST!!! Love that the sword found him just at the right moment! and loved this line: “Not so indestructible now are you, bitch?”
hehehe not with Dean Winchester around with his awesome sword to cut her down to size! OMG DUDE CAMYLL IS ALIVE!!!! POOR DEAN LEFT TO THINK SHE WA DEAD ALL THIS TIME!!! Great story yet again you wrapped me up completely in it! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!!!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Oriole likes you Dean
Nice development! So Marla is a dog-person! Never saw that one coming! Loved the parts with Dean and Hakishu...lol Dean all thinking he's trying to sell him the sword LOVED it!
Dean being chosen by the sword was very cool and DUDE you know your stuff! How much research did you do to have Hakishu sound so frickin perfect!
Great chapter! Supsense building! on to the next!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3- Then And Now
"What does he mean we?" Sam whined. "You're my brother." "Ahh that's sweet..." Dean tapped Sam on the shoulder. Sam pushed Dean's hand away knowing he was being patronized. "What is?" "You're jealous, want me all to yourself...which is understandable, I am an awesome brother." Dean boasted. Sam sighed. "Dean, get over yourself." Hehehehe LOVE that it is SOOO DEAN! Hehehe love the legally blind thing..."If I could see you right now, I would kill you Sam." Dean moaned. Great chapter! can't wait to read more but now I must deal with the mundane jobs of a single mother...dishes, laundry...*sigh*
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Back to where it began
A new breed that would be unstoppable...not good! using fawn to make that new breed....even worse! I love that Dean is offereing to help find his sister and how he identifies with Kanis' story. Also love how Dean had no problem killing Roth lol Great job so far...ramping up the anticipation!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Kill or be Killed.
Great first chapter! Dean showing compassion for the baddie...very intriguing! Dean identifying with the baddie...very insightful! Love that you have Missouri and Bobby in this one! As always Missouri is impeccably written!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 07:32 PM · On: Nature of the Beast
YES!!! Camyll is alive! When you said she might be a ghost, I rethought everything I'd previously believed. A ghost would be cheating---they'd never be able to be together but how Romeo and Juliet that would be. But now we know she's alive. Yay! "Kanis and Madison needed the ones who understood them, the ones they trusted so that a part of them would go peacefully, knowing what happened had to."
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 12:43 PM · On: Nature of the Beast
How can this be the end of this story!? You can't do this I want to know what happens. You're evil.
Author's Response: *evil cackles* I'm sorry I'm afraid it is LOL - I have other stories that take off from this one though, so watch out for them if you want more. Thanks for reviewing, Chucky doll. Schelz <333
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Destiny of Kanis
This really builds suspense. A man and woman in ugly masks? Scary!
And a beast? The devil? Weird.
Author's Response: Hello Chuck, hehe I'm glad you thought this chapter built the suspense. LOL yup, scary! -not the Devil though and that's all you're getting.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 09:43 AM · On: Nature of the Beast
Wow, fantastic, what a roller coaster, and Fawn, well no i didnt guess she was the one they were after, at least the Team Winchester worked again...with a great sword...lol loved that. Then you go and leave me shocked at the end!! Camyll...wow I loved this whole story and the twist, love a good twist Jacq xxx
Author's Response: Wow, Jacq, thanks for the awesome review. *happy dance* I'm over the moon and very relieved that you didn't guess who the main dog was. And Yay, I'm glad you loved the sword, well, Oriole...lol, Yes, Camyll, she's back and she's not alone. It's a great feeling to know I've succeeded in making this story enjoyable, thanks for leaving such awesome comments. <3
Author's Response: *hugs* for the amazing trail of stars.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Oriole likes you Dean
Yes...I knew, well felt that Marla was it! And Dean really should not go onto woods alone! See you have the gore factor still! Great chapter, on to the next now... Jacq xx
Author's Response: *squee* Jacq, I love getting reviews from you, hehe couldn't get Marla past you could I? lol didn't fall for her in shock performance. A dogman, two other hunters and Dean goes it alone, not very safe. Yup, I still have a little gore factor, which will be climbing the scale as the stories go on. I'm really glad you liked this chapter, thanks for the stars hon. <3
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Kill or be Killed.
Yuss! Bobby and Missouri? Could it get much more awesome? Great first chapter!
Author's Response: Ref, glad to see you hear :P I know, I just love Bobby and Missouri and would love to see how they would interact on the show. I'll definitely have more of them to come, not so much in this story but in the series. I'm glad you liked the first chapter! *grins* and thanks for the stars, hon. <3
Author's Response: *head desk* here NOT hear o.O
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 03:53 PM · On: Nature of the Beast
Well Fantasy, you very cleverly climbed out of what I thought was a deep hole by making Marla the dog. But, you bridged the mystery and cleared my confusion. I didn't see this chapter coming and I like that element of surprise. Now for those two characters, I'm very interested to see who they are, especially this Camyll. I don't know anything about her but Dean's reaction to Missouri's revelation made me hold my breath. There's a continuation to this? Good story.
Author's Response: Yay! *glee* I'm very glad this chapter took away your skepticism, I sensed your doubt in the previous review, which was actually a good thing. I wanted reader's to think it was Marla, knowing they'd be slightly confused as to how Marla and Kanis would be connected. I'm just so glad I succeeded in surprising you. Mm. Now for those characters, it's nice to know you're interested about them. And, I'm also squeeing that Dean's reaction affected you, and yes, there is a continuation to this. In fact there is a story before this, if you want to know the origin of Camyll. "Every time it raynes." - Don't feel obliged to though, thanks for the awesome reviews throughout this story. Much appreciated! <3
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Oriole likes you Dean
Hey there, a good chapter, some great detail and great Sam and Dean moments after Sam gets hurt. " “Do you? I can’t help feeling that somehow, you think you could’ve done something, anything but Dean you couldn’t have done anything. It was too late for him; don’t beat yourself up for being...” “What, weak? Man, if dad were here…” Dean fiddled with his keys, running his fingers in out and around the rings." One thing I have to point out and correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think Dean would admit his weakness to Sam so easily. And Marla's the dog? I want to see how you unscramble this one...
Author's Response: Hey, Saddle, Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the moments between Sam and Dean. I'm excited to see your reaction to the last chapter... In regards to the bit of dialogue you picked out, Dean wasn't admitting his weakness, he was saying aloud what he thought Sam was thinking. He was finishing Sam's sentence for him, of course he was wrong because Sam wasn't thinking that. Thanks for the stars x :P
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Oriole likes you Dean
Wow! I wasn't expecting Marla to be a dog soldier.
Author's Response: I'm glad, I'm hoping you won't be expecting what comes after that either...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Destiny of Kanis
Marla imagining that George is in the room with them was cool! A lot happened in this chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Hey Shan, glad you liked Marla's reaction to George being dead, I know, lots to soak in. Glad you're eager to read more... Thanks for reviewing x
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Oriole likes you Dean
That was a good ending. I wonder who the girl in the mask is? Just hoping Dean is ok! Real good.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're still liking it, the girl shall be revealed in the last chapter... Thanks for reviewing, Chuck x
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Destiny of Kanis
Thus far, Fantasy, this is my favourite chapter, the detail is fantastic whereas the previous chap was spread a little thin. I was impressed with the way you had Dean handle Fawn, it was understandable after what he went through with Kanis, for him feel so guilty around Fawn that he loses a bit of his control. Then to satisfy my macabre personality, you added some blood and gore...As always thanks for sharing x
Author's Response: :D *Is beaming* Wow, thank you so much for your stars and comments. It means a lot to know you liked the detail as that is my weakness, I feel bad that you noticed that weakness in the previous chapter but I am working on it. Back on a good note, to impress a reader is always a great boost to a writer. So thank you very much. lol glad I was able to satisfy your macabre personality with the gore. Schelz x
Reviewer: saddlebag (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 3- Then And Now
I have to say I like the display of jealousy I noted in Sam and I'm very glad you had Dean notice it too. I really appreciate the flashbacks, I think it enriches the story telling...I particularly like the awful truth revealed to Dean about Kanis, actually very sad. Fawn's a little badass, I like that, I think the boys were as taken back as I was. So young too.
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response, thanks so much for the stars and comments! I'm glad you liked this chapter and the flashbacks... I know, poor Dean, thing is I really like Kanis too. *smiles* Thanks for liking Fawn. xx
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Destiny of Kanis
Wow, well worth the wait, blood and gore, and a twist with Fawn being taken by 'Humans' I didnt expect that! I always love the way do dialogue, looking forward to the next chapter, when will that be...lol? Jacq xxx
Author's Response: Yay *claps* so glad you liked it and found it to be worth the wait, Jacq! Thanks so much for the stars and great comments, I'm just chuffed you didn't expect what you got. You've got me beaming, I'm glad you like the dialogue and look forward to the next chapter. I promise it won't be long, sometime this week, only 2 more chapters. Heeehe Schelz xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 3- Then And Now
Love the teasing Sam gets from Dean over his jealousy of Kanis! Awesome job Schelz! I could see it in my head as if it was on the screen written by Sera Gamble herself. I'm glad you're working on your series again.
Author's Response: :D *crazy face* fdsfsfnkgj I'm so happy to hear from you, really glad you liked Sam getting teased. I feel from when I wrote this story (2007) to the stories I've writing now to add to the series, are way better, so it's a HUGE compliment for you to say it was as if Sera Gamble wrote it herself. Though I know I'm nowhere near her...it still makes me smile from ear to ear. Thanks honey, I'm glad you're glad I'm working on the series again, and don't worry, I will totally be catching up to your awesome series soon. *hugs* ~Schelz
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 3- Then And Now
Like this chapter too.
Author's Response: Thanks Parky!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Back to where it began
I like this chapter. You've put alot of detail.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, I tried hard to put a good amount of detail, I hope it was a balance and not too much for you.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Kill or be Killed.
love it.very original and unique idea.
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much Parky! :D I'm glad you find this unique and original.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 3- Then And Now
Well that was a suprise, with a name like Fawn I was expecting a sweet little, needing protection kind of girl, so glad she can take care of herself, I look forward to the next chapter...Jacq x
Author's Response: Yay! More stars:D I'm glad Fawn wasn't what you expected and that she gave you a nice surprise. Next chapter should be up tonight, after I've put my terror twin nephews to bed. lol thanks for the review, means a lot. Schelz x
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