Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 10:40 AM · On: ACT II
Holy crap this is just too adorable. I mean seriously -- the show poking fun at itself with being conscious of its status as a show is pretty darned clever. You da man, Toza! You da man!
Author's Response: Me da man? But yu da reader! Thanks!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 05:49 AM · On: ACT II
Hilarious, loved it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 08:48 PM · On: ACT I
Not what I expected---even better! How funny to have everyone together for the party. And the fangirl is hilarious!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 08:30 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
Great beginning! I thinkg it's sad that so many people write stories about Sam's birthday but no one remembers Dean's. Thanks for helping him celebrate the big 3-0!
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 05:42 PM · On: ACT I
Hilarious. love the fangirl
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 05:01 PM · On: ACT I
oh god, not the fangirl! and squeeing no less... the stage is set, the cast are all in place - can't wait to hear the answer to his question! Poor Dean, all overwhelmed, but love the music and the bottles - those little touches that make this script so easy to see. can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 04:07 PM · On: ACT I
A wonderful chapter, the young fangirl was perfect lol.
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 11:22 AM · On: ACT I
Exactly what I was hoping it'd end up being, a gathering of all the people they've interacted with (still alive). I still love the interspersing of reality with the show and the fangirl was perfect! Dean is perfect, by the way. He'd hate this and Sam would love standing back and smiling while watching Dean's discomfort. This is fabulous.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 09:47 AM · On: ACT I
Enter fangirl. I am giggling like a loon. "Was that a 'squee'?" GAHHH! See? Your stuff is so seriously awesome! MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Cos I've run out of other words....
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 09:29 AM · On: EPISODE TEASER
Ahhh yes!!! Another fabulous start by one of my absolute favs on this website! LOVING IT!!!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 02:10 AM · On: EPISODE TEASER
Very clever. Loved how you interwove canon with "reality", you worked it a treat. You had my undivided attention with these gems: "DEAN... patented look involving triangular, quirked-up eyebrows and mouth in small ‘o’ shape" and "SAM grins with plain happiness" - Ah ha, the image you put in our heads with these alone was worthy of your awesome blue ribbon. You have just converted me to reading scripts! Congrats and thanks!
Author's Response: I still can't believe I got a blue ribbon! *Thanks blue ribbon fairy* Thanks for reading and commenting - much love and gratitude right back atcha.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 11:49 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
Hi Toza, Joining in the 'I don't usually read scripts but' chorus here, I decided to read this when I saw your name - and the blue ribbon was just extra incentive to check it out;-) Plus I saw the January 24th in the description and said, "Dean's birthday, yummy!" Nice opening act/teaser, can't wait to see what/who comes next! Sue
Author's Response: Blue ribbon? I got a blue ribbon! WOOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOO! Sorry. Didn't even know till you pointed it out, LOL. Thanks for taking a chance and giving it a go!
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 04:51 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
I've just found out that supernatural won't be returning to Australian screens till LATER in the year so a script from you helps th ease the pain thankyou. Love the thought of Dean's 30th birthday party, especially with Missouri, I always thought she was under used in the show
Author's Response: Oh-ho, Missouri ain't the only one who's been under-used.... Stay tuned! LOL Thanks for the support - and the stars!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 04:49 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
I don't read scripts but since it's you,i thought i'd give it a go, glad i did it's great.
Author's Response: Woah, thanks! That means a lot... Thanks for the very heart-warming comments!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 02:21 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
oh, what could POSSIBLY go wrong...? I wonder... 'It's gonna be a blast' - Clue? Freudian slip? Or is that just me (got a bit of a thing for blowing them up. *grins*) Told ya we'd wait! And a script! cool...
Author's Response: You did, and you did, LOL. THANKS! I was so glad my mate slapped me and went 'but you LOVE writing these - all you need is a change of style'. She's getting many cookies right now. :)
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 10:05 AM · On: EPISODE TEASER
I NEVER read scripts but since it was you I decided to give it a try. Very well done. I really can't wait to see what comes next - loved the interspersing of "reality" with "episode." And the ominous "what could go wrong?" - from a psychic no less - yeah love it. My secret hope? That we get to see a lot of past characters in this one. Thanks for a good read. And most especially thanks for actually making it look like a script. I usually don't read script because any that I have read look like it's from writers that don't know how to do descriptions so they just make it all dialogue. That is obviously not the case here.
Author's Response: Awww! Woah! Cool! NOOO! Really? Gaaaah! Sorry, can't really think straight, LOL. People seem to like this direction... I'm still teaching myself formatting as I go, so thanks for mentioning it! Makes it worth the reading and re-reading, LOL. Hope Act I is as good!
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