Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 09:36 PM · On: ACT IV
"Don't tell Sammy I banged the stripper" - ROFL - too late! Loved that little touch when Dean realised he'd put his tee shirt on inside out. Thank heavens Sam didn't notice, although it really became a moot point when Dean finally passed out, didn't it? Had to grin at all of Pamela's blind jokes peppered throughout the story. And could just imagine what would have happened had she and Missouri gotten together. Worse than Cassie and Jamie - lol. And a good time was had by all - including the Trickster. Best birthday party ever. Thanks for the invite. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 09:25 PM · On: ACT III
Oh, gosh, poor Holly! Okay, some really great laugh moments - one of the biggest being Sarah hammering on the bathroom door and the boys answering in tandem before they realised how it would sound. And then the crowning glory was Dean saying "She said do-do." Loved Sam's monologue explanation - which almost went over my head too - LOL. Tell me, did he even take a breath during all that? And then the boys hiding the body, running into the fake Holly complete with teakettle squee on the stairs, and Dean demanding that Sam explain the dead chick walking around. Bobby raising the silver knife topped it all off, followed by Pamela being the shifter and stabbing Dean. Is it bad that I feel sorry for the stripper? LOL Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 09:06 PM · On: ACT II
Huh - there's a body in the bathroom..... Cassie and Jamie comparing notes - uh-oh, no wonder Dean ran off for whiskey. Wonder if the Trickster is going to contribute to the birthday craziness. And loved the patented looks sprinkled liberally about. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 08:58 PM · On: ACT I
And the list goes on....and on...and on - and it got funnier with every addition. Loved the fangirl - and Dean just had to put the mockers on himself by asking that final question, didn't he? What indeed could go wrong......*cue scary music*... Oh, forgot to mention - loved Dean rescuing the power cord when Sam couldn't find it. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 08:48 PM · On: EPISODE TEASER
Well, this is a first for you and me both. You don't usually write 'em, and I don't usually read 'em. As for formatting - well, I've always believed that there is a major-arse demon in the formatting keys, just waiting for some poor unsuspecting author to come along. Unfortunately, all I can help you with is an exorcism..... Intriguing so far - can't wait to see where you're going to go with this, especially with that look of panic on Dean's face at the close of the scene. And whatever has Sam got planned for his big brother's 30th? Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 10:16 AM · On: ACT IV
Fabulous! I thought maybe the Trickster got the stripper but you surprised me yet again. Love Dean's idea of a good party---"got stabbed, got laid, got hammered."
Author's Response: Wow thanks, LOL. Glad you liked it! Isn't that the definition of a good party though? ROFL
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 10:03 AM · On: ACT III
This is sooooo Entertaining! I love how everyone want sthe fangirl to be killed because she's so annoying. You've also managed to find the perfect villain. the motive is hilarious and the banter back and forth between the characters is hilarious! Love me that Trickster! Poor Dean, the stripper finally arrives and he can't enjoy her.
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 10/03/09 04:26 PM · On: ACT III
Aww poor stripper...
Author's Response: "Poor stripper"? She got to bang Dean, didn't she? Not feeling a lot of pity for her there, ROFL. Thanks for reading and reviewing - and for the stars! Better than pie!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 10/03/09 04:06 PM · On: ACT II
Oh so it's one of THOSE parties. The 'murder-she-wrote' inspired ones. Mystery! Murder! And an unlikely killer in the midst of their party! Dum dum duuuummmm......!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 10/03/09 03:53 PM · On: ACT I
Ahh the 'squeee'.... :) *sighs*
Reviewer: Cali Winchester (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 05:08 PM · On: ACT IV
Okay that was so funny. I can't stop laughing. Especially about the stripper. I might check back when I stop laughing. This was like really excellent though. Two thumbs up for this story. I think Dean would rate this as five whiskey bottles. LOL.
Author's Response: Dude! I got 5 whisky bottles! Sweet! Seriously, thanks for reading all the way through - I know scripts aren't really too popular, so thanks!
Reviewer: bernie62 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 03:39 PM · On: ACT IV
Absolutely loved it. That was fabulous. So many funny, funny lines that hit right on the mark. Thanks so much for writing and posting this story.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Glad you made it all the way through - I know scripts aren't for everyone, but I needed summat different. :) Thanks for your time and your review!
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 03:57 PM · On: ACT IV
OMG!!! Absolute winner! I'd be careful about this one.......I can picture Kripke handing it over to Ben Edlund saying, "Here's one for season 10" LOL You even got Steve Carlson in there!! Incredible! Great job all around!
Author's Response: O my dog, don't say that - I'm still getting over Michael VS Castiel, LOL. And I'm sorry, I had to have Steve Carlson (and Jensen on backing!) for the last little Real Life dig. It just begged to be poked with a stick, that one. Thanks for reading and reaching the end! And stars are always so very welcome! Ta muchly!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 05:51 PM · On: ACT IV
Thanks for writing this, it was a fun read.
Author's Response: As always, ta for reading! You always get in there and leave solid comments, it's always good to see your name pop up! Thanks for giving it a chance, even though it was a script. :)
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 03:07 PM · On: ACT IV
Okay, just read this and it was awesome. It was surprisingly different - made me think of that Bruce Willis show (which I still need to watch) Moonlighting. You have a terrific sense of humour! I love that. ^_^ Anyway, it was a great read!
Author's Response: Holy crap - guess which show I watched all of seasons one and two of last week? Yeah, Moonlighting! Always loved that show, ROFL. Thanks for reading - and the stars! Better than pie!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 10:17 AM · On: ACT IV
Oh now that was a treat! Too, too funny! I love how you described the "patented smirk #" and what not. It actually made the visuals quite easy. lol. Yeah, this was just all kinds of awesome. I love reading stuff that makes me chuckle like this one did. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Awwwww. *blushes* I'm glad you liked it. "You're my demographic," as Minnie Driver once read, LOL. Thanks!
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 10:09 PM · On: ACT IV
fantastic ending to a fantastic story.It's nice to be able to laugh at something after all the angst thanks for writing
Author's Response: No no no - thank YOU for reading! Seriously, ta very much. It's nice to know if a contrast to angst is appreciated. :)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 06:45 PM · On: ACT IV
heehee - drunken sleepy dean, very cute! lovely story - great fun reading it, so i can only imagine what writing it would have been like! catch you next time!
Author's Response: Aww, ta very much. It was so much fun. Thanks for the support and confidence!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 04:10 PM · On: ACT III
Great chapter and a great party lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm actually very sad that the last chapter ever will go up tomorrow night, Wednesday 3rd February. I'm enjoying this one so much, but all good things and all that. :) Thanks for following!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 04:54 PM · On: ACT III
aw, poor dean. stabbed, stripper screaming instead of - well, stripping. And i just bet he doesn't get any cake! still pushing the buttons - and can't wait for more, as always!
Author's Response: Glad it's going over well! Just one more act, and I shall be searching for the next coming thing...
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 04:40 PM · On: ACT III
Cool, annoying Fangirl gets murdered, i agree with the trickster, this is the best birthday party ever.
Author's Response: Aw, poor Dean - this is the best birthday ever? You Trickster, you. Just kidding. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 09:11 AM · On: ACT III
Sam's little rant about how bringing back dead characters is a bad idea was priceless, but I think my all-time favourite line thus far is "She stabbed you! On your birthday!" Words cannot describe how much I love this. You are a Supernatural scripting/writing genius.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. This is the most fun I've had in ages. Thanks for staying with it! Only one more act to go...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 06:40 PM · On: ACT II
Love all Dean's quips! You've captured him perfectly. I especially like, "two's a crowd. Three's a group rate." Hilarious!
Author's Response: I thank you - glad you're liking it so far! New chapter/act III up Saturday night after I get in from work. ;)
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 05:00 PM · On: ACT II
I can see why your having so much fun writing this its hilarious, keep up the 3am vodka and tacos if this is what you come up with! thanks for writing
Author's Response: ROFL - have got in fresh cranberry juice and best Stoli, and will pick up taquitos on the way home tonight. It's the least I could do... Thanks for reading and reviewing - and the stars!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 03:53 PM · On: ACT II
oh, there's a bad guy at the party - but whodunnit? (Colonel Mustard? Lady Penelope? Okay, so I'm mixing it up a bit, but you get the drift...) Poor Dean - so embarrassed, hiding in the kitchen at his own party?! That's just mean. Love it! Can't wait for Act III - you write scripts beautifully hun!
Author's Response: Awwww, shucks. I didn't think scripts were really what people wanted or expected, but I had to do summat different or just die of monotony... If you see what I mean! Thanks for the vote of confidence - means a lot!
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