Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed)
23/01/09 07:54 AM · On:
Amazing, you have done it again. You put this chapter up and I can't help but get drawn into it. This story is very creepy and has a very horror movie like feel to it. Coupled with the emotional distress both brothers are loaded with, it makes for one awesome plot. Your OC's are great too, especially Olivia, who already wiggled her way into my heart. So both brothers got hurt and Sam wakes up, having forgotten about Dean coming back from hell, matter off fact, it looks like he has forgotten that he already sobered up. Hope Dean is not to bad, being left behind. He will be out of his mind when he wakes up without Sam and the Impala around. I am biting my nails for an update. Isn't it next Friday already? Or maybe, if I'm really good, would you consider updating a little early? Please! Hugs, Vonnie
I tried replying to your email finally - that's me being very slack in keepng up with correspondence again... and it wouldn't send. So I'll try again in a few days and see if it goes through.
Thanks for that. It's been a wee while since I did anything with ghosts - I've been sort of honing in on the brothers lately. So this is sort of an easing back into the spooky genre.
But, sadly, that's it for the ghost - the hunt was all over in the first chapter....well, the ghost hunt, anyway. The brother hunt has just begun.....Jules
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed)
23/01/09 07:37 AM · On:
Oh, excellent beginning!!!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. Season 4 has a lot of angst to tap into, and I'm being drawn to it like a bee to a flower. That's rather terrible of me.... Anyway, hope you enjoy the ride - lots of lovely angst coming. And a bit of a joyride.....Jules
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed)
23/01/09 06:04 AM · On:
OK, you have my attention, now, can you tell me what the heck just happened there?????
I like the way you've written the boys in this, I know what you mean though about it being hard to get a grip on them this season, they seem to change with almost every episode and then they have a moment when you don't feel that they have changed at all. Strange sometimes!
Nice start, can't wait for the rest!
I know what you mean - both boys are carrying so much baggage that it's a wonder they aren't complete basket cases by now. But the flashes of the old relationship are still there - like Sam's reaction to the teddy bear in Wishful Thinking, and that wonderful look between them during the pool scam at the start of eppy 9. I'm hanging on to the hope that their brotherly bond will outlast everything that heaven and hell will throw at them.
As for what's happening - well, it will be explained in great detail in chapter 2, but basically Sam's been rewound a few months - he thinks Dean's still in hell. And things are about to get interesting....Jules