Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter, poor Sam. And not easy for Dean to witness how bad Sam was when he died. And always glad when you have a reason to bring Bobby!!
Author's Response: Oh - I so love Bobby! I was a bit worried that I was bringing him in too often, but there's just so much good stuff I can use him for! It's almost as tempting as chocolate to have an excuse to drag Bobby into a fic. And no, it wasn't easy for Dean to see how devastated Sam was, and how low he sank. Maybe it will finally get through to him just how much his little brother cares... Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yup, simple hunt. Done with the poltergeist, and done with the big brother...
Author's Response: Hey, my friend! Hope everything is all right with you. And yep, simple hunt...*rolls eyes*... when is anything in their lives simple, eh? Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 12:26 PM · On: Epilogue
Thanks for another great story!! You're one of my favorites. Is this your answer for "Sex and Violence". I liked the way yours went. I miss Sam and Dean talking. Those boys really need to sit down and have a heart to heart. DESPERATELY!! "It doesn't make you weak or less of a man", Thanks for letting Sam tell him that. I like your take on what John went through in Hell as well. I'm sure Dean hasn't thought of that, because he's so rapped up in his own guilt. I loved this story, and even though they finally had a heart to heart in the end, they still both have their own thoughts about themselves their not sharing. Great way to write it. I look forward to your next story. Keep the coming!!
Author's Response: Hi, Sharon, Yes, it sort of is my answer to 4:14, but also my answer to the end of 4:10, and Dean's big reveal. They really do need to talk, though, but it's hard to get through that Winchester stoicism. And let's face it, John was never big on explaining anything, so the boys didn't have a good role model for caring and sharing - they learned his lesson about keeping secrets only too well.... Thanks for reading and reviewing, hon. Jules
Reviewer: okedoke (Signed) · Date: 21/02/09 01:22 AM · On: Epilogue
great story as always. I lurk for a reason,expressing myself in words has always made me very uncomfortable.But I have to tell you I have read all your stories and am waiting for new ones all the time. Thanks! okedoke
Author's Response: Thank you so very much - that is special. I know how hard it is to stop lurking - I was a lurker for a long time, and sometimes I still do - especially if it's a rough week. So I know what an effort it is, and how nerve-wracking it is, to come out of lurkdom. And I do appreciate it. Take care, Jules
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 08:30 PM · On: Epilogue
Excellent, as always!! Loved it. Denise
Author's Response: Hey, Denise! Thank you for that. Glad you enjoyed it. And I have to catch up on your latest too - I've been a bit of a hermit this week with one thing and another... Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 05:24 PM · On: Epilogue
This is so perfect in the way that you just fixed everything that was broken about the show. (Although I still love Supernatural, I don't like the direction too much) Love the way Sam refuses to believe Dean is back, even after he regains his memories. He has to dig the grave out, he has to go through the agony and even when Dean finds him he has to put his hand on his chest. Reminds me a little of doubting Thomas in the bible, how he had to touch Jesus' wounds to believe. You caught the emotions so well, Sam's fear, if he would believe his memories, he might wake up and find it was all a dream. Dean's way of handling his brother was awesome. No scolding, just plain brotherly love. The best part was the talk in the morning. In typical Winchester fashion, it can't be done sitting at the table or on the be, no it's in the bathroom with Sam sitting on the can, although as Dean points out, he is just soaking his head, so technically it doesn't count as being on the can. Love the banter you used to lighten up the conversation. So now they are finally talking and with it there comes understanding. Dean is able to restore some of Sam's faith and Sam sets Dean straight about hell, well somewhat. And he tells him that he has always been his hero. I love your use of Superman vs. Hancock. I think it makes Dean understand that he doesn't have to be perfect, that even broken, drunk and down in the dumps (hell) he will always be Sam's hero. At the same time he sees his brother for the first time as what he has become, an equal and he acknowledges it, which is exactly what Sam needs. And then you ended on a light and funny note. So supernaturally perfect, it's difficult to express. Really moved me and through me for a loop. I can't wait for your next story. Hope your Lupus isn't acting up, what a terrible thing to have. I'm glad you are finding purpose and strength to go on. I can understand that there have to be days when it's tough. You sure have a lot to give though. The way you write tells me you are very deep and sensitive to other peoples feelings. I'm really glad to get to know you a little through your writing. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Awww, Vonnie, you make me blush! Season 4 is scaring the bejeezus out of a lot of us at the moment. Not just with the boys, but with what they are being forced into. They've both got so much baggage, that the cracks are bound to keep appearing - especially with the weight of saving the world on their young shoulders. Oh, the talk - lol. Well, the Winchesters don't do normal, so why not have a heart-to-heart in the bathroom? ROFL! And despite the bitter argument in episode 14, I still believe the brotherly love is there - that bond is just being seriously stretched by the circumstances they are finding themselves pushed into. And I also think that Dean does have a bit of a hard time seeing Sam as all grown up - possibly because he could be scared that Sam won't need his big brother any more. But I believe that Sam will always need him - not because he's weak or needs protection, but because of their unique bond, and the fact that Dean is just as important to Sam as Sam is to Dean. And yes, I'm crossing my fingers, toes and everything else that their bond survives - and so do they.... Thank you hon, for another awesome review, and for reading. *huge hugs* Jules
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 02:30 PM · On: Epilogue
Another great story, Mizpah. Looking forward to the next one A Lurker
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I know how nerve-wracking it is to come out of lurkdom - I was a dedicated lurker for about twelve months before I ventured to post a reply in a forum - and you know, I never went back to that thread to see if anyone replied..... So stoked that you enjoyed this, and that you took the time to tell me so. Hopefully we might catch up briefly at the convention - I think Cookie6 mentioned that you might be there? I'm going on the Sunday. And I've got major butterflies already - LOL. Jules
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:49 AM · On: Epilogue
Great ending, all very emo, and I didn't think that all the talk in the bathroom between them helped Dean's hatred of himself. Great work can't wait for the next one from you.
Author's Response: Thanks for that, Maureen. No, I don't think it helped Dean very much - he became that which he hated during his time in Hell. That was the ultimate torture for someone who's life's work has been saving people. And Dean didn't have a very good opinion of his self-worth before he went to Hell - there's probably nothing left of it now.... Jules
Reviewer: bibikftlc (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 10:39 AM · On: Epilogue
"Hell. What you had to go through." Sam drew in a shaky breath. "Havin' me as a brother." That was sad but at the same time it was nice to see Dean telling him that he was a pain in the ass but that he never hated having Sam as his brother. I could listen to Dean's thoughts clearly: "You're the best deal I could ever had." The humor at the end restored some of their balance and lifted their spirits; I LOL with:"Granted, you're more like Hancock than Superman, but I guess I can live with that." That was classic Sammy. I totally loved this story and I thank you very much for sharing it with us. See you next week!
Author's Response: Thank you - that's so wonderful to hear your feedback. I often wonder what is going on in Sam's head - we don't always see behind the mask, but I can imagine that Sam being Sam, he would have a few truckloads of guilt stored up in there - especially after Dean going to hell for him. I recall how gutted he looked at the end of The Kids Are Alright, when he found out that all his mother's friends and associates had been systematically wiped out to cover the YED's tracks - such a weight on his young shoulders. So chuffed that you liked the Hancock line - Sam's got a rather sharp sense of humour - it doesn't come out very often, but when it does, he gets some pretty good zingers off, doesn't he? Jules
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 09:17 AM · On: Epilogue
Great chapter and great story. This was a perfect ending for this story. I just love how the boys come back together in the end. They so needed the brotherly moment. I kinda miss that in Season 4. I just love your stories and have gone back to reread all of your previous ones you have here. Again, many thanks for taking the time to share with us. I will always continue to be a huge fan. You have done an excellent job with the boys and I look forward to your newest story. Take care and many hugs till next time!!!! hugs to you always, Jane
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jane. Yes, the boys' relationship has certainly changed - you have to look hard for the brotherly moments, but they are there - just not as obvious as they used to be. Both brothers have been changed so much by what has happened. It's a wonder they've held onto their sanity. Aww, you've been going through my old stuff? *blush, blush, blush*...thank you for that. The first few were a little rough - I think I've sort of got the handle on this writing stuff now - lol. Jules
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:36 AM · On: Epilogue
Wonderful story. I loved the set up with the ghost at the beginning, making it a very interesting hunt from the start. I loved the aftermath and all of Sam's confusion. I loved that they got to say all the things that I wished they would say to each other.
Author's Response: Thank you - I wish we'd get to see a few more of those quieter moments on screen- but then again, it gives we writers some lovely material to work with, so I suppose I should be careful what I wish for - lol. Thanks for reading, and reviewing. I figured that Sam's mind would definitely be chewing over what Dean had revealed, so it made sense for it to rewind back to the worst time of his life after that bonk on the head. Hmmm....I really have to stop whacking them over the head, don't I...? Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:21 AM · On: Epilogue
Another brilliant story from you, thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! The next story goes back to a simpler time - lol. As if anything ever was simple for those poor boys! Jules
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 05:32 AM · On: Epilogue
That was sheer awesomeness. Looking forward to Chain Reaction now. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. It was great having you along for the ride. Jules
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 03:51 AM · On: Epilogue
"your more like Hancock than superman" I love that line! another fantastic story thankyou. looking forward to next week, I'm happy to go back to season 1 for a bit, season 4 so far is killing me!
Author's Response: Thanks for that. Funnily enough, my beta had real trouble with that line, as she hadn't heard of the Will Smith movie - so I spammed her with links and video clips and murmurs of sympathy for her not getting out much - LOL! And I know what you mean about S4 - Cookie6 and I talked for two hours on the phone the other weekend after she'd seen 4:14 - she was so shaken by it, and what it could mean. I haven't seen the episode as yet, but I saw the fight scene on YouTube - and I'm still biting my nails over it.... Jules
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 17/02/09 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very good. Come on Sam -- do it -- get rid of Ruby!! Thanks so much.
Author's Response: LOL - I think we'd all like to see that little scene, and the sooner the better. Ruby's up to no good, I can just feel it. Thanks for this - glad you are enjoying it. Jules
Reviewer: bibikftlc (Signed) · Date: 15/02/09 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 4
This story keeps getting better and better; I loved Sam's threat at the end becasue no matter what, I still don't like Ruby. And Dean's performance in the beginning was hilarious.
Author's Response: I must admit, I was curious about her in S3, but I definitely think she's bad news now. Especially for Sam - she's got plans for him, I'm sure, and none of them good. So happy that you liked Dean's idea of payback. Jules
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
brilliant chapter, Dean's handling of nurse Ratchet was priceless, I'll be laughing about that for days! can't wait to see what happens when Sammy finds out Deans not on the grave.
Author's Response: Lol - so stoked that I could give you a laugh. I could just hear Dean's voice in my head when I was writing that scene. As for Sam finding an empty grave - well, if it's empty, he's in for a rethink of his plans - lol. Jules
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wonderful chapter Jules! OMG, Dean going "subtle" on the nurse - lol. My heart goes out to Sam. He is so confused. Well, he definitely won't find what he's looking for at "Ground Zero". It must be so hard going back there for Dean. But he will still do everything for Sam. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for always updating so regularly. It's a pleasure to go to "just added" on Fridays and sure as a clockwork find your newest chapter there. Wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Dagmar. I'm with you in prayer for Fredo, by the way. Yes, Sam's very confused at the moment, refusing to believe the evidence of his own memories. As for ground zero - well, he may find what he is looking for - or hoping for..... And Dean will be rather freaked out, especially when he sees he's been "dug up". Aww, thanks for that. I hope I never disappoint you. Jules
Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter. I can feel poor Sam's pain and angst. I can feel my heart breaking for poor Sam and Dean. I hope that they both find each other soon before either one of them becomes too lost. Wow, can't I can't believe how Sam turned on Ruby. That was pretty awesome. Didn't see that plot bunny coming. Again, I am huge fan of your stories and your talent. Thanks again for sharing and I can't wait until the next chapter. But no need to worry I will be happily waiting. I am a huge fan and will be there until the end of the story. Thanks again, hugs, Jane
Author's Response: *hugs back* Hi, Jane. My heart breaks for Sam, too. I can still hear those hysterical screams at the end of S3... And don't worry, Dean's not too far away. Oh, and I'll bet Ruby got a shock too, lol. She should have known better than to hammer Sam while he was standing at his brother's grave, though. Aww, thank you so much for that. I really do appreciate it, and the time that you take to give me such feedback. Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter. Dean waking up to find Sam gone again and the only thing he thinks about is going after him, except punishing Nurse Ratched. Now that was funny, Reminded me of a little boy - she touched me. That was awesome. Sam is so confused. Memories coming back and I can tell at times he almost is sure Dean is back yet then it's gone and he just has to be sure. I loved how well Dean knows his brother, figuring out where Sam would go in very little time. It's only good he has Bobby, I don't think he could make it on his own with the concussion he has. And Sam, finally reaching his destination, starting to drink again because he just can't take it. Ruby showing up, trying to help but not really knowing what's going on and almost getting exorcised herself, wow, that was a bummer. Sam is really in a bad state of mind. Drunk, confused, desparate and hurting, not a good thing. Hope Dean and Bobby get there soon. Well, I know it will be at least a week. Can't hardly wait though. Why do you have to be such a darn great writer, it makes it so much harder to wait. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Hi, Vonnie, Oh, yes, I couldn't let Nurse Ratched get away unscathed. And Dean was just the boy to do it. And Sam's still pretty addled, and not believing his memories, despite the fact that they are coming thick and fast during the drive back to Pontiac. But Dean isn't far - let's just hope he gets there before Sam decides to take off again. Oh, thank you for that. *hugs* Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
Sam was going to Dean's grave, i never guessed, nice one with the nasty nurse, serves her right lol.
Author's Response: Yes, it was the one place where he could get absolute proof that Dean was back - empty grave means living brother. Thanks for that - I actually enjoyed that little bit of revenge on Dean's part. Jules
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
Uh-oh! Definitely not going to find what he's looking for. Poor, poor Sam. And you know, I never really thought about how creepy it would be for Dean to return to his grave site, but digging your way out of a pine box can't have been pleasant. Returning to that spot would likely stir up all kinds of awful memories -- and Dean's so good at squashing those into a tiny hole. lol. GREAT chapter. I could not stop laughing at Dean's "she touched me!" accusation. That was positively INSPIRED!
Author's Response: Well, he could find what he's looking for...he's looking for proof, after all. And yes, it is going to freak Dean out even more to walk back into that clearing, remembering his awakening in total darkness and six feet under, followed by his climb up through the dirt. Not his ideal vacation place. Oh, thanks for that - I'm so chuffed that you enjoyed Dean's idea of payback. And I just had to have him tell the people in the waiting room, just to really make a scene - LOL. Jules
Reviewer: crashing_nightingales (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ah, poor Sammy, the kid really breaks my heart sometimes. That plan of his doesn't exactly seem foolproof to me, though. Let's hope that he hasn't got something too stupid planned. Driving drunk & w/a concussion can't be too good for him either.
Author's Response: He really does, doesn't he? Some days I just want to hug him. Well, no, the plan isn't exactly foolproof, but Sam's determined, and we all know what he can be like when his mind's made up.... It isn't too stupid, but it's a bit - well - freaky.... Jules
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great job---Love it!!!Poor Sam so confused and when Dean wakes up---OMG---Love Bobby being part of this. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for that, Cherie. I love Bobby - I'd love to see much more of him in the show, actually. He's been such a great surrogate dad for the boys. And yes, when Dean wakes up, he's going to have an even bigger headache than the one from his concussion - LOL! Jules
Reviewer: bibikftlc (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'd like to tell that nurse what's on my mind...or better yet, I'm gonna let Dean deal with her.
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry - when Dean finds out about Nurse Ratched, it's going to be payback time.... Thanks so much for reading. Jules
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