Reviews For A Deep and Endless Night
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/09 09:01 PM · On: Where No One Notices the Contrast of White on White
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/09 02:09 PM · On: Where No One Notices the Contrast of White on White
Awesome way to end this first part of the story (and I count on reading the sequel very soon, you know you can't leave it here!!) with the angels debating on our groups' destination - instantly became fond of Raphael ("they grow on you", so nice!), not so sure about Ariel (she's Isabel's guide I'm afraid) though, it scares me she so strongly believes Sam is an evil menace that has to be stopped and a "threat to us all, but especially to Dean". Hope Castiel will be right that "it is his brother that will save him"! Can't wait, thanks for an amazing read!!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 02:24 PM · On: Frail Grasp on the Big Picture
Lots and lots of angst, very tense atmosphere and more revelations about Sam's and Dean's role in this game and it's hugeness is scary, Dean destined to be the world's savior and Sam in high danger to be killed for using his powers! Personally fully understood Sam - the demon's words were unbelievable cruel and venomous - and felt very uncomfortable with Isabel's rather fanatic attitude (fortunately Layla is the one who is with Dean right now!); actually won't calm down until Sam and Dean are together again (while repeating "this is not a death fic" like a mantra). I'll try to be prepared for the final round, wonder if the battle takes place at the Fountain. Fantastic chap!!!
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 09:59 PM · On: Frail Grasp on the Big Picture
Oh no!!! How come chapter 17 and 18 are repeats of 15 and 16? Is there an end to this?
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 03:00 PM · On: Assassination Standing Still
OMG, actually a bit at loss of words here (very glad though you assured this is not a death fic, started to panic a bit!); anyway, breathtaking chapter. The moment Dean fell and Sam was so devastated, thinking he failed his brother again was heartbreaking. And now Isabel was charged with killing Sam, what a desperate situation! You will update soon, right? Please, cause I really have to know what happens. Thanks for another great read!!!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/09 04:35 AM · On: Restless Shadows and Firelight
An action filled chapter, aah enjoyed it, great to see how they complement each other; funny ("Can't handle the awesomeness" :))!) and exciting. So good to have the old cocky and flirting Dean back here. Definitely "nice work"! Can't wait for the update!!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 02:29 PM · On: A Bad Connection Some Might Say
You bet this worked, I'm nearly out of my mind after reading this chapter - "Whoever can control this one, Matt continued, can control what gets out of Hell. Whoever controls this pool is guaranteed a place of power...And you two blokes are gonna help us get it." We're right at the core of things and everything is at stake now, grand!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/03/09 01:04 PM · On: Voice Down the Corridor
This scary situation reminded me a lot of Dean's chess dream (I could be totally wrong here, but I can't help it); adding crazy Fred to this "game" Sam, Dean and the sisters (the Blades and the Vessels, brilliant!) need to be ingenious tacticians and fighters to survive this, really wow!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 06:34 AM · On: Seven O'Clock and I Wanna Rock
Gripping chapter, our four are in big trouble now!! Great club scenes of the two couples, so differerent and yet so connected, marvellously written!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/09 09:09 AM · On: Blind Man for a Watchdog
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 03:57 AM · On: Round Trip Journey in Your Head
Dean's chess dream was brilliant, much more than a dream considering the demons' talk before, the Blade and the Vessel come as a pair, scary prospects for our group!!! Very nice bedroom scene, enjoyed Dean and Isabel, but especially Dean later telling Sam "I'll tell you what I got faith in, Sammy...You and me. That's all I need." This faith and trust will be essential for their fight! Great one - and yep, it's Silent Lucidity, perfect choice!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 06:51 AM · On: Pain in the Dream Domain
Graphic scenes when the girls patched Dean up, enjoyed though (the leeches - "I think I might be sick", nice). Most of all I liked the dream-connection part and the sisters' story, so fascinating! The line at the end of this chapter, answering Sam's question who the sisters serve, "Looking up at her, Sam could see the light from the living room lamp reflected off her pale eyes, a dozen little stars twinkling in an early morning sky" was simply wonderful, perfect! More please!
Reviewer: cozmikfaerie06 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 05:35 PM · On: A Glimpse Beyond the Illusion
great story, looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 08:03 AM · On: A Glimpse Beyond the Illusion
Just wow, this is gonna be one of my favorite chapters, had everything, a breathtaking encounter with the demon and some stunning revelations about the brothers' fate, their fear (brilliant sequence!) and the fallout of Dean's deal and everything so perfectly dovetails with the case! Couldn't enjoy it more!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/02/09 04:09 AM · On: Don't Rely On Open Eyes to See
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 02:06 PM · On: Cowboys and Angels, They All Take a Shine to You
Brilliant chapter, first Sam's fascinating reflections about their faith and his powers, his hope for salvation, especially for Dean (totally lovely), leading to the wonderful talk with Brandon (cool kid) and his mom; you portrayed their beliefs in a very sensitive way, enjoyed this part a lot. The hot "angel" with the grey eyes, well that's an interesting hint!! And you had one of the nicest bitch-jerk exchanges ever in this chapter, extra thanks for that!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 01:33 PM · On: I Love to Watch a Woman Dance
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 01:57 PM · On: The Sounds of a Switchblade and a Motorbike
The plot really is tightening, the demon brothers, especially Grant are downright scary and they are after Sam and Dean! Very much enjoyed when our guys tailed the sisters (twins, intriguing!), just loved the cat-part and it seems Sam came off better than Dean for the moment (I do like Isabel, hope I'm right about her). And again, everything is so well balanced here, showing it is not just a hunt, it's so much about Sam and Dean and the aftermath of what they have been through, you had a very special line in this chapter about Sam's feelings to it, "He missed the small things sometimes but not enough to give up his brother. The Library of Congress couldn't compare with that." Perfect!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 01:25 PM · On: Those Who Fear Are Lost
This was a deep and painful insight into Dean's world after hell, the nightmares overshadowing his life to an alarming extent. Very glad Sam is aware, I have a hunch it will be important for them to come through this case. Intense and oppressive atmosphere, great!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 10:57 PM · On: The Mask I Wear Is One
Nearly missed this story and what a shame this would have been, it's fantastic! I absolutely love the way you are using the sibling theme here, so eerie and thrilling, also enjoy how Sam and Dean interact (the wonderful humour mixed with their deep fears, great). Can't wait to find out what's behind the mysterious girl.
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