Again, so powerful and so so sweet and sad. I feel that they are talking to each other, both would sacrifice their own lives for the others and neither could live without the other. Am I close???

Schelz

Author's Response: you are right hunni!!! but don´t forget papa Winchester!!! thank you so much for being so kind of reading and reviewing all my poems!

This is beautiful, Maria! And I think it could apply to both Winchester boys, so...I'm gonna stick with that theory! This is wonderfully written and rhymes nicely. Great!

Author's Response: Aww you make me flush..thank you very much for your kind words. I really don´t know if this poem rhymes or not hahaha as i don´t speak much english. Thank you again.

great.........could be any of them.....they never admit enough how much the three of them really need or love one another .......You've got great insight.......... an old soul

Author's Response:

wow!!!

****sobbing and flushing*****

thanks i do think i´m an old soul in this beautiful world.

And yea the 3 winchester men are speaking, they were all in my head telling me this and showing pics of their adventures. 

So I just got a chance to look you up on this site and I see that you are a poet! How wonderful. I couldn't write a poem to save my life. I thought the one you inserted into your bio was incredibly sad -- but moving, and rather thought-provoking as well.

This one, though, is very touching. I think that it's not just one Winchester, and it's not just one time in their lives. I think it could be John, Dean, or Sam, and that it could be a prayer of sorts that drifts through their minds when their lives turn dark.

Thanks so much for posting. I'm off to explore your others...

GS

Author's Response:

I´m glad you like my bio poem jaja , it´s very sad but i think it has a hopefull end. You know you aren´t alone and your point of view  isn´t right, let me show the real life...etc...

Bingo!!! you get it. This is a poem i wrote for all the Winchesters. They fight with each others but they can´t be without the other... To write this poem i saw a lot of pics from the epis, i saw their eyes, their hands, their shoulders...the body tell us much more than the words. and their bodies were screaming i love you so hard that i couldn´t understand why they don´t hug or thouch each other.... this crazy men are killing me jaja.

You can read this poem as written by Daddy for Mom, Daddy for Dean or Sam, Dean for Daddy or Sam or Sam for Daddy or Dean!!! 

 

Ok soo  I'm gonna say that it could be all three of them at some point in thier lives.

John when Mary died. Sam when dean is dying and Dean when sam gets possesed.

It is realy good. thanks for posting.

 

Author's Response: Finally the review i was waiting!!! Of course hunni they are the 3 Winchester who are talking. For me they are just the same.....they fight for love and with love for each other. Inside a winchester mind you could find different things but 1 thing in commoun for all of them...LOVE  for each other and a strong connection with each one of them.

awesome! i love this poem, it rocks! great job!!

Author's Response:

I´m glad you like it.

thank you very much for your warm words. 

I think It's Dean.

Author's Response:

Maybe! jajja

I´ll tell you some day but not here because i want that the readers could dreams about this.

Thank you for allowing a poem in this site.