Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/12/09 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
An amazing story! You've captured the co-dependent love of the two brothers fabulously. "No shit-eating grin to make him feel better. No poorly hidden concern. No slap on the knee. No lame jokes to get his mind off the darkness claiming him." Very expressive sum of the big brother tools Dean uses on Sam. "I'm not..." Sam swallowed, looking down as a single tear fell. "I"m not me," he finally said, voice cracking, "without...you." biting his lip, he looked to his big brother for understanding. "Ya know?" he asked miserably, trying and failing to pass off a smile. "Yeah," Dean's rasped thickly, tears in his own eyes. "I know." He knew. A very touching passage. Dean would know the pain of losing his brother, losing part of himself.
Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 06/12/09 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! That's just awesome. I love how you wrote this way before season 5 but it has the part about them keeping each other human.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
God, is this beautiful, sad and moving, perfect!! "I'm not me, he finally said, voice cracking, without you", yeah, that says it all, very very special, thank you so much for writing!!
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
You..are so talented, it scares me...I LOVE your stories, I love everything about them, lots of stories I've read are good, but most of the times, the boys are too...emo, I guess, they do and say stuff that would NEVER happen on the show, then there are some, where they're not caring enough, it's just all jokes and fun, but yours...is perfect, the boys are perfect, this stuff, I could DEFINITELY see happening on the show...you're like another Sera Gamble, you seem to think like her...your stories and everything in them are...perfect. ;D
Author's Response: Oh, gosh wow. *blushes* Thank you.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
There have been few stories which have moved me to actual tears - and this did me in three times. You have captured Sam's desperate fear and disorientation after the hell of six months on his own, then suddenly to have the clock wound back like those months never happened and Dean restored to him, alive, whole, and having no memory of the nightmare run of Tuesdays followed by that black Wednesday. Oh, and I'm with GotTheShining - I adored that line of thought about the little hitchhikers when Sam latched onto Dean's jacket - and also the bit about it having been a long time since he was Sam's binkie - that tickled me. And poor exhausted and confused Sammy - waking up to find Bobby standing in the room, and immediately panicking because he thought it was the Trickster come to take Dean away again. Really nice job - thank you for sharing. Jules
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it...even though it made you cry. ...although, ..okay, is it wrong to be kinda happy about that? lol Thank you!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow, that was very heavy....and now the lyrics 'he's not heavy, he's my brother' won't get out of my brain. :) I enjoyed Sam reverting to his childhood. While showing the depth of his emotion it added a little silliness. Picturing a 6'4 man curled up in his lap or falling and stumbling to catch up was darkly humorous. I loved the 'hitchiker' comment!
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting!
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