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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

what a horrible cliff hanger!   You love torturing us with your evil ways!

Excellent story!  I'm eager to read more!  Poor kerri.  Sometimes strong, independent women make foolish choices like those lame chicks in the B-rated movies.

I hope Dean doesn't lose Kerri.  I don't think he could handle that.  and Sam hiding Ev inside him---that's not going to end well. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

No Sam!  Don't do it!  Don't give into the darkside!  Unfortunately we know it has to happen.  I see now how you incorporate Sam's hiatus into your story. 

"But now those same defenses were tearing them apart, and Dean didn’t know how to get passed the walls they’d all built around themselves."  A perfect statement in showing how their protective defenses have become hindrances.  Very expressive!

 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 14

Damn Mag, what an ending. YED. And Kerri gone. And Dean in the way. And he'll be so pissed. And... Ugh, I want more!!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

Riveting chapter. So the YED is behind this plan, getting Sam and Kerri and killing Dean. He' underestimating Dean, Dean is going to fight to keep Sam and Kerri safe. I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for more. Great work Maggie.

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Suspense is building up.... can't wait for more...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

Sam and Evelyn to the rescue? I'm pretty sure this won't go smoothly... Great chapter, and I really enjoy the parallel with your other story. Lookind forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 13

Another great chapter! 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Terrific chapter Maggie. What a twist, Sam's working with Evelyn to protect Kerri. This is a big secret to keep from Dean, hope nothing bad is going to happen. So captivating, I want more already.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Very interesting chapter, and I do love the fact you integrate elements of the show in the series. But there's still a lot to discover...

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 12

What's happening to Sam, did he's going to use his powers thinking that he'll help Kerri and Dean or Evelyn manipulated him for evil purpose. Gripping story, I can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/06/09 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

I like how you're incorporating bits of the original into your story!  I hate to see Sam go down that road into darkness but it makes good reading.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 11

Fantastic!  There are so many fine details that are finally weaving together to make the tapestry that is this riveting story.  As much as I love finding out the deep, dark secrets, I hope that doesn't mean that you're ending the Something Lost series.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

OH MY HEAVENS!  Incredible!  I read so quickly to find the answers that I had to go back and re-read for the enjoyment.  This is wicked awesome!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great vhapter!  Evil cliffhanger!  I'm off...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Fabulous!  I've been wondering if Yellow Eyes did something to Kerri.  At least now I can put that theory to rest.

What a tricky line Sam has to walk.  He can't really talk about Ev because he doesn't want to upset Kerri but he needs to remember her and keep her a part of his life.  A tremendous passage!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 11

Coming fast huh... And big I guess. Hope Kerri will still trust the boys even after these revelations...

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

So captivating, I want more already. Can't wait for your next update Maggie, you're doing great so far.

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 17/05/09 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

So more secrets are revealed and yet more questions for Kerri, Sam and Dean.  I couldn't help but think about Mary's deal when Sam was talking to Kerri and telling her Tom had done it out of love for her.  Can't wait for more....

 

 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 10

Dean saw Evelyn and a scene from her past and the YED was there, chilling. Great update Maggie, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 10

Freaky... And I've always thought Tom was a good guy. More!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

OMG!Tom made a deal for Kerri and now it's time to pay, hope that Dean and Sam'll find a way to save her.. Awww...Sam doesn't want to let Evelyn go.The suspense is killing me, I can't wait to know what's in the room. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh common Mag, you couldn't have written just another paragraph where Sam crosses the threshold and sees.. whatever there's to be seen!!! Grrrrr. You better post the next chapter soon...

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ouch!!!  A cliffie!!!  I hope they can get some answers from Ev's little hiding place!!  Can't wait to see.....so hope RL let's you update soon!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

What a riveting, gripping story, it's like a book so good that you can't stop reading you just want to finish it to know how it'll end. Can't wait to know what Dean and Sam'll find in Evelyn's secret room.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

And the answers will have to wait the next chapter!!! HAAAAAAA!! I hate you Mag...

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