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Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked your use of repetition, it gave the poem an almost  lyric quality.

I hope you are doing much better now, and are out of the hospital.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I did read this 3 or 4 times to absorb the meaning, it feels like a journey at the start in despair but at the end his inner strength "Because I know I'll survive" is always there.

I do love poetry of all kinds, nicely done...Jacq

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very beautiful and hauntingly sad, "kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep", a wonderful image, it sounds a lot like goodbye and I do believe it shows exactly how Dean feels, weary and beaten, dead tired. Grand grand one!!

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