Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Heart That Beats
Excelent story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Somebody Paid
Wow, fantastic start. The boys are in some deep trouble here, hunters, who know all the tricks in the book! Really exciting with great action pieces, and some lovely winchester humour to top it all off. I just love Dean's one-liners. Thanks Jane
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Somebody Paid
Wow, fantastic start. The boys are in some deep trouble here, hunters, who know all the tricks in the book! Really exciting with great action pieces, and some lovely winchester humour to top it all off. I just love Dean's one-liners. Thanks Jane
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not as naturally snarky as Dean, but it's still fun to try and come up with his lines.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: A Heart That Beats
I've read this in one go and dear god, this story is simply amazing, gripping, compellingly written, one fantastic journey!! The incidents of the wishing well ep were the perfect starting point, showing how heavily Dean's time in hell weighs on both of them and their despair but also that these brothers affection and the price they are willing to pay to save each other is infinite. There are so many special lines expressing this as Dean's "There was no way his life was worth that kind of a risk, no way at all. He'd willingly gone to Hell to save Sam's life, and even though it had broken him in ways he knew would never heal, he'd do it again in a heartbeat if it meant saving his brother's soul" and Sam's "...at the moment he was struck by how valuable, how precious it was to simply have him"/"But if he could do one thing here, he had to try and at least get him to understand this, the lengths Sam was willing to go to in order to save him...It was only to get him out of Hell." So wonderful!! Just hope Dean will understand what Sam did and forgive him, it can't end like this for them - and certainly these hunters can't bring them down! Looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked those lines; they're some of my favorites as well. :)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: Damn Good Start
oh, now you just know it's all gonna go horribly horribly wrong now... love the way you've woven the wishing well hunt through this story - Sam's 'new' wish is so perfect, i wish i'd thought of it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think if Sam knew Dean remembered everything, he'd wish for that to be removed rather than getting rid of Lilith. Maybe.
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 15/01/09 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 5: Crashing Back
oooo, good story, cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! More will be coming soon.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/01/09 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Crashing Back
Great chapter, silly Sam giving the bad guys what they wanted , now what will they do with him? Please update soon. Thanks...
Author's Response: Well, poor Sam didn't really have much of a choice, did he? And yes, now what will they do with him....
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Somebody Paid
Awesome - so glad you found your way over to UnGen. I've REALLY been enjoying this story over on ff.net... and without giving away any of the upcoming chapters- I am totally in love with the way you write some of the canon characters... well done and I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters again...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased and honored to be here, and glad you like the story. :)
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Somebody Paid
great one! keep it comming!
Author's Response: Thanks! More will be coming soon.
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