Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/03/09 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

Two brilliant action packed chapters.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 12

Sierra gets more crazy in every chapter. looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 15/02/09 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

edge of my seat here... great writing. WOW poor sammy, Porr Dean having to wonder what is happening to sam.

Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

Totally enjoying this. Can't wait until the next update. Seriously, how does Sierra blame Dean for her sister's death?

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

still a wonderful story. i am hooked. great job. please keep it up

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 8

Glad Bobby's coming to help Dean, can't wait for more of this, it's a great story.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hi, Denise,

I'm replying over here because frickin' SN.tv is having problems up the wazoo - it took me four attempts to get into the forums, then it wouldn't let me get into the reply screen. Stupid computers! Stupid websites that won't play nice! Stupid "Internet explorer cannot display that webpage" message.....end of rant.

What a biatch! She just let Sam roll down the stairs - oh, wait - she helped him with an almighty shove! Heaven knows what damage has been done by the fall - that pain in his leg doesn't sound too good, and neither does the massive headache.

Thank heavens Dean rang Bobby - between the two of them, they might be able to get some information from one of Bobby's many sources and track this psycho down before she really hurts Sammy.

Wonder when Dean will realise that it's his takeaway cup that he just kicked across the car park....?

love ya work, hon!

Jules

Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

what's there to say? i really like it. 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another brilliant chapter, really exciting.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another great chapter,starting to get interesting.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well, I certainly didn't see that bus coming and apparently neither did Brianna. Yikes! I can see Dean not wanting to get too close to women after that (emotionally, that is). Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start...one comment tho you have her as a red-head when they meet and then in the last part you say raven-haired...just an observation. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you for catching my little blurb.  I went in and fixed it to fair instead of raven.  My bad...

Glad you like it.

Denise

Author's Response: I meant 'fire'!!!  Boy I must be tired.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more.

 

FYI: first you said she was "red haired" later you said "raven haired".....go with the red:)