Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
Before evaluation, . . . did I state something to get u introuble or did any of the true statements upset u. If it did I apologise, honestly I do. You are a substantial wanting in y read of interesting lectures. As a hobby of mine. You I have admired sincerly and the way it has captivated my mind within the story line and I thank you for that. To me this is a family that I like to call as a ROYAL FAMILY . . . each one of you have great elgability to become story tellers and allow someone to try and get them published so many can read it and enjoy it like I have. I have made spacific GOLDEN FOLDERS that intitles the authors name along with thier stories that nake them whom they are professionaly in a readers mind. This story remindes me of the love my brother and myself have for each other . . . except I'm the oldest and have a disability. So I'm ore like the character of SAM and he is DEAN. Now, BOBBY . . . well that is left to my husband. The RATING I will eternaly bestow on you, you may not like and if you do or don't I'd like to know. Please leave a message @ lamix1mana@yahoo.com RATING:) EMORTAL +*+*+*+ You have a powerful way of presenting great writings and it would be great to see that one day I would be able to buy your liturature of all your SUPERNATURAL WRITEINGS. Thank you, be carefull and take care of all friends and family as well as yourself. Thank you once again. Can't wait for more. ******:)
Author's Response: thank you very much for your kind words and for reading and commenting. I very much appreciate it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
This is a cliff hanger of a story. Thank you for it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/07/09 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 10
? is why do they want SAM Your story is getting to me and i'm not a hunter. Although, I'd like to be. The force that is placed between all the guys at the hide out is very COMICAL and interesting for the fact THE HUNTERS kill VAMPIERS, but have spared Forge. He has something that is still hiding and I don't know what that is. You are good.
Author's Response: No, that was Forge's big secret. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 9
This story is getting amazing and amazing in how Forge sticks to the human side instead of the dark side of human blood.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 8
I do aprreciate the consideration and devotion to thw two charcters brotherly love.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/07/09 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
Maybe this other one is Forge's long lost love . . . could be; but why did it attack SAM. This story feels like one of those Hardy boys books that allows one to choose where to go and how it will end.
Author's Response: No, the werewolves and Forge have no past connection to one another. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/07/09 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 6
I knew Forge was screwing with the boys, and this wait till BOBBY finds out he will be makeing an extra EXTRA hole that will be needing serious fixtures of not comeing back. You have been able to trick even the reader I had a mixture of Forge.
Author's Response: HEhee..thanks!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 5
Okay the chatacter of Forge is with holding evadance that the boys need and if it is a trick to hall SAM to a basement and hurt not only DEAN, but to make SAM go crazy that aint cool. There is a stall vibe that I think he is another brother of those two monsters or he is a shape shifter/warewolf.
Author's Response: Hehehee...no he's not a werewolf. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
From the point of view that you are establishing are from the show of when dean turn to mid - evil - dean . . . I like that plane, but that DEAN almost killed SAMMY.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well, the contents of the story is very cleaver in how you manage to subdue the manaer of Forge. You have placed a hidden message with in Forge.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hopefully, this great adventure wont have SAM scitzo again . . . I'm more worried on DEAN then on SAM. Forge must have been bitten 'cause as far as I know besides y brother that would eat a stake with a bit of blood comeing out I know he's no wolf. Forge is hididng something and I do not like the way he's treating SAM.
Author's Response: Yep, Forge is hiding something all right! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
What the hell is going on . . . I thought they took care of those basterds? Now what are they screwing around in Deans head?
Author's Response: It's Dean's memories, backflashes. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 03:32 PM · On: Prologue
I do suppose its SAM going through this Dream.
Author's Response: Not Sam and not a dream...hehehe Thanks for rreading.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Ahhhh....bayre....well I have to say I love Forge and this au you've created and will always be up to reading more. Ungen is losing a major talent with you leaving but rest assured I'll follow wherever you head... ;) Kel
Author's Response: Thank you on both counts. Laura
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 11
guh, how much do I love your brothers....all heart those boys ;) Sorry I've taken so long to finish this one, but I've seriously enjoyed it ;) K
Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you liked it! I think it was one of my favorites to write and read. Thanks so much! Laura
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
Great ending. Great story. Great series. I'm sad to hear you're leaving Ungen, especially as I don't like FF very much. But I'll respect your choice. See you soon...
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo...I sent you an email.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 12
Thanks for another amazing story. I'll be sorry to see you leave this site, but i will follow your stories over at FF.net.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I look forward to seeing you there.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 12
Laura, sorry to see you go. your stories have been great. i am going to have to head over to FF.net. take care Renee
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/05/09 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ugh, poor Sam, fire again. And Forge?? I guess it's a sign he's a great character if I miss him when he's not in the chapter...
Author's Response: Hehehe...thanks so much Fredo. He'll be back, promise. Laura
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
Excellant!!! but someone is missing...
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, someone is...he's going to show up soon.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
Another excellent chapter, i enjoyed that, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 10
Sam spent his days being tapped on the chest or shoulder, sometimes Dean would flip a finger through the back of Sam's hair. He got kicked and nudged in the foot or leg while they ate. Dean's elbow spent more time in Sam's side than it did near Dean's. When Sam was small Dean would take his hand when they crossed the street. Now Dean's knuckles would bounce for a second against Sam, making them both unconsciously check their steps and look both ways. Sam couldn't count the number of times when they tracked something that they'd press back to back and he'd feel Dean relax even as some ghouly thing came at them. When Sam wanted Dean's attention he yelled. More often than not Dean came running. When Dean wanted Sam's more times than not he got smacked in the knee or head. I sooo loved this paragraph, great job with the whole story and I'm looking forward to more ;) Kel
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/09 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
love the puppy, well long as it doesn't turn out that werewolves do indeed have babies ;)
Author's Response: Nope, a real puppy! Thanks for reading Kelly. Laura
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
hehehe, loved the whole, sittin' down for dinner. And Dean on constant watch, priceless ;)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
hehehe, loved the whole, sittin' down for dinner. And Dean on constant watch, priceless ;)
Author's Response: Hehee...I liked writing that. Thanks Kel! Laura
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