:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

ok, so this is the third story of yours i've read tonight and the third one that makes me think 'aww'. i really liked this. i usually don't seek out stories that involve john all that much, so when i come across them it's a treat. and poor dean, stared with the 'hard' facade of "i'm fine" at 9 yrs old. it was twistedly sweet at how proud he was of himself.

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

so so good honey!!!
DIX

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is marvelous! You expressed a father's conflicting emotions perfectly.
"Murdered his son's innocence," and "Dean the hunter" are powerful lines.

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

So wonderfully sad! Good job!

Reviewer: TheBypassed (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like that this story is in direct lineup with MEETING DEAN. The symmetry really adds to the effect, and it makes it that much more emotional when told through John's eyes, because it is the results of him both times. Really effective.

Reviewer: Impalaprincess (Signed) · Date: 30/03/07 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good story, liked how you did it through John's eyes.

Reviewer: Burrito1024 (Signed) · Date: 23/03/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey!!!! How come u did not tell me about this one!!!!! I'm gonna yell at u the next time i see u !!! I'm always supposed to be first!! But hey! I still luved it!!! Good job!!!! :)

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 20/03/07 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

No - that was good. Nice job of John realising just what he had done to his sons. Lost innocence.

Reviewer: montez (Signed) · Date: 18/03/07 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

loved this one as well. That had to be a chilling realization for John to see his 'baby' complete a hunt.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/07 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was really good. I like that you had John thinking about what he had 'created' by making Dean a hunter. Too many people write John like he was never anything more than a drill-seargent to the boys - and that he never cared. Nice to see the internal dialogue that he actually was almost remorseful for what he he has now drug Dean in to.
Great story!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 18/03/07 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was good. I liked it.

Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 18/03/07 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice. Really liked the last line.

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