Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 04:27 AM · On: Macaroni and Cheese
Dear God, this here really cracks me up, had to stop while reading the bar-scene and calm down a bit before I could continue, maybe it feels even more painful because it is Sam who is so desperately ill and for Dean this is unbearable, the fear to lose his baby brother, the one person he couldn't outlive. Are you sure you didn't make a deal yourself to be able to write like this? It's unbelievable intense, just grand!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *sends tissues and hot chocolate* I;m blushing with your compliment hon! It's too sweet *sniff* Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 03:49 PM · On: Yellow Walls
'Kay, sorry it took me so long, but I wanted to be thorough and to do it justice. Love this story a great deal, hun. Terrific and brilliant. it sounded like a metal rendition of an old folk song Heehee. Hilarious. And I love Dean singing. Did I tell you I have him and Sam hollering ('coz that sure wasn't singing) Dead or Alive as a ringtone? AWESOME. And a little embarrassing in public. A colleague once said, “Who is that shouting at you?” LOL. And of course Dean will turn every song into a metal rendition... heh.
the walls painted a soft yellow, …. yellow and blue plaid curtains. Breaks. My. Heart. You know Muffy, this is soo hard to read... I mean. The flashback and then Dean how he remembers that long ago conversation. How he loves Sam. I love the way you show their brotherly bond. Subtle but oh so sweet. It is a tough read. Tore at my soul. Sam is so weak. And Dean tries everything to make him right. And the curtains and walls just show how much Sam is the center of Dean's life. The sun he revolves around. Sounds like wincest, but you know what I mean. Dean would do EVERYTHING to make Sam better. aaawww
I found a pancake recipe I’m dying to try. HAHAHAHAHA. Only needs an apron now. And he really knows how to be a parent, a mother more like, doesn't he? All those years when he took care of lil Sammy, they sure pay out now. Love this gentle, caring, sweet side of my bad-ass hero. Although it is hard to read it because it also portrays just how much Dean is afraid of losing Sam. How much he is actually scared. This is angsty Dean but very subtly so. Like that a lot.
Christo!!!!!! I was yelling that too! Love that. He isn't himself, is he? Something happened to Sam. And the reverberations have shaken Dean to his foundations. He has changed, so fundamentally (LOL) that even Sam is a little surprised.
Loss of dignity was part of the routine now, but showering with his brother ugh. I so know what he means by that. I couldn't imagine that happening to me. I remember one time when I blacked out in the shower. My ex found me and I felt so embarrassed. Still blush at the thought. It isn't the nuditiy part. It is the feeling of utter dependence, the neediness, weakness. Hate that. And Sam shares that trait with Dean. Makes them true brothers. Both ready to help and care for the other one but incapable of accepting help. AWH.
I tried it out a couple of times. If you need me, shout. Ooooh. Dean. You can be my hero and male nurse any time. So thoughtful. Almost a little compulsive and obsessed. He wants to make it right so bad. Please Muffy, give him some good news soon. He breaks my heart, as does sick Sammy. Love em both to bits. And this story really hurts me... but in a good way, sick puppy that I am.
“I mean by myself?” The tears were starting to get the better of him again. The way he said it, Sam suddenly understood that Dean knew… JESUS. This doesn't stop making me weep. Hell. Thoughtful big bro and poor, needy Sam. They still understand each other non-verbally. Read each other like a book. And Dean makes it so easy for Sam to feel comfortable. Not just comfy but at home. He actually acknowledges Sam's need for privacy and by this Sam finds his self-esteem again. He needs to feel safe without feeling too weak and needy. Dean is the BESTEST big bro in the whole world. *hugs him tight*
lurking in the bedroom “just in case” AW. Again. *hugs him tight for being an awesome brother*
I didn’t get sucked into the show, but it was company, you know? It isn't only Sam who feels alone and depressed. Dean would never speak his mind but in admitting that a cooking show was his only company... man. That is some sad thing to say. Even by Winchester standards. The loneliness screams at you and I actually flinched when I read it and my right hand covered my heart to protect it from the emotional agony this sentence caused. This is one painful story. I know I've said it on numerous occasions before. But it IS. *dabs at eyes*
Dean Special HEEEE. ME! I want a Dean Special. But not the pancakes. The OTHER one. Can I ? Oh please! Purdy please???? *drools*
Fine, jerk, I won’t. Phew. This sentence left me sighing in relief -at first. But then it hit me. This return to the usual Bitch-Jerk banter is sooo touching. Sam recognizes how much Dean is stretching himself to make Sam feel alright and not awkward or weak. And he rewards Dean with the desperately needed normality. But it comes out very quietly... Like a shadow of the banter it used to be. Like Sam who is only the shadow of the man he used to be. Great writing. And very touching and emotional. Again.
pink with a fluffy white ball on the back ROTFLMAO..... Hilarious. No words. Dean just hadda buy them. Seriously, it's what I'd had done for my lil sis too. You just need to annoy them once in a while. After all, that's what lil siblings are there for, to love and protect and to annoy and mock them. LOL.
thrift shop Hun, I may be over-interpreting again. But what was Dean looking for in the shop? He cuts off mid-sentence and he only does that if he has a secret or doesn't know if Sam could stomach the truth. So, I am very eager to know more on this part!
his brother rarely talked just for noise, but it certainly seemed that way Chattering Dean is almost as disturbing as the very parental and caring Dean. And it fits together. Dean wants Sam not to feel awkward. Dean wants to show Sam that he will be there no matter what and that it is OK for him. Yet still, chattering Dean is weird. Make Sam better please, I can't stand this too long. It makes me realize how sick Sam is if Dean changes his ways so completely. And I don't like that. Make Sam better soon, please.
Then he heard it, a nearly silent whisper. “Thirty-one, thirty-two…” Dean was counting it off. And Sam holding on longer because of it. Uuuugh *dies from severe hurt and broken heart* Happy now?
Sam looked up, tears were sparkling in his brother’s eyes—unshed but there. I could hear Dean think: Gonna make him better. Gonna fix him. No matter what the cost.... ugh... oh, jeez. This is sooo sad. Poor Sam, poor Dean...
there’s a mummy who knows all the people he kills, are just waiting to get torched by me HAHAHAHAHAHAAH. Thank you, Muffy. You just know when your readers need a break from all the angst and emotional trauma. Exactly the right moment. And thanks for using LedZep. AWESOME. Can just hear him. Heh. You got Dean singing twice in this chappie. *drools and hugs ya for it*
car orgasm Hahaha. Dean and cars. I had a different kind of car orgasm at that... um. Not sayin. Heeee. But you know me well enough... just use your imagination (not the virginal kind, more the smutty category...)
Tears dripped off Dean’s face and landed on Sam. Oh, that is so like NRFTW. And my own death fic. Every time I see them dying in my mind, it happens like that. The surviving sibling dripping tears on the others limp body. *weeps and sobs* *wants the boys to live a happy life but fears evil!Eric will intervene*
Sam risked a glance at Dean—his brother’s face had tears on it, he knew there were answering tears on his own. OH. GOD. Like in Heaven and Hell. Not good. Need to break here. I am all weepy. Shit. Love this chapter. But it tears me apart, Muffy.
“Don’t you say that, Sam. Don’t you ever say that.” Dean’s anger vibrated through his chest. UH. Sam just said the ONE thing Dean doesn't need to hear. Oh, Dean. I fear it must have hurt like a stab at his heart. Dean's resources must be as depleted as Sam's only he is more skilled at hiding them. Oh shit. Gonna need a new box of tissues. Remember: You promised to send Dean with tissues over! You so ow me that!
Dean met his eyes. “Yeah, Sammy, I know I can.” Oh, I know that look. Eyes blazing, hard like steel. Not allowing any other way than his. Scary. Very defiant. And very sex. *melts* And I bet he knows more than he has let on so far. I am curious. When's the next update?
Love this story, Muffy. I usually rather go for the hurt!Dean stories. But the way you hurt Sammy and how it affects my hero that is almost as unbearable as a death fic with Dean or Sam dying. Really, really emotional stuff. And brilliant writing and timing.
OK, evil!chickens of the world, tremble in fear and hide for I will review and slay thee... heh
Hugs ya big time, Ilka
Author's Response: Oh thank you *sniffff* hugest of hugs, I'm speechless Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 04:10 PM · On: Yellow Walls
Another very emotional chapter, love the yellow walls.my kitchens yellow lol.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I live in the Pacific Northwest and yellow walls make the winter seem less--well--icky Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 02:10 PM · On: Yellow Walls
Such a special opening scene when Sam woke up and realized he was home with Dean, finding solace in his brother's presence; and Dean painted the bedroom yellow because Sam had told him so long ago this felt to him like a real home not a motel, so wonderful, what a great brother! Well, there are a lot more of these lovely moments and I could go on and on and quote everything, so I leave it with very touching and amazing! And then, Sam's nightmare at the lake and finally learning what happened that night, this scared me so and from here I cried my way through it. Sam will get better, right? He has to, Dean won't let him go, just no! Fantastic chapter!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 09:38 PM · On: First Day Home
Another emotional chapter. Sam is so in a vulnerable condition and Dean is working so hard to get Sam feeling better but according to Alan, Sam's condition is not improving, no wonder that Dean is depressed. I'm so loving this story, I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 10:19 PM · On: First Day Home
Phew. I am as exhausted as Dean and Sam. A tough read. LOVE IT! What an intriguing plot. I wonder about so many things right now... Need to get organized before I quote. Nice, to be expected. Except every time it happens I panic. Aw, Dean. That man is gonna break my heart some day. He is so worried about Sammy. And seriously, so am I. Where is the usual down-to-earth, stubborn, level-headed guy I know and adore? Gone, wasted, withering. Geez. Painful.
Sam’s idiot psychiatrist Heh. Aren't they all idiots? Sorry sis, I am glad you are a psychologist and not a psychiatrist, but it still is nearly the same. They have a “map to the soul”, or so they think. They know all the places. 'Cept for the parts where it says “from here there'll be monsters...”, and still believe the earth is flat. There is so much more between heaven and hell... but those “experts”, they wouldn't dare to explore and simply shrug it off as weirdness or mental illness. No, I am not insane and hating my doctors. Just an observation. Most specialists of the psyche forget about the person they are treating, about their feelings.... um. Does this at all have anything to do with your story? Sorry, you had me wandering off... But so many things to think about... This story triggers my imagination.
Dean’s own depression and sense of helplessness dissipated a little Of course he would be depressed and feeling helpless. Dean's need to fix Sam permeates every line. And I feel the same way. I need Sammy back up and healthy. I am totally worried about him. I know you don't do death!fics. But I also know there will be a lot more pain and angst ahead of them as this is YOUR story, you evil torturer!
“DEAN!” Sam’s cry had him back in the living room in less than three seconds. “Please, no!” Sam flinched in his sleep. Oh gawd. I am starting to dread the revelations about the nightmares. They have to be very insightful though. I think this bar and the girl have something to do with Sam's illness. And by the way. What is he suffering from? A real sickness? Or a supernatural one?
“Want to tell me about it?” “No.” “What?” Dean asked. SO. NOT. A. GOOD. SIGN. It's official. Something is VERY wrong with Sam. Mortally wrong. The master of Sharing and Caring doesn't want to talk??? OH MY GOD. I have chills running up and down my spine. This creeps me out more than a monster or demon. *shivers* Btw, I said “What” only nanoseconds before I read Dean's reply, heh. I am so sucked into this story... amazing... Dean desperately trying to cheer Sam up. That is so heartbreakingly, gut wrenchingly sad. I nearly burst into tears. Dean tries to offer Sam “normal”. Normal by Winchester standards, but still. And Sam really turns into that direction, following well-known routines and even smiling at his big bro'. Oh, I nearly sobbed out of relief while a grin spread across my face when he smiled. And his “hurts” snatched the grin away. Painfully so. Leaving me breathless and biting my bottom lip. Oh, how I prayed he was okay. How I wanted him to be able at least to smile, for Christ's sake. How will he be able to fight his depression if that damned illness prevents him from smiling!? And when he has the tears in his eyes again, I went like' Oh, nononono. Please let him at least be able to smile.' Mind you, it is the freaking middle of the night again. And I spoke again. My neighbors must think I am nuts... Well, thankfully, you heard my prayer. My god. Thanks for these lines: “Hurts to laugh.” “Sorry,” Dean said. “No, Dean, it’s okay. Hurts to cry too, this is much better.” They made me feel a little better again. turtles, coots Heh. I loved the flashback. I am a real sucker for happy wee!chesters moments. I prefer them – as you did it – as flashbacks and not stand alone stories. And the coots? Hell, I was laughing hard, almost hysterically. I was so grateful for a little ease of tension. I could breathe again. “Fresh air is good”, so damn right Alan! Oh, thank you for the turtles. I LOVE turtles. Heh. Never thought I'd come across them in a fanfic though. Who'd have thought? Turtles, go figure! Chicken Another scene that made me ease up a little. Dean tying up a chicken... too awesome. *slaps thighs* And there is some double meaning in there! I will discuss that with you tomorrow, you smutty person! “Only one, the same one, over and over.” Dean sighed, heard despair in the sound. “I wake up screaming half the time. Actually screaming. I can’t do that with Sam here.” Oh shit. OH. SHIT. Now. That is just sooooooo …. I can't find words. Oh my. My poor boy. I want to hug him till he can finally let go... Oh shit. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME MUFFY? So, he is having nightmares, too? Oh the hell. He never has nightmares. Well, he does in Season 4 but he has good reasons as we all know. That means he must have reasons now, too! What has happened to him that he has nightmares? And he tries to keep them a secret. To hide his own despair form Sammy. Oh god. There, you hear that? That is the sound of my heart breaking *pling*. This is so hard. Why can't they just open up and talk about it? Of course, there would be so much less to tell in the story. But then again, my heart is being TORN TO SHREDS HERE!!!!!!!! I can't even cry! This is physical and mental agony to read. Dean walls up to keep up pretense when all he needs to do is TALK, for crying out loud. And I like this Alan character more and more every second. He speaks my mind. Jeez: You need to talk about this as much as Sam. So damn right. Good doctor. And those creatures are hard to come by! You were right and wrong, Muffy. Right because I hate this chapter. And wrong because I FRIGGING love it at the same time. AWESOME, brilliant update... gawd. I am so caught up in the whole story... wonder if I find sleep at all... Hugs ya big time! Ilka
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much hon! This story is so hard to write, but so worth it in so many ways! I loved the little memory ofthe turtles as well--and I agree with you. I like the WeeChester moments in flashbacks in larger stories mostly. Dean and Sam do need to talk, maybe it will start to ease the nightmares they are both having. I promise a little of that in the next chapter! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 03:36 AM · On: First Day Home
Hi Muffy, Just thought I would say hi and thank you again for sharing this story with us. As you might remember I had trouble when you first published this one, but doing OK right now, so really enjoying your story. You are doing a wonderful job with the brothers and their bond. I know you are also working on your new depressed/ let's torture Dean story, but would love an update on this one. Hope you are well. Until next time, take care.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love this story and how it's turning out. It feels "gentle" to me in so many ways, despite what's happened. And no worries about teh depressed Dean/torture story, it's more about Sam and Dean than the torture! Hugs. Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 05:30 PM · On: First Day Home
Awww, a sweet chapter, some lovely brother moments.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More very soon! Hugs. Muffy
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/09 02:51 PM · On: First Day Home
This has such a sad undertone and my heart clenches seeing Sam so sick (he nearly died and is not getting better, cause for endless worries!) and both so desperate. Think Dean did the only right thing to bring Sam home, his brother's love the best healing for Sam - wonderful touching scenes here!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Iknow it has a sad undertone, sometimes I find myself weeping as I write, but it's also about hope and the loving gifts that make all the difference to someone we love! Thank you again Hugs. Muffy
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:02 AM · On: Home Coming
Oh Muffy, I just came across your new stroy and I am already hooked. What happended to Sam? And Dean selling his baby? Oh no...... I had to work hard to swallow that lump that formed in my throat. You have once again created an image that touched me deeply and makes me want to reach out to the brothers. I read Ilka's review - amazing. She is spot on and I pretty much share her thoughts and feelings. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I've just posted the next chapter, I hope you like it! *hugs* It's been hard to write, this one, but I hpe everyong likes it in the end! HUgs, Muffy
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 07:34 PM · On: Home Coming
OMGOMGOMGOMG! This soooo sad, Muffy. I ... er... um... I dunno what to say! I am really touched by this story. So heartbreaking! They’d had a long one brought in, but his toes still hovered precariously close to the edge Made me smile in sad way. Poor overgrown baby bro! God, this story is unbearably sad... I am gonna repeat the word “sad” and alternate with “painful” and “heartbreaking”. That OK? Jeez, pull yourself together, woman. Dude, I am such a wussy.
morphine Aw, he hates it and still welcomes it. That is a damn dilemma! Pain does that to you, doesn't it? Poor guy. Wish I could help him. Normally, I would rather see Dean suffer but this? This is too much. Dean would wanna die instantly. Sam considers this too but then again, if sharing-caring Sam considers this how much sooner would Dean have, just because he'd feel superfluous and a burden to Sam? Aw, god, this is sad. And it reminds me of a story by neonchica, mistress of AU hurt!Dean... Painful reading, like this here.
He said you looked like Sasquatch in a stroller. Aw, so like Dean to joke about it to mask the nasty, depressing truth. And he would do everything to make their lives as normal as possible, mother-henning, protective hero of a brother who he is! Love him. Oh, how he must blame himself! He must be torturing himself for letting Sam down. Can't wait to read that. There has to be some drool in it! That makes me a really weird person. But then again, I think I am in good company! *winks*
“Sometimes I want to die, Alan,” he whispered. “I just…” The tears started. Sam tried to stop, it hurt, it always hurt when he cried. “Hurts.” Try and breathe through it, UGH! I am glad Dean didn't hear that! It would have broken his big heart. It broke my heart anyway. God, that kid is so sweet and if he hurts it is so different to a hurt!Dean. So much more gentle and quiet. You know what I mean? He … um, he tries to fight it but like anybody would. Not with that superhuman will his brother possesses when it comes to breathing through the pain. And then the doc says he should breath through it! Just like Dean would've done it if he had been hurt. Man I am rambling here... Right. Back to story. Um. Sorry.
What the hell, by the way, happened to Sam? An infection and paralyzed??? You are worse than me, woman! Love it though! And I so like the change of POV. First we get to see everything from Dean's perspective. And you know how I like Dean POV. And then it changes around and we see the same action unfold as before but the whole atmosphere is permeated with Sam instead of Dean. Love that. Great writing, Muffy. You write Dean's POV differently compared to Sam's, which is totally great as it shows in a more subtle way how truly different the brothers are! No descriptions needed, just the change. I could go on and on. But it would sound like sucking up. Totally does already... His brother’s eyes were red, a single tear had broken loose and was running down his face. OH. GOD. Just when I thought the summit of sad and depressed had been climbed (Hate hiking btw, just random, but had that image of a mountain in my head just now... never mind. It's late and I need sleep!). And there you go and write something like that. A single tear. OMFG. That is worse that sobs. I am melting here.... jeez. And I so swore I wouldn't cry!!!!
“The Impala, Dean, where is it?” Sam felt a sob building in his chest, he couldn’t breath around the ache. I sobbed. LOUD. In the freakin' middle of the freaking night! SOBBED! And it hurt. I felt exactly the same as Sam though I am not as hurt physically. But that idea of Dean selling HER, it tore me apart for a second...
“She has a good home, Sam. I checked.” Dean smiled. “She’ll be safe and loved there.” OH. DEAR. He checked on her! She'll be safe and loved there. OMG. I can't bear this. Dean without the car??? And he saw to it that she has a home, like the brothers do now. Always the caring family guy he is. SO thoughtful. And all those changes in the apartment. GAWD. I can't tell you how tough this was to read! And so REAL!
chocolate chip muffins that are nearly orgasmic Thanks for that, Muffy. Made me snort a little between sobs. Needed that humor. Just the right amount and time to put it in. Marvelous. Um, there any muffins left? I do need a little bit of soul food (sugary, fat, chocolate stuff, NOW!).
Dean really made some new friendships and he talks to people about his brother! That is so cute of him. Suddenly making friends, building a nest for them. Heh. He reminds me of a father-to-be. All this, so Sammy can feel at home and safe. AAAAAWWWW
“It’s going to be okay,” Dean said quietly. Sam could hear tears in his brother’s voice. Sam cried harder, holding on to Dean. “I promise.” Sam shook his head. “Yes, Sam.” Dean held him for another moment then gently pulled away, lowering Sam into the chair. “I’ll get a blanket.” WOW! This was possibly the saddest part in the chapter. They hold each other with Dean supporting Sam's weight and then the promise! Oh, I hope so much for your own happiness *waves fist at Muffy* that you give Sam the chance to recover. And I still wanna know what happened to him... those nightmares....
Can't wait for the next update. Awesome ride, Muffy. AWESOME.
Hugs ya, Ilka
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This story is both so hard to write and I can't wait to get to it. What happened to Sam? It's bad, very very very bad and you get to see it from both brother's POV in upcoming chapters! *sends tissues* *sends hugs* *sends tebby bear to comfort you* Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 06:40 PM · On: Home Coming
nonnono! had a horrible sinking sensation all through this chapter, then you went and made it come true! poor dean, poor sam... poor impala! i'll nag 'someone' to beg you for more chapters, if that'll work?! real tearjerker, hun, beautiful.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 03:17 PM · On: Home Coming
That was a great chapter. OMG!Sam can't walk and he's in terrible pain. Now, they're living in an apartment and Dean sold the impala to buy an hospital bed and furniture for a therapy room, etc... Dean is blaming himself for Sam's condition, can't wait to know what happened. I'm looking forward to your next chapter Muffy.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, hon! Dean does blame himself and he has been working so hard to make this perfect for Sam! The next chapter is up! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 01:07 PM · On: Home Coming
Ohh, what happened to Sam that he's in this bad state, he's in so much pain, it's heartbreaking! Started to cry when Dean showed Sam their bedroom (two beds! it really is like this, one not thinkable without the other), saddening beyond words but in such a wonderful way; just hope you will update soon, won't be able to stop thinking about this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! If it makes you feel better (at least for a few minutes) I just updated! Hugs *sends tissues* Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 11:54 AM · On: Home Coming
A wonderful chapter, we all know Dean would do any thing for Sam but selling the Impala is so sad, you made me cry,Sam must be very ill.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, Sam is very ill, it will be sowly revealed just how bad it was and is! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 11:06 AM · On: The Impala
Short chapter but you got me already hooked. What happened to Sam, it seems he's been in hospital for a long time if Dean talked about home and where's the impala. I'm so intrigued, I want more already.
Author's Response: Than you so much! Yes, Sam has been in the hospital for a long time. And he's not out of the woods yet! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 04:08 AM · On: The Impala
When Dean really replaced the Impala, Sam's condition must be very serious; wonderful gesture and no doubt however Dean would do this for his little brother! As always just love the way you describe the strong affection these two brothers have for each other - "He stopped at the set of double doors, his heart aching a little - it did every day at this point", very lovely and so sad! Great beginning!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This story is both so hard to write and so rewarding. I love the way the brothers are in it. I hope you like the rest! HUgs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 03:31 AM · On: The Impala
hmm, mysteriouser and mysteriouser... what's going on with sammy? where's the Impala? and what's the suprise? and why do i get the feeling this story is going to leave me down on my knees begging for answers?! great start!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 03:12 AM · On: The Impala
hmm, mysteriouser and mysteriouser... what's going on with sammy? where's the Impala? and what's the suprise? and why do i get the feeling this story is going to leave me down on my knees begging for answers?! great start!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Poor Sammy, things aren't going well for him! You might be on your knees, sorry *hugs sends tissues* Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 05:32 PM · On: The Impala
Great start,you've got me hooked,i can't wait to find out whats happened.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I hope you like the rest *bites nails* Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 05:31 PM · On: The Impala
Aw Muffy! You and your cliffie's! This is torture! Tell me NOW: Where the '&%$ is the car? Sam must be in mortal danger if Dean is willing to sell the Impala! Oh gosh. I can feel it. This is gonna be a really great story. Again. How do you do that? I am hooked after less than 800 words???? Hugs, Ilka
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Yeah, Den selling the car is pretty huge, isn't it? HUgs, Muffy
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