:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 10:11 PM · On: meeting a new friend

I like it. You should keep writing.

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 10:08 PM · On: the hunt is on

Interesting, good beginning.
Is Mr. White and lackeys time travel? I didn´t know they could that.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 04:08 PM · On: meeting a new friend

I really like the plot of your story. Have you thought about getting a beta to clean up the punctuation, grammar, and capital letter mistakes? The story is really fascinating and I think you would have more reviews if you had someone beta the story for you. Most writers on the boards have betas. Looking forward to the next update from your story.

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 05:45 PM · On: the hunt is on

it's a promising story but maybe you could line up the sentence a bit more and check you're spelling . I know it's sometimes hard I had to learn too but it's worth the effort ! Don't let me put you down because this story has a great creepy context...I'm looking out for the next chapter !

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