Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 06:05 AM · On: Black King and Black Queen Attack

Holy crap the last 2 chapters have been great..Just when I thought he was getting a break you throw a twist in..lol..Awesome story..sorry it took me so long to review..been a way for a couple of days..Looking forward to more..now i'm off to finish On the Third Day..Thanks for writing..

Author's Response:

Hi Mustang

Thank you! I've got another twist for poor Dean coming right up and a shock for Sam. Hope you like.

Cheers, Mary xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 08:09 PM · On: Black King and Black Queen Attack

Mary

what a great chapter.  Dean tortured Jessica..will Sam forgive him???
can't wait for the next chapter.

i think Castiel needs to get involved.

Renee

Author's Response:

HI there

Will Sam forgive his brother or will he need just a little payback.

Funny you mentioning Castiel.....

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 12:18 PM · On: Black King and Black Queen Attack

Oh that was just nasty, you evil woman,but i still can't wait for more lol.

Author's Response:

HI Lindsay

Thank you. I am nasty and evil but you love me really. lol!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 07:09 AM · On: Black King and Black Queen Attack

Great chapter, I'm trying to answer your question but I just have too... I think as things go Ruby comes in a close second, so you get the top prize, How could you do that to the boys?  What is Sam going to think  of Dean torturing Jess?  Can Dean hate himself anymore than he does already? Please update again soon , can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

That's alright, I kinda hoped for the top prize, means I'm doing something right!

Hope you like the update, Mary x

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 06:00 PM · On: White Takes The Black Pawns

This is an awesome story! When Robert's in Dean's head and he starts saying how much time he was in hell and that he's sorry... just heartbreaking... I loved it.

But then you leave us hanging there! What is Alastair going to show Sam?? And did Robert's plan work? It did, right? it had to... right?? *starts to panic*

Can't wait to find out, I'm on the edge of my seat!

Love the tittles of the chapters by the way:) 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you! I'm glad you liked poor Dean there, I liked that bit too.

Sorry for the cliffie but the next one is worse so sorry again in advance! Robert's plan is working but Alastair is about to throw a spanner in it!

Glad you liked the titles - I was trying to teach my son how to play chess when I was starting to write this, can you tell?? lol

Cheers Mary  x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 08:26 AM · On: White Takes The Black Pawns

Awesome chapter... I really love Robert- its like he's a more sensitiveJohn and Bobby combined...

But just when I think he's gonna manage to get Dean free... you leave it hanging like that.... evilevilevil woman! LOL!

 Can't wait till next time..

Author's Response:

Hi Tree

Thanks for the review, I like Robert too, I love Bobby so i'm glad that you see a bit of him in Robert, and John. Based him on John's dad side that we don't see that often but we know is there.

Dean was almost there wasn't he? Alastair is about to be very mean.

I like evil...that's what I was aiming for. lol. If you think that was bad I apologise for the next chapter in advance!!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 07:08 PM · On: White Outlines A Plan Of Attack

Great chapter, glad that Dean finally got some reprieve from the pain, Hope that this Robert Campbell can help our boy. Please update again soon, Can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Glad you like, Robert will help but Alastair ain't finished yet!

Cheers, Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 05:27 PM · On: Check

Well it's going to have to be Ruby lol.

Author's Response:

HI there

Poor Ruby, but I really do hate her now. She'll live a bit longer in this, I may need her!

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 05:57 AM · On: Check

Great update, nice twist..I knew Ruby was evil..lol..Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Now I didn't say she was evil!!

Glad you like my dear!

Mary xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/09 08:43 AM · On: White Outlines A Plan Of Attack

Brilliant chapter, very interesting.

Author's Response:

HI Lindsay

Thank you kindly, glad you enjoyed.

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 12:53 PM · On: Knight Moves

Great chapter..Very heartbreaking for Sam having to watch Dean go thru everything..I hope you have a nasty end for Alastair..Thanks for writing

Author's Response:

HI Jennifer

Thanks! Was as much torture for Sam as for Dean only less painful, a nasty end for Alastair....maybe??

Cheers, Mary xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 02:30 PM · On: Knight Moves

What a treat, three intense chapters back to back. Dean's torture was so hard to stomach, I'm glad that one soul was on his side. Poor Sam, to witness Dean's agony and then be forced to leave him. Hope that Robert Campbell is a good guy and is there to help DEan. Terrific work so far Mary, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks for the review. Glad that you liked these chapters. A may have a job soon for the little soul on Dean's side. Robert is a good guy don't worry.

Thanks again, cheers Mary xx