Well that was another story I just didn't want to tear my eyes away from, only when they started turing the same shape as my laptop screen.

I did enjoy this one, I liked the scenes when you played inside Dean's poor head. It was very interesting that you explained more about the souls that Dean would have tortured in Hell, giving us more to think about, in the main storyline on the show, because I was wondering about the souls he would have tortured on the show and this was a pretty good perspective on that.

I liked the introduction of Robert, I enjoyed reading his character as your story progressed, it was nice to see another family member that wasn't totally in the imediate Winchester circle. Thats another thing I have wondered about is how big the family is from the shows perspective, you know where are the Aunts, Uncles, cousins etc? I really did like him and the connection you gave him to Dean that was a nice touch, because it makes it feel like Dean isn't alone with his pain and torture anymore, I know that sounds bad that someone else felt it, because I wish they hadn't but at least Dean knows someone who understands some of his pain. I would love to see Robert turn up in some more hunts, maybe after this experience with the two of them Dean could connect to Roberts feelings in a small way as a residual side-effect, not a full-blown power but something to come from their shared experience. Maybe we could see Dean sensing Robert in trouble or something like that in the future, who knows? :o)

Gosh and the chocie you made Sam make, that was awful, I really wasn't expecting him to put his revenge against Lilith before the wellfare of his brother and sending him back to hell rather than Ruby. Poor Dean feeling abdandoned, but I could almost feel the light in his eyes on my screen when Sam showed up to take him back and he realised Sam had come for him, that was wonderful. The twist with Ruby going into Dean was fun to read too, the thought of her inside Dean made me cringe, hehehe.

Nicely written and I could feel their thoughts and emtions jump out of the screen at me, I love your descriptions.

Once again I loved the lighter note at the end, they always need that and I am pleased that Dean forgave Sam, there was never any question he would, but I know it still hurt him, nice to see them together again and been given the chance to talk on the road to sort through things.

Thanks for another great read, I loved it. I am off to find another one to sink my teeth into. I hope you don't mind. :o)

Gemma

P.S. Please don't stop writing. ;o)

Author's Response:

Hi Gemma

Gosh what a lovely review. Thank you very much. Sorry about the delay in replying. It's been busy here.

I wasn't sure about this story when I was writing it, it is kinda strange and for some reason I struggle with S4 stuff but reading it through again I was happier with it and your review made me smile.

I liked Robert, he was the support in this story, rock solid against the odds. as for him turning up in other hunts, I just might!

I was horrid to Dean in this but I was worse to Sam I think! I made him do some nasty things to his brother, poor soul.

I always try to lighten my stories at the end and Ruby being in Dean was too good to miss so I'm pleased you liked this little bit, it was fun.

Dean does forgive his brother at lot, but it is just who he is.

Cheers and thank you again, Mary xx

Mary..loved the story..the scene at the end made me feel so much better about the guys..

I totally thought you were going to make Ruby evil..but you didn't..I still liked it thou..having her take over Dean..didn't see that coming..lol..I liked Robert..glad they went back to Bobby's to recover..Are you going to do a sequel kind of thing to this one?

Thanks for writing..Speak to you soon.. 

Author's Response:

HI Jennifer

Thanks for that. I needed to let them by brothers again at the end.

I swithered with Ruby but in the end I needed her to help so I put her on the good side!

Don't know about a sequel, I kinda left so I could though, didn't I?

Cheers, Mary xx

Mary,

great job.  i really enjoyed this one.

poor Dean suffered harshly.

you had me pissed off at Sam and Ruby big time.

like Robert and the fact that he could help and lets not forget Castiel; glad he was in the story as well.

hope a new story will be up soon.

Renee

Author's Response:

HI Renee

Thanks. I was pissed at Ruby and Sam too but the did help in the end so I'll let them off.

I liked Robert, might use him again, develop him more next time, and Cas is a welcome addition too.

Cheers Mary xx

Another good one, thanks for writing.

I loved the last two lines of the chapter.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks Lindsay.

Glad you liked the end, I did too!

Cheers Mary x

Loved the story. And yes, Dean would forgive Sam anything.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. Dean would wouldn't he, I only hope that that happens on the show, that they forgive one another!

Cheers Mary xx

Great chapter, So are Sam and Dean friends again, after Sam chose wrong and sent Dean back to hell instead of Ruby, How can Sam keep choosing her over his brother?  Will they stay together after this fight or go their separate ways?  Looking forward to the next chapter, Update soon. Thanks

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Dean will forgive his brother because that's just what he does. Sam really has to pick the right side, doesn't he?

Thanks and cheers Mary x

Great chapter, I hope Sam is happy he caused all this trouble by choosing Dean and sending him back to hell instead of the b**** Ruby.  Now their all in trouble. Please update again soon, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

HI there

Sam has caused a lot of trouble but he'll make up for it.

Cheers and thanks, Mary x

What an intense chapter. Poor Dean. Hope it's going to work and that Sam and Robert'll reach Dean but will he ask for help. Amazing work so far Mary, I'm glad that your story grown legs, lol.

Author's Response: HI Oceane

Thank you, glad you liked.

Not much more to go now but then that's what I thought at CH8!!

Thanks again, Mary x

Brilliant chapter, but will Dean listen when he knows that Sam allowed him to be taken instead of his precious Ruby?  Will Dean ever trust his brother again, Please update again soon, can't wait.

Author's Response: Hi Maureen

Thanks as always. Dean kinda has to ask for help on this one but that doesn't mean things are fixed between them....yet.

Cheers Mary xx

Poor Dean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope he asks for help. 

Author's Response: HI there

He kinda has to, doesn't he?

Cheers Mary x

Wow I am wow!!! Damn Ruby and I wanta kick sam right now. I hope he kills her... No let dean kill her.  Wow Great work edge  og my seat here. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Sam trusted Ruby and it looks as if it was misplaced. Sam or Dean killing Ruby?? Hmmm?

Glad you like! Thanks Mary x

Mary,

oh Ruby so needs to die!!!!!!!!!!!

Dean back in hell; lets hope Castiel helps.

another great chapter.

Renee

Author's Response:

Hi

Poor Ruby and she's such a nice person as well, don't know why everyone does like her! *smiles*

Sam has to get Castiel to help, but will he? mmmm??

Thanks, Mary x