Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
So Seth, are you gonna find a miracle cure or is it pitchforks? You like a bit of a cliffhanger I see? better come resolve it soon... Bird x
Author's Response: Dude, I thought you had my back! What about finding a way to save the leg? Looks like I am doomed to the pitchforks then! Cliffhangers. me? Nah, that's just my middle name ;) Resolution on its way, not sure how much everyone will like it, but...Anyhow, thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hey Seth. The bit of character enhancement with hank and his 'sarah' is a nice touch. leaves me wondering what the story there was. Your Bobby is clearly very angry at the end as it take a great Deal to have Bobby be so direct with a stranger. So let me go see if we save that leg? bird x
Author's Response: Yeah I figured it would be a good idea to give a little back ground on Hank to explain his reactions a bit as he is pretty intense. I figure my Bobby is pretty true to canon, these boys are the closest thing he has to family. Hey if you find a way let me know, I'd love to find a realistic way to save his leg...and my neck from those pitchfork weilding Dean Girls! Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hey Seth Gee you don't let up do you? Poor boys! i like your chief, he's a good guy. Umm, got a bit confused, In the first section, was he breathing spontaniously? If he was would you intubate and bag him? I guess he's deteriorating so lost spontanious respiration? Bird x
Author's Response: Just keeping it real, ya know! Glad you like the chief. He was breathing spontaneously when they extricated him and nasotracheal intubation is preferred in breathing patients and that;s what they've done here. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hey Seth. Oh dear they are in a bad way the pair of them aren't they. I take it you're used to a snow environment? Or do you just have a penchant for snow vehicles? "Both of us?" Harvey whipped round to stare at Harvey - Seth i think this should read 'Sam whipped round to stare at Harvey.' You might want to edit it. Bird x
Author's Response: Yup the boys are in a bad way...but isn't that how you fan girls like'em? As for the snow environment, I LIVE for snow! Skiing, hockey, snowboarding...I am a winter sports kinda guy! Thanks for the heads up on that typo...you know how it is! Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh poor Sam , It will kill Dean if he lose' s his leg, please be kind with them , great up date..........
Author's Response: I will be as kind as I can, darlin'. But I have to keep this realistic. I truly believe that Dean is stronger than this and he will overcome this obstacle. He is a Winchester after all ;) Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 3
hey Seth. okay so its short but it moves the story along nicely. Are these abdominal injuries or chest cavity - the pine branch ones I mean? Bird x
Author's Response: Sometimes good things come in small packages then? ;) As for the injuries...trust that all things will be reavealed, darlin', just keep reading! ;) Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
hey Seth. okay so I was interested to know why they were on the mountain but I seeing the wendigo hunt now. So how bad is Sam hurt? Is he gonna be able to hold out till he finds Dean? On ot next chapter Bird x
Author's Response: Yup, those Wendigos love the cold weather. Sam is hurt pretty bad...more than he is letting on of course, true to Winchester form! Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Seth. humm a guy wirter...cool! Liking Avalanche...you worried Sam feels nicely in character, anxious but taking no nonsence from the authorities. Reading on. Bird x
Author's Response: Yup, I'm a dude! Apparently, that's an annomoly among fanfiction especially on this site! I'm glad you feel I have a good grasp on Sam. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hmmmmm.....well the leg's not gone yet, Seth so I'm gonna hold off on the manhunt for a little longer....great update - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks for holding off, darlin'. I'm afraid you probably won't want to after next chapter...I just have this thing for realism, ya know? I refuse to write fluff. Thanks for continuing to read and for your reviews! Seth
Reviewer: DeeUnNatural (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm a Dean Girl but POOR SAMMY!!!!
Author's Response: Oh man, have I converted a Dean Girl to a Sam Girl? Is that a bad thing? As long as you're liking it I guess I'm happy. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
Lemme say this...accurate sucks! LOL that being said...I understand why you are doing it...but it doesn't make me like it any better... I guess if you can show me that Dean, will end up still being Dean in the end...That after much angst and hard work he will be the same bad assed Dean he was before all this! So a little GRRR! for good measure...keep it coming Seth!
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes reality does suck out loud, darlin'. From experience, I know people who have had amputations and still ski, run and lead normal lives, so I have no doubt that Dean can go on and do the same thing. Seth
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
Well I don't have any pitchforks, and I don't want to kill you....but you better update EVERYDAY. And no more cliffe's! Haha. :)
Author's Response: I'm afraid I can't promise anything for the cliffies, my middle name is cliffhanger after all ;) Glad you don't want to kill me though and I will keep the updates coming as quick as I can. I mean the snow out here is too awesome to resist and my girl likes me to spend time with her ;) Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh, man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm crying here...but seriously, you can't let them take his leg but hmmm, can't figure out what could happen. I hope you update again soon. Great story and weaving!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think realistically there is no other way to go but amputation. I mean if you can think of a believable non-cheesy way to get Dean outta this unscathed then I am all ears! Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
Seth, you are right i have my pitch fork and boiling lava all ready for you!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy crap that had me in tears. poor Sam and Bobby what a terrible thing to have to agree to do. and lets not forget Dean. great story so far; has my emotions going every where. Renee
Author's Response: So, you're liking it??? Didn't mean to make you cry, darlin'. Come here, I'll hug ya and make it better. ;) Just wanting to be realistic. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! I didn't expect Bobby to be so harsh. When I think about it, that's exactly how he'd react to Dean's bad news but at first it took me back. I love the insight we get into Hank's life and the motives he had for becoming a member of search and rescue. Poor Hank! It's obvious that with every victim, he relives the loss of his wife.
Author's Response: Glad you agreed with that portrayal of Bobby. I really felt it rang true with how much he cares for the boys. Also glad you are enjoying the insight into Hank. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 5
Now they're really screwed! If she only knew how well the patient on which she worked followed orders.
Author's Response: Yeah Dean could give her a run for her money in that department, though if it's to save someone Dean would break all the rules. Glad you're liking. Thaks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow! They're close enough that Dean can hear them talking. They must be right on top of him. That means that the dogs weren't necessarily sniffing Sam and Hank but perhaps they had Dean's scent.
Author's Response: Yup really close! Glad you are still enjoying. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh no!!! Now they're both screwed! Not even the fear of John Winchester broke through Dean's battered mind and body. "...and the wall of white rapidly faded to the inky blackness of unconsciousness." Simply put yet so powerful.
Author's Response: Yeah they both are in a bad way, and you know Dean is if his father's diatribe can't get him moving! Glad you are enjoying...more to come! Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 2
I guess this is one of those rare occasions when Bon Jovi is acceptable. :) I like the names you chose for the dogs, especially Hunter. Cool! I had to grab a blanket off the sofa to wrap up in. Your description of Dean's predicament had me chilled. Just so you know, I live in Iowa and this has been predicted to be the coldest week of the year for us. Maybe not the best idea to read a story entitled Avalanche.
Author's Response: Yes Bon Jovi does have it's time and place! Glad you're still enjoying, Hearing that the descriptions have left you chilled is an awesome compliment. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful beginning! I love it when a story jumps right into the action! The circle of Dean's thoughts---finding Sammy to Sammy finding him gave me a moment to pause. How would you know what to do? I guess since he's stuck, he just has to hope Sam finds him.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the beginning. I am an action kinda guy. Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 6
If they take his leg, I am coming after you seth, I swear it, pitchfork and all. On a positive note, well-written. :D
Author's Response: Umm, thanks?? I guess it's a good thing that I have motivated you to pitchfork clenching and you are still saying it's well written. ;) Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hey Seth, first of all congrats on this being a featured story. I'm glad you have decided to post here. Wow, what an awesome chapter. I love the character Hank and his fight for Dean. And Bobby is there - yay. Just gotta love Bobby. I can totally understand his outburst, but oh man, if you want to be as realistic as possible -and that's what you sadi!- I'm afraid things might not look good for Dean. Please don't make us wait too long :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats! Glad you saw the realism in Bobby's reaction and that you are loving Hank. Yeah I really want to be as realistic as possible and I know some won't agree, but it's the only way I know how to write. I refuse to have a bandaid solution to this. More to come real soon. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/09 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ouch poor Hank! Gotta say, I am not loving the idea of Dean losing his leg...even I am HATING it! I know you are trying to be realistic...so I guess I will forgive you...I mean if Dean lives that is! lol I liked how we are getting into Hanks head a little more this chapter...got me intrigued by the whole Sarah thing...how did she die and all... All in all a good chapter...but seriously...DO NOT take Dean's leg off!!! grr ;) Gen p.s. congrats on being featured this story really does deserve it!
Author's Response: Hey, darlin', still growling at me I see. Thanks, I was pretty blown away that my story made a feature. Yeah, about the leg, I really think that Dean is strong enough to overcome any sort of obstacle, and I'm just not willing to sell him short. Glad you are still reading. Seth
Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 6
Dang! Thank goodness Dean was saved but....what's to become of him? Dang! Bobby was rough on the guy....that's not like the Bobby we love....but I'm loving the imagery you paint. Great writing....looking forward to finding out how our boys are doing.
Author's Response: Funny I think that's exactly how Bobby would react in this situation. It's a normal human response to want to blame someone else. His words were harsh but not out of character for the situation. I'm glad you are enjoying there is more to come. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
“You see that damn flat line,” He jabbed one of the paddles toward the screen, “that's telling me to say fuck the job an' try an' save a life – an' if you weren't such a cold-hearted bitch, you'd feel the same way.” - hehehehe, way to tell it like it is Hank. And whoo-friggin'-hoo, you've gone and brought Bobby into it. Just perfect. Hanks a great OC, and I love his thoughts about his wife. Congrats on making the featured, Seth, it's well deserved.
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats, I'm really stoked about being featured on my first story! I'm glad you're liking Hank and the back story there and of course I had to bring in Bobby! Thanks for the review! Seth
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