Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hey Seth. Well you're right, it's feasible that Dean could return to their lifestyle and its good to give people hope. Brashear is inspirational isn't he? Off to next chapter. Bird x
Reviewer: emptyspaces11 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/09 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
Very good the story. I can feel the angst, the urgency, I can feell all the emotions, Chapter one and two were brillant. Congratulations.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 12
Marvelous chapter! Very gritty and touching! The story of Hank's accident, listening to his wife die, was powerful!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
Inspirational! The human spirit is incredible and makes miracles happen every day. Thanks for the picture of Carl Brashear and for Sam's words of encouragement and faith in Dean. I can't wait to see them kick some wendigo ass!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
I never thought of it before but those physical therapists have to be gutsy people. They're dealing with all sorts of grief and anger. Great job with the therapy! It sounded realistic to me.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
It's so sad seeing the two brothers at such odds with one another. You do an excellent job peeling away all the walls so we can see Dean's emotions and his reactions to Sam. Dean's words that hunting was the only thing he was fighting for was a shocker! In the past, it would have been Sammy.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love the way you wrote this! I was shocked that Dean actually lost his leg. I thought that some thing miraculous would happen and the anti-biotics would work, or Bobby would find some charm or potion. It's so much better this way! Having Hank have a prosthetic leg was brilliant! I've been wondering what injuries he'd sustained in the accident that took his wife's life but I never suspected this! The emotional turmoil between Sam and Dean was incredible, and so accurately depicted. You've stayed so true to their characters. And at the end when Dean asks for help---glo-ri-ous! That one moment shows the true strength of Dean Winchester and you know he's going to live.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 7
Fantastic!! What a hard decision to have to make! You've protrayed the grief and the guilt perfectly. Thank you for letting us slip into Bobby and Sam's heads.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 12
Brilliant chapter, well i think Dean's met his match in Monica, she's a great character.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
Hopefully Dean putting his well-being in someone else's hands is a large step forward not to be followed by two steps back. Still looking forward to more of this story.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 12
The delay is excused... lol. Seriously, great update Seth. I can so picture stubborn Dean thinking he can do it different, better, faster and without all the efforts every other patient needs to take when battling this fate. Well, I guess he's wrong. Love the character Monica! The way you describe Dean is spot on. Looking forward as to how he will get "moving" again.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
Dean heard the door open and then close a few moments later, and cursed under his breath. Sam had only been trying to help, but in doing so he had drawn everyone's attention to them. Complete strangers who were supposed to be recovering from their own injuries were now staring at him. Pitying him. Their eyes burning holes through the empty space where is leg use to be. - I so picture Dean like this...good job ;) Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
Dean swallowed hard; Sam's conviction that he could no longer be a hunter leaving him as cold inside as he had felt buried beneath the mountain of snow. “In that case you should have just left me buried beneath that damn avalanche because it's the only thing I know how to do – the only thing I wanna do, an' it's the only thing I'm fighting for at the moment.” - Aw...that's rough. Sorry haven't been by for awhile, but well life you know ;) Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 11
After reading about Carl Brashear, i understand more about why you believe that Dean can return to hunting,i believe he can as well, looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11
Still on board Seth and enjoying this story a lot! I can only repeat I am gad you stayed true to your words and kept this story as realistic as possible. I could have shaken Sam for trying to ruin Dean's hopes but I loved him the more for turning around and telling Dean about Carl Brashear and encouraging him by stating "... we are gonna hunt again". So we finally get to know a little bit more as to why the Winchesters were in the area in the first place. I am looking forward to Dean getting back "on his feet" and the boys getting back to hunting. If one can do it - it's the stubborn and determined older Winchester. Good job Seth!
Author's Response: Thanks for your continued support. Yeah Sam redeemed himself a little in this chapter, didn't he? This is definitely an ongoing hunt as the Wendigo they killed doesn't seem to be the only monster in the area. You are most definitely right if there is someone who can bounce back from this injury it's Dean. Wiith that stubbornness and iron will of his there is no way he can be beat. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter,it's gonna be tough going for both Dean and Sam,but Winchesters are tough lol.
Author's Response: That they are, Darlin'. I'm glad you are seeing what I am doing here. Showing off the Winchester strength and resolve in the face of adversity. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
Awwww. That's really sad, and now he has to go face Sammy. I feel horrible for him. Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: It's a slow-going process. Of course Dean is not eactly a patient guy. I think that Dean thinks he's failing, but Sam wouldn't necessarily see it that way. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
You certainly know how to convey Dean's sheer frustration at his situation, and also his Winchester stubborness. I feel for Sam in his inability to help in any way. If only Winchester brothers went in for honest communication but then that would border on chick flick moments and we know they don't do them. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Yup, no chickflick moments. I'm glad that I am getting the Winchester stubbornness right. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
Aw, man...poor Dean! Poor Sam (the guilt). How are you going to work this one out? You're killing me here with the angst! Thank you for updating so quickly...us fanfiction fans really appreciate not to be left hanging!
Author's Response: The angst, the guilt, I thought you Dean girls lived for this stuff. I don't think you have to worry about the boys though they always seem to work things out. I'll do my best to keep up the pace. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
It sounds a little off when Dean calls his brother "Sammy" when he is angry. He would more likely say "Sam" rather than using the endearment. (just my opinion....it was bugging me while I was reading) Love the story. Keep up the good work!:)
Author's Response: I appreciate your opinion, Darlin'. I have gone back and kinda checked on it since I saw your review and he does call Sam, Sammy when he is angry as well as an endearment. Actually, since Dean knows Sam hates it when he calls him that...I think he would use it here. Thanks for bringing it to my attention because I do want to get things about Sam and Dean as accurate as I can. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hey Seth. This is hard to read cause Dean's frustration is well captured. So I still don't love ya for chopping his leg off but this is well observed. bev
Author's Response: Three reviews in a row! I'm feelin' special! To hear that this was hard to read because the frustration was well-captured is a really good compliment...I think. Aww, Darlin' I know all you Dean girls are upset about the leg, but I really wanted a chance to show how strong Dean is. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
hey Seth. yup anger, rage, frustration, I can see Dean going through all those. And who has he got to be angry at besides himself? Sam of course. Nicely potrayed. Reading on Bev
Author's Response: Thanks Bev. Glad you think I am getting Dean's emotions right. And yeah poor Sam is gonna bear the brunt of his brother's anger. Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 8
So Seth. Chopped his leg off huh? Well I figured you would! I worked in rehab with amputees for years so will be interested to see where you take it. bev
Author's Response: Looks like you know me pretty well. You worked in rehab...hope I get this right then! Maybe I'll come to you for pointer ;) Thanks for the review! Seth
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow! I was not expecting that reaction from Sam! Though it does make sense that he would want to keep Dean out of harms way...but it won't help Dean be less angry that Sam doesn't think he can get back to hunting. Very serious chapter...though you did have me chuckiing with the salt and burn his foot comment...and then the batman comment! Too funny Dude! Well I'm still not happy about the leg but I do think that you have accurately captured Dean's anger and that you will bring Dean back to the point where he wiill be hunting again...I am putting my faith in you here Seth...don't make me growl...
Author's Response: LOl, I think Sam would want Dean to be safe and fear that hunting would not be an option anymore. I've got to admit I did love the foot comment so you have me grinning like a dang fool. Thanks for putting your faith in me, hope I don't disappoint. Seth
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
Excellent chapter, you keep on fighting Dean, i just hope he's going to let Sam help soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm sure Dean will keep fighting, it's really all he knows. As for letting Sam in, we know he will eventually, but it's definitely gonna take some time. Thanks for the review! Seth
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