Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed)
04/01/09 02:43 PM · On:
wow you are a REALLY goood poetry writer...I reallt liked the last line, this was by far my favorite:)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot I do the best I can , poetry is some kind of playing field and I just love to play !
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed)
04/01/09 01:30 PM · On:
That was really, really well done. I don't know how you managed to write something that scans so well when English isn't your first language, especially something that adheres strictly to the rhyme scheme. Seriously, the meter is almost flawless.
You'll want to change "freight" to "fright," though.
Again, well done! I really liked this.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much , it takes a lot of effort and a hole lot of paper and sleepless nights. I love writing poems and somehow the words just come to me , I also have a little help from my brand new dictionary . I find writing a story so much harder , it needs more words . In a poem you can walk upon different paths and it all is magical and meaningful! Thanks a lot , now I know I'm doing okay
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
04/01/09 06:47 AM · On:
Author's Response: Thank you very much !!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed)
04/01/09 03:34 AM · On:
So wonderful you wrote this - in your unique way - about Anna and Dean; Anna in every sense was a blessing for Dean, without her he truly would have been lost, loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks doll , to describe the love he felt for an angel I needed to find words that we don't normally use . I'm glad you got it and thanks again for being a fan ! AND THE STARS !